Awwh It was Adorable! I loved how put this through...It was just beautiful! The starting was one thing that I loved the most,Riddhima watching her parents sit and hold each other in the porch swing in silence..Beautiful. I loved how you described Abhay,and her love for him.
The next part was quite a blow but it was astoundingly well-written, that was showing in your words. You described her turmoil wonderfully. I loved it. And Ofcourse Armaan was right in his way, asking her if she even wanted to give them a chance. The thought,picturisation and the end was So good...Loved every touch of it <3
Lovely OS Aanya, do write well Soon!
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