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MNff...ARDHANGINI..TH#2..last part...18/6.PG 33 (Page 8)

drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

 hey doc wht a surprising update...Big smile

the way mayank describes hei God...awsome...Clap and college roof was the best place chosen by mayank.iss se achi hu hi nai sakti thei...Smile...

Nupur: I made u sign ''pausing'.i made u sign our marriage certificate's legal paper..mei ny

Myank: shhh'.corect ur words'u dint made me sign'.i signed thm

Nupur: but u trusted me n

Mayank: I didnt trusted u 'I do trust u'moreover'I owe myself to u'.i owe my being to u nupur'.u have evry right to make any decision of my life alone'.

tht was the worthiest dialogues of mayank...the person who is in love wid u truly can only said this...Day Dreaming
and romance ...hmmm...tum nai tu sach mai shoch diya...BlushingDay Dreaming
maza aagaya...
now they both knew eveerythg but wht will happen whn mayank would know abt samrat...Unhappy...
pls iss baar tu sami should be slapd by mayank;ll give me so mch relieve...LOL
loved it doc...Hug
hello my action heroine...
surprise surpsie
yaar y u all r feeling so...might be becsue i have left to right anythng lovy dovy
im so gald tht u loved the dialgues as u said to me face to faceto
but wht i cant forgot is ur face whn u said
ji nhi samrat ko 2 thapaar tu parhny hi chiay...itna kcuh kiya
tht was really cute...
im ki wish zaroor grant hogi...

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 29556

Posted: 23 May 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

OMG OMG Cascade u've update this part
Hai ALLAH i couldn't believe it-
u and romantic update... hayeee ye kaise ho sakta hai...
Cascade - it was superb romantic update...
Haye it was awesome one...
loved each n every moment of my mayur
their date, their convo, their feelings, thier passionate kss - awww everything was outstanding... this  update was full of pure love...haye i m drooling on mayur dreamland... main mayur ki payar ki biz kho gayi hu...

Fizu it was xcellent  update janu... finally nups sadi that dey r married...ab ek tou bala taal gaa
now wanna c how nups will tell abt would be very tough for mayank to beleive sam's act
toot jayegi bechara...

anyway wo baad main sochenge----- ab mujhe ye updae imagine karke khush rehne do
i m loving this part... it was dreamy update yaar
loved it to d core

ab next update bhi jaldi chaiye
so update next part soon

and plzzz try to update---Walking with u

take care

ya u know me na im hell non romantic...but asay hi for a change socha yeah bhi try kero...kuch mood tha..u knowWink..password mil gya tha...waha kaWinkLOL...
thnks dear for liking n feeling the emotions i wrote in it
tum sab k yeah intezar next update mein bora hoga...sami is back in next update...
i thing u guys r missing him too much
lov ya
n abt walking withu...thnks fro reminidng

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kirti123

wow it was completly amazing part
just lovely Smile
tthnks alooot dear
lov ya
drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -roshnee-

you know when suddenly all your pains vanishes you cant actually tell what you feel then.but one things sure, you wont feel anything better than that ever. it was just like that.
u know wht
ur two liner actually beautifl sumerized wht i have honured to have such readers...thnks for being here

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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged

Fiza, sorry for replying late.Embarrassed
ab kya karun Valiah ne sab likh dia, aur mujhe words dhundne pareOuch
coming to d update...its just wow...awesome...simply mrvlousClap.ClapClap
just breathtaking...awesomest rocking update.Star
like mayank-shilpa aunty convo..Smile
its really funny...short, but sweet n simple.Smile
it shows their love n bonding.Smile
they are most rocking mother-son duo.Star
love them.Smile
n Mayur date...just WWOOOWWW...out of the world.Day Dreaming
d way u describe d date is simply superb...out of the world.Star

specially d description of their college terrace...u remember me my college just look alikeBig d difference is i dnt knw, how it look in moonlightROFL

bt it look awesome in setting sunDay Dreaming...d orange light speard all over the terraceDay Dreaming...huge Radhachura treeDay Dreaming...cold breeze...yellow flower...dry leaves...its like heavenDay Dreaming
i love my college terraceHeart
opps sorry, main to apne college terrace me kho gyiEmbarrassed...sorryEmbarrassed

nw back to update...d date is perfect.Star
bt d most perfect thing is their realization, specially mayanks.Smile
it is very much soothing for both of them after a horrible time. drug effect was surely a horrigle phase of their i thot, d most horrible phase was separation.Ouch
after alot misunderstanding...n a painful separation...n also a deadly drug effect stage...finally they found themselves after ages.Big smile
this update is so there is a clamness in it.Hug
n i love it.Hug
the way mayank told her everything of his past thots...n nupur also listened to him with so much one word is un-imaginable.Day Dreaming
u r nt only a grt writer Fiza...u r grt painter...thats y u painted such a sweet loving passionate but soothing situation.Clap
hats off to u.Clap

