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MNff...ARDHANGINI..TH#2..last part...18/6.PG 33 (Page 6)

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by valiyah27

Edited

Fizaaa yeh kya kiya...hume maarne ka plan tha to pehle bata deti na yaar...thora prepare hote na...aise sudden attacks ufff saans hi ruk gaya thaa...koi Dr.Fiza ko bulao bhai patient kafi serious haiEmbarrassed...!!!

update ke liyeStar...breathtaking it is...simply out of the world...the way u described their date n convo is simply outstanding...Mayank's n his Mom convo was funnyLOL...then the naughty Mayank in car is just soo cuteWink...Nupur being Nupur kahan chalo aage peeche left rightLOL...but Mayank is no less instead lifts her rather giving directionsShockedEmbarrassed...smart boyCool...BUT what came the next  just took my breath away...im still not recovered yet...THE ROOF TOP what can be more perfect than thisDay Dreaming...yesss its the very place from where the journey began...every little moment they spent here is precious...even this very place holds a special place in their life n heart as they shared their few secrets to only this place which they didnot even dare to share to each other...this place is no less than a heaven in itself...they not only shared their joy but sorrows with this place...this roof top is a witness to their first realization of being in love...this place is where they took their drastic decision of life to part ways...so what can be more perfect than this place to began with life once again with their lives...soo serene it is...a rock table...shadow of leaves...carpet of dry leaves...so natural as natural as their pure love...looking at the serenity of the place she look backs to him n finds him a light of God himself whom God decended to give meaning to her existence n to him she seems an angel who is engraved in his souls...who owe his being ..they truly r digged inside each other souls...they chose the edge to celebrate their togetherness...being here they feel finding themselves back...back from those miserable days they were apart...he did pour out his pain as how he didnot miss but he died every moment without her n was back in life when got her back ..they know each other inside out...he knows what can bring smile on her face...she knew how to comfort him...loved the way he made her confess abt their marriage...how sweetly he made all fears of her vanish...made her believe that it was not any betrayal but only her selfless love for him...what passionate hug...what  blissful closeness...his loving gaze...her blush...their comfort...AND their first KISSBlushingEmbarrassed...not to forget the cute act of rubbing nose before claiming her lips is soo awww...every gesture of his shows how much he trust n love her...her gestures to be with him always no matter what...both showering love which they hold in them since ages...again the Roof Top is witnessing their heavenly love confession which is no less than a bliss...the palm game is soo touchy ...the way he declared that no matter how they placed they accompany them perfectly...MORE THAN PERFECT way to let other know that these palm or their whole being was only made for each other...!!!

i fall short of words Fiza to appreciate this update...im SORRY as according to me my comment is not justified for this heavenly update...u ROCKEDClapStar ...!!! 




Fiza, ab main extra kya likhunOuch
sab kuch to iss Valiah ne likh diyaOuch

Valiah, kuch to rakh deti mere likhne k liyeOuch
yeah kiya baat hoi
tu apany style mein likha...
likh
 

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 10:09am | IP Logged
WOW!!!!!!!!!!beautiful update
jst luved mayur...their hug, feelings, emotions, date, kiss..aweee..everything was jst perfect...in mayur dreamland
amazing 
cont soon

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by valiyah27

Edited

Fizaaa yeh kya kiya...hume maarne ka plan tha to pehle bata deti na yaar...thora prepare hote na...aise sudden attacks ufff saans hi ruk gaya thaa...koi Dr.Fiza ko bulao bhai patient kafi serious haiEmbarrassed...!!!

update ke liyeStar...breathtaking it is...simply out of the world...the way u described their date n convo is simply outstanding...Mayank's n his Mom convo was funnyLOL...then the naughty Mayank in car is just soo cuteWink...Nupur being Nupur kahan chalo aage peeche left rightLOL...but Mayank is no less instead lifts her rather giving directionsShockedEmbarrassed...smart boyCool...BUT what came the next  just took my breath away...im still not recovered yet...THE ROOF TOP what can be more perfect than thisDay Dreaming...yesss its the very place from where the journey began...every little moment they spent here is precious...even this very place holds a special place in their life n heart as they shared their few secrets to only this place which they didnot even dare to share to each other...this place is no less than a heaven in itself...they not only shared their joy but sorrows with this place...this roof top is a witness to their first realization of being in love...this place is where they took their drastic decision of life to part ways...so what can be more perfect than this place to began with life once again with their lives...soo serene it is...a rock table...shadow of leaves...carpet of dry leaves...so natural as natural as their pure love...looking at the serenity of the place she look backs to him n finds him a light of God himself whom God decended to give meaning to her existence n to him she seems an angel who is engraved in his souls...who owe his being ..they truly r digged inside each other souls...they chose the edge to celebrate their togetherness...being here they feel finding themselves back...back from those miserable days they were apart...he did pour out his pain as how he didnot miss but he died every moment without her n was back in life when got her back ..they know each other inside out...he knows what can bring smile on her face...she knew how to comfort him...loved the way he made her confess abt their marriage...how sweetly he made all fears of her vanish...made her believe that it was not any betrayal but only her selfless love for him...what passionate hug...what  blissful closeness...his loving gaze...her blush...their comfort...AND their first KISSBlushingEmbarrassed...not to forget the cute act of rubbing nose before claiming her lips is soo awww...every gesture of his shows how much he trust n love her...her gestures to be with him always no matter what...both showering love which they hold in them since ages...again the Roof Top is witnessing their heavenly love confession which is no less than a bliss...the palm game is soo touchy ...the way he declared that no matter how they placed they accompany them perfectly...MORE THAN PERFECT way to let other know that these palm or their whole being was only made for each other...!!!

i fall short of words Fiza to appreciate this update...im SORRY as according to me my comment is not justified for this heavenly update...u ROCKEDClapStar ...!!! 




