Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett
Okay, so I finally stole some 'Me-Time' for myself! And here I am! For a big comment! Haha! x
---"But they don't know us." she mused. They don't know HIM. They don't know that he's guardian to 10 kids all over the world and regularly visits them and funds all their expenses. They don't know that he topped his class at Harvard and he actually has an MBA from Harvard Business school. They don't know that he used to flirt excessively because he liked to be felt needed. They didn't know he loves babies and wants his own somewhere along the future. They don't know his parents fought all the time and sent him to boarding school...they don't know that he loves me...that opposites attract and fairytale love exists. ----
Is this guy for real? Seriously? I'm already in love with him, even if he hasn't, or rather, hadn't entered the story at the time! I mean 10 kids, ALL over the frikkin' WORLD! And HARVARD? That's...Surreal! But then again, Armaan is an ethereal creature now isn't he? Haha! But he's Armaan! Why don't they make guys like HIM anymore?
And that perfect date you described, I can't think of a single girl who won't want them! It was filmy, like you said, but you still managed to give an 'Aanya-Touch' to it! That made a whole lot of difference! It was nothing extraordinary, nothing over-the-top, nothing we hadn't heard before, and that made it just right! Special, as we call it!
Everything in Part (a) was just P-E-R-F-E-C-T!
And then, enter Shanky! He makes Satan look like an Angel!
---It disappeared in a heartbeat and a smile appeared on his face. He was a man made for business not for frivolous things like love. A second later he was calling his manager. Now that Riddhima had refused he had to get the shares in some other way. This was the most important deal of his life. He had no time to waste. ---
He's a scar on the word 'Father'! I can't even imagine my Dad behaving that way! Not that he can, because he ain't a businessman, all he can do is probably donate my eyes! Haha! But nah, he loves me way to much! That's why he's DAD! And this guy in your story, he's just...UGH! I feel like killing him! Maybe my Dad can give him a kick! Hmmm...
But then, Armaan behaved like a complete daft-headed prick! I mean, he knew she hated her Dad, he knew she loved him to bits! Where did all that self-pity come from? Honestly, if you can't even hold confidence in yourself for taking care of her, how the hell can you ask her to do it? But, well he's Armaan, so its an unspoken deal to just love him unconditionally and without any complaints!
The concert was a complete blend of Bollywood and a Hollywood chick-flick! Haha! But seriously it was! I expected that sort of thing, but I defo didn't expect Madame-Popstar to go on her knees! But I'm glad she did! I went 'Awww...' the whole time!
So yep, all in all, this cliched love-story of your's straight out of the script of a Bollywood movie, was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! You wrote it in your own way, with your own touch, complete with music, romance, adorableness and most of all - love! And it was, as we say it, Legen-wait for it-dary! Haha! You couldn't have written it better than this!
Ciao now!
And oh, keep up the score! ;)
-Shrutika! x
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