Mayank: see….he show there hand… matter how I place them ….the accompany each other perfectly…..smilingly he looked at her …as he just said as a matter of fact

this is the most most most beautiful dialogues of this update.Day Dreaming
i love it to the core.Big smile
continue soon.Smile
thanks for the pm.Smile

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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by valiyah27

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by valiyah27


Fizaaa yeh kya kiya...hume maarne ka plan tha to pehle bata deti na yaar...thora prepare hote na...aise sudden attacks ufff saans hi ruk gaya thaa...koi Dr.Fiza ko bulao bhai patient kafi serious haiEmbarrassed...!!!

update ke liyeStar...breathtaking it is...simply out of the world...the way u described their date n convo is simply outstanding...Mayank's n his Mom convo was funnyLOL...then the naughty Mayank in car is just soo cuteWink...Nupur being Nupur kahan chalo aage peeche left rightLOL...but Mayank is no less instead lifts her rather giving boyCool...BUT what came the next  just took my breath still not recovered yet...THE ROOF TOP what can be more perfect than thisDay Dreaming...yesss its the very place from where the journey began...every little moment they spent here is precious...even this very place holds a special place in their life n heart as they shared their few secrets to only this place which they didnot even dare to share to each other...this place is no less than a heaven in itself...they not only shared their joy but sorrows with this place...this roof top is a witness to their first realization of being in love...this place is where they took their drastic decision of life to part what can be more perfect than this place to began with life once again with their lives...soo serene it is...a rock table...shadow of leaves...carpet of dry natural as natural as their pure love...looking at the serenity of the place she look backs to him n finds him a light of God himself whom God decended to give meaning to her existence n to him she seems an angel who is engraved in his souls...who owe his being ..they truly r digged inside each other souls...they chose the edge to celebrate their togetherness...being here they feel finding themselves back...back from those miserable days they were apart...he did pour out his pain as how he didnot miss but he died every moment without her n was back in life when got her back ..they know each other inside out...he knows what can bring smile on her face...she knew how to comfort him...loved the way he made her confess abt their sweetly he made all fears of her vanish...made her believe that it was not any betrayal but only her selfless love for him...what passionate hug...what  blissful closeness...his loving gaze...her blush...their comfort...AND their first KISSBlushingEmbarrassed...not to forget the cute act of rubbing nose before claiming her lips is soo awww...every gesture of his shows how much he trust n love her...her gestures to be with him always no matter what...both showering love which they hold in them since ages...again the Roof Top is witnessing their heavenly love confession which is no less than a bliss...the palm game is soo touchy ...the way he declared that no matter how they placed they accompany them perfectly...MORE THAN PERFECT way to let other know that these palm or their whole being was only made for each other...!!!

i fall short of words Fiza to appreciate this SORRY as according to me my comment is not justified for this heavenly update...u ROCKEDClapStar ...!!! 

Fiza, ab main extra kya likhunOuch
sab kuch to iss Valiah ne likh diyaOuch

Valiah, kuch to rakh deti mere likhne k liyeOuch
yeah kiya baat hoi
tu apany style mein likha...

@ Suja...oopss soo sorryyyOuch...!!!

@ Fiza...dekha yeh Zalim zamana dil khol kar comment bhi nahi karne deta haiOuchCry...aur ha tum bhi na kya dant dant ke comment likh wati hoLOL...ab to bechari suja ke paas koi option bhi nahi...soo suja be a good girl no more excuses dear...jaldi comment karo...update chahiye naROFL...!!!

valiah ki bacchi, tujhe bht hasi aa rahi haiAngry
teri too...Angry

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valliyah Goldie

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Fizu ek update ka sawaal hai...!!!

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
valiyah jani...i'll try ...but cant promise...

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