My virtual dedication to creatives | Geet

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Posted: 12 years ago

Everyone says nowday we crib criticize a lot not write anything in their favor So I want to know what should I write...with this fabulous callous stroyline...
This is my virtual dedication to their virtual creativity which never appear on real screen. Probably g0t extinct in virtual world only so in reality product is crap only

Tell me tell me what to write
With dresses going really tight
Story going out of sight
Is this a dark tunnel with no light
What to write what to write

ON IF Maneet occupies first spot
This romantic couple is tagged hot
But still I have this one thought
for this unethical GHSP I always fought

viewers are long taken for ride
why their excellent creativity is on hide
Its time for them work against tide
my comments are critical not snide

We are not allowed to criticize
Our demand tagged as oversize
Just fake articles for viewers trap
At last they deliver only utter crap

Demands criticism is not viewers right
Just to bear crap is probably our plight
Why we cried for months for our GEET fight
creatives and maneet amenasia at worst height
When maneet preparing for DEv-il wedding night
GHSP fans belong to very stupid category outright

Chances swinging from dim to bright
Who to understand viewers plight
Dev Nandini romance took all limelight
lovable maneet are out of sight
Tell me tell me what to write
what to write what to write

Edited by kuls11 - 12 years ago

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nandita singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome & True ...are the words for the verse & your thoughts..& to few saying we crib..besides the famous song 'Kuch toh logn kahain gai logon kaa kaam hai khehna' ..I would say unlike them we don't keep our brain aside nor lock our heart away coz we watching 'fiction'..fiction is but inspired from life itself ..Guess same was Barry had mentioned ...

As for the SHOW...This show sure needs to get place in 'TV Hall of Fame' for glamorizing & redefining 'Rapist & Victim' scenario.

Now to the CHARACTERS..

Geet

'Khichidi hai baba ji khichidi' ..
DD was cute, but Geet?

Geet's comic reaction to the whole thing has me appalled ...
Can any woman ever so easily forget incident like 'fake marriage', 'violation of her body, self respect & soul', 'carrying this man s child'...forgive the man who treated her as flesh & rag alone.

Can the same woman give such a reaction as Geet was shown to give! She was more worried for Dev's heartbreak than Nandini's future!
What kind of a sister is she, what kind of a woman??

Dev

'Mujhai Nandini sai pyaar hogaya hai Geet'
Did I see Dev expressing his love for his victim's sister that too to her?

Dev's cry for redemption I guess ends with Geet's 'I forgive thee' ..
Only thing he is shown to have stopped him from professing his love to Nandini is his 'act of Maan' not his past.
He thinks he has a chance with Nandini otherwise! He tries to break her 'rishtaa'!
He has the gal to tell Geet he loves her sister. Has the face to cry to Maan hoping his 'Bro' will do the magic.

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Maan Singh Khurana

Again treated as the extra wheel.
Again truth kept from him knowledge of which is shared by the doting Devar -Bhabhi jodi.

Easy target that he is for the brick-bats of 'so called' fans ...
If Maan shown to side Dev which ofcourse now is possible given Dev's old dialogue 'If Geet can why not You!'... he will be bashed calling him names & questioning his principles...
And if he does not side Dev given Dev's past & the fact that Nandini is not in love with Dev (yet) then he will be called a bad brother..

What is left to be seen is for how long do they plan to continue with taking fans who are still trying hard to stay loyal to the show for their love for the actors(characters I wont count as to me besides Maan all are dead)..how long they plan to take the fans for granted...& how long can we keep our patience & hold on to the show..

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mysterygurl1427

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Posted: 12 years ago

😲

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sia

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Posted: 12 years ago

A-W-E-S-O-M-E...!!!! 👏👏👏

I so agree, their creativity is definitely virtual, we cant it anywhere🤓!!!😆😆😆

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Maddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

Great Kuls !

That exactly explains the situation !

I have no more to say about GHSP or Geet or Dev or anyone now !

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Hmmmmmmmmmm

@49erFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

Kuls, I love it!

Awesome lines lub! 🤗

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8629

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Posted: 12 years ago

@Shivi
. ...Forum is not only for positive critisim GHSP cvs need good back lash
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_Invincible_

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Posted: 12 years ago

oye kul tu phir shuru ho gayi...

d fundamental rule of watching TV is dat watch it after keeping ur brain in deep freezer...🤣

havent u learned dat cv's r alwz right no matter wat crap dey dish out...😛...u urself r not creative at all and u r questioning d professional writers ...not done😡
waise bhi kya galat hai isme agar dev ko 4th time eternal love ho gaya hai to...?????
love can happen anytime...marrying other gal while ur wife is alive isnt called infidelity dese days acc. to SO channel...

and GEET kuch bhi kare uski marzi hai...after all its democratic country and its virtual world where ASS-U-ME things and live in la la land all d time...no reality checks r allowed dere...😉

lastly USE remote power...its better to use ur brain rather den making others use dere brains ...😈
so watch GHSP if u like as per ur wish ...🤗

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-Aarya-

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Posted: 12 years ago

R! for U! :)

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Kul, you just gave virtual a new meaning!:)

I will rise in our new reality and search for you there, cause above the sunset, above the trees, above the highs and lows that make up reality and above all the places I will search I will always find Maaneet!

Edited by night13 - 12 years ago

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sush1

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Posted: 12 years ago

My prose in your poem 👏

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