A big Fat Res, for a big comment for later ;)
Its like 3.03am (as in night like 3.7.011) lol, my brain is like dead, shall definately comment tomoz ;) allohaaa <3
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Suspence. Suspence. Suspence. Suspence and More Suspence. lol. mmm Aanya girly, seriously WOW. I did not want that to finish. It was too short hehehe ;) There was a grave depth into this update which made me cringe and laugh at the same time. You are improving with every word. Trust me and you dont need improving hehe ;)
Dimtri, I am gonna dedicate this paragraph to him. Seriously what a freak! Lol, and kinda charming at the same time. I have a thing for evil/ badass guys (DAMON <3 ) LOL. He is cruel beyond doubt but I am kinda glad he is, simply because he broke AR and now by doing this "litte mission he sent armaan on" he is gonna bring them back! Lol, his character is protrayed very well. I could imagine his smile and everything!
Armaan, Armaan, Armaan. Badhu, seriously he thought by killing a man, that Ridhimma and him can live happily ever after? What is exactly is his job? How did he get involved with a guy like Dimrtri? see what I mean by suspence? ahaa That part where the man was tied up, in the tree where Armaan and Isa's name was itched made me cringe! Thats the very extent of cruelty. The whole ordeal was writtern perfectly esp love the way you transmitted Armaan's thought that always ran back to Ridhimma. I love the part where you wrote " that day he made two kills, that man tied up in the tree and himself", very very very very very well written.
Ridhimma I totally get her. After all the love of her life took a humans life in front of her and where their love was declared for a reason she does not know and for reason that wont change a thing. I get why she "hates" him, why she is ignoring him. I totally get her. I hope she understands him and saves him out of dmitris claws. However I am not entirely sure how or if she is gonna to forget the past, I certainly will not be able to love a man who is taken a life for what you could slightly call selfish reasons. But then again I aint Ridhimma and I dont have Armaan hehe ;)
Armaan and Ridhimma's little moment was beyond cute and a declaration of their never ending love! I like how they both still care very much for each other even with this circumstance. It gives that lovey dovey feeling! hehe the flasback was sooo adorable! I could imagine Armaan being all scared and ridhimma's " sweet tone" ahhahaa ;) The coffee moment was bahahahaaa! made lol. I like how Armaan knows how to get intoo her nerves and catch glimpse of the firey Ridhimma he fell in love with! Hope everything settles with them and that Armaan protects her, and we all know he will, no matter what!
I totally adored the update! Hope you diclose the meaning behind ISA. Love Priyanka.
Edited by ..KaJenDelena.. - 12 years ago
