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OKAYY honestly Aanya, I don't know what to say about the last part. You have written it immensely well and it surprises me that this story got over so soon :( I would have loved to read more, but maybe the story has got its justice. The part was so so well written. There are hardly a few people who can write action so well in words, and the whole bit between Armaan and Dmitri's men was so exciting, and well described that I could actually imagine it like I was watching an action flick.
🤣 Nikki's character in it was so funny, picked up from JWM eh 😉? It suited the situation really well and one could see why Armaan needed her the moment he smiled between her rambling.
I love how you took the story forward in leaps and got them together in a very simple manner, where there was no high point drama or climax getting them together in just one moment, but eventually and gradually over a period of time.
The kind of situations they faced, it would be unusual if they would be back together in a matter of minutes.
I love the way you express each emotion Aanya, and the highlight is the way you describe anything.
AHH keep writing, its always a treat to read. 😳
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