Fiza, ab main extra kya likhunOuch
sab kuch to iss Valiah ne likh diyaOuch

Valiah, kuch to rakh deti mere likhne k liyeOuch
yeah kiya baat hoi
tu apany style mein likha...
likh
 


@ Suja...oopss soo sorryyyOuch...!!!

@ Fiza...dekha yeh Zalim zamana dil khol kar comment bhi nahi karne deta haiOuchCry...aur ha tum bhi na kya dant dant ke comment likh wati hoLOL...ab to bechari suja ke paas koi option bhi nahi...soo suja be a good girl no more excuses dear...jaldi comment karo...update chahiye naROFL...!!!

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
fizza dear!!!!
Hugmubaraka mubarakaa!! new thread k liyeParty where is the party tonight?????? Party
 now coming to update!! yeh kya kiya zalim!!!!! hayyy main mer jawan kya dialogues thay bygod fizza maza agaya!! itnay pyaar say bhara update the way u show their emotions their trust n most importantly their love its outstanding!! Clap!!! yaar ager yahan like k bajaey ager love ka button hota na tu main woh press kerti!! keep it up!!!


love
komal Heart

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 2:53am | IP Logged
lovely update dear..enjoyed every bit o it..subtle but unique...!! continue soonEmbarrassed

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 3:23am | IP Logged
Congratz on second thread!
Amazing part!

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by valiyah27

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by valiyah27

Edited

Fizaaa yeh kya kiya...hume maarne ka plan tha to pehle bata deti na yaar...thora prepare hote na...aise sudden attacks ufff saans hi ruk gaya thaa...koi Dr.Fiza ko bulao bhai patient kafi serious haiEmbarrassed...!!!

update ke liyeStar...breathtaking it is...simply out of the world...the way u described their date n convo is simply outstanding...Mayank's n his Mom convo was funnyLOL...then the naughty Mayank in car is just soo cuteWink...Nupur being Nupur kahan chalo aage peeche left rightLOL...but Mayank is no less instead lifts her rather giving directionsShockedEmbarrassed...smart boyCool...BUT what came the next  just took my breath away...im still not recovered yet...THE ROOF TOP what can be more perfect than thisDay Dreaming...yesss its the very place from where the journey began...every little moment they spent here is precious...even this very place holds a special place in their life n heart as they shared their few secrets to only this place which they didnot even dare to share to each other...this place is no less than a heaven in itself...they not only shared their joy but sorrows with this place...this roof top is a witness to their first realization of being in love...this place is where they took their drastic decision of life to part ways...so what can be more perfect than this place to began with life once again with their lives...soo serene it is...a rock table...shadow of leaves...carpet of dry leaves...so natural as natural as their pure love...looking at the serenity of the place she look backs to him n finds him a light of God himself whom God decended to give meaning to her existence n to him she seems an angel who is engraved in his souls...who owe his being ..they truly r digged inside each other souls...they chose the edge to celebrate their togetherness...being here they feel finding themselves back...back from those miserable days they were apart...he did pour out his pain as how he didnot miss but he died every moment without her n was back in life when got her back ..they know each other inside out...he knows what can bring smile on her face...she knew how to comfort him...loved the way he made her confess abt their marriage...how sweetly he made all fears of her vanish...made her believe that it was not any betrayal but only her selfless love for him...what passionate hug...what  blissful closeness...his loving gaze...her blush...their comfort...AND their first KISSBlushingEmbarrassed...not to forget the cute act of rubbing nose before claiming her lips is soo awww...every gesture of his shows how much he trust n love her...her gestures to be with him always no matter what...both showering love which they hold in them since ages...again the Roof Top is witnessing their heavenly love confession which is no less than a bliss...the palm game is soo touchy ...the way he declared that no matter how they placed they accompany them perfectly...MORE THAN PERFECT way to let other know that these palm or their whole being was only made for each other...!!!

i fall short of words Fiza to appreciate this update...im SORRY as according to me my comment is not justified for this heavenly update...u ROCKEDClapStar ...!!! 




Fiza, ab main extra kya likhunOuch
sab kuch to iss Valiah ne likh diyaOuch

Valiah, kuch to rakh deti mere likhne k liyeOuch
yeah kiya baat hoi
tu apany style mein likha...
likh
 


@ Suja...oopss soo sorryyyOuch...!!!

@ Fiza...dekha yeh Zalim zamana dil khol kar comment bhi nahi karne deta haiOuchCry...aur ha tum bhi na kya dant dant ke comment likh wati hoLOL...ab to bechari suja ke paas koi option bhi nahi...soo suja be a good girl no more excuses dear...jaldi comment karo...update chahiye naROFL...!!!
tu tension maat lay valiyah...dil khol ker kiya ...thread khol ker coment kiya kero,...
 
achaaa aur ap loogoo k apny baray mein kiya kayal hai...gun point per updates mangty hoo...mein becharii masoom...
haan sahi kaha update chaiy na...tu sharafat se jaldi coment kiya keroo...

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
plz update soon

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