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The girl next door - Ch 103 - pg 108; note pg 109 (Page 52)

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
i can't respond... 

you need to update ASAP... seriously. 


i keep coming back... GAHHH! i feel like my heart just broke  I NEED THEM TO FIX THIS!! (THEM=YOU!!!) 

you are going to push this for the 'month' of prep for the event aren't you? oh man...i am killing my self. 


Edited by bushrayou - 23 July 2011 at 9:22pm

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged

Firstly... just wow... This FF just left me in awe...

Fantabulous ff... & very very well written...
 
"The girl next door" ... Such a common sentence... And from the title it seemed like a simple ff... But I was way wrong, it may be a simple on but you have written so gracefully, you turned a simple ff into something much more... Its really remarkable... Smile
 
Coming to the character...
 
... I'm not really fan of reading anything else than MN but there are stories that i've read and loved that had original names... & this one just got added in the list... For once I'm grateful you choose to write with orginal names ratherthan from a show... Because I wouldn't have read it if it was written on any tv couple (except mn).
 
Keerti - I loved this character, somehow I can related to her in many ways... and I can see myself in the things she does and the way she thinks... You described her character with utter perfection...
 
Rohan - At the very start I thougt he would be a minor character some normal flirt... and a misunderstandig or two and he woul.d be gone.. or put to side... Buit I was wayy to wrong.. I'm really happy I was...
God! He's really an angel...  So very different from what he seemed like..  He doesn't seem real at all... He was surely something... Embarrassed & as many other readers of urs I'm also in Rohan's fan club... His every gesture is so sweet, and meaningful... No wonder Keerti fell for him... Day Dreaming
 
Sharan - What can I say, I thought he might be trouble at first... But he's also a sweetheart... And a  true friend... He's simply awesome... Approve 
 
Naina - Maybe the most misunderstood girl in the whole ff, poor girl...LOL But she's a sweet girl, and I think Keerti & Naina will be good friend in due time... because they can related in my matter... one of them being... Truly, Deeply, Madly in love with Rohan... OuchSmile
 
Aditya & Simran - The cutest couple ever... Both of them are sweethearts... Embarrassed I don't know what more to say... 
 
Mira Aunty - Mira aunty seeme like a complete sweetheart... she was truly an angel... and the best person Keerti could meet when she started her journey... Although I still don't understand her e-mail that she sent to Keerti long back... its still a mystery and I hope it will come out soon...
 
Coming to the  current track... its quite intreresting how it all will be solved... I feel so bad for Keerti going through so much... at least she had sharan by her side... Smile & she fainted I hope everything is alright with her... & I can't wait for the moment when the news will reach Rohan... Embarrassed 
 
Anyways do continue soon... & Pleasee PM me next time you update, I can afford to miss out on a awesome ff like  this..
 
- I'll end my speech here, hope you didn't get bored... :)
 
-Laiba-
 


Edited by .SilentPrincess - 24 July 2011 at 3:29am

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 5:26am | IP Logged
dol, wht is this yaar . what to comment .don't know . feeling very restless, will wait for u to continue  and unleash the story ahead .
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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Confusion,Guilt,Anger,Concern and above all Silence have lead to great chaos out dere...

every1 is deep diving in an emotional ocean ...But is dis Silence ,d Silence before storm????
i so want mess to clear up and every1 needs to get  enlightened regarding d clear picture...

update soon...
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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
No WAy... Keerti...!
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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dolphinUSA

Originally posted by nikki.171

No WAy... Keerti...!

 
Meaning?
Meaning.. Keerti faints in Sharanz arms -> Rohan sees -> more misunderstnadings ->Rookie farthar apart . Plus, Poor Keerti! Ouch

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