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MNff...ARDHANGINI..TH#2..last part...18/6.PG 33 (Page 5)

valliyah Goldie

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by valiyah27


hello ap kaha hai
apki OS ka wait kar rahi hu....:)

OS lolzLOL...agayi Fari n OS Allah khair kare...readers behosh hojayengeROFL...lo kar diya commentApprove...!!!

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gopi06 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 January 2010
Posts: 4231

Posted: 19 May 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
congrats for your second thread dear
lovely updt
thanks for the pm

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mayuloveu IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 March 2011
Posts: 7300

Posted: 19 May 2011 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
beautiful Fiza. I have no words to describe it. I love it. fiza plz update soon. It is the best update I ever read.

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Silent.Dreamer IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 June 2010
Posts: 31134

Posted: 19 May 2011 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
it was BeautiFul and superb Part..
and Romantic Too, loved it Fiza

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 18 June 2010
Posts: 3583

Posted: 19 May 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
I cant believe on my eyes U updated so early dear
I am so happy 
The  Update was Mind blowing Bola to  jhakas yar
it was so so so so so so romantic 
Finally Nupur told him about their marriage 
I really love the update
thanks for Pm 
and cont soon

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Auroni.92 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5102

Posted: 19 May 2011 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
Congo for the 2nd thread of this beautiful ff...Dancing
It ws heavenly fiza...Every gestures, every touch ws soo pure and serene...Conveying all the unsaid emotions...Day DreamingDay Dreaming
I ws soo engrossed while reading...And i loved that u've chosen the rooftop as their first date...Nothing can be more precious than this...The nature already arranged all the decorations for them..No need of any other materialized things...This ws the best part of this update...ClapClap
And the dialogues...Seems coming straight from mayank's heart...I can imagine the whole scene...U make it sooo beautiful.Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming..Thnxx for this mesmerizing part...

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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6444

Posted: 20 May 2011 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by valiyah27


Fizaaa yeh kya kiya...hume maarne ka plan tha to pehle bata deti na yaar...thora prepare hote na...aise sudden attacks ufff saans hi ruk gaya thaa...koi Dr.Fiza ko bulao bhai patient kafi serious haiEmbarrassed...!!!

update ke liyeStar...breathtaking it is...simply out of the world...the way u described their date n convo is simply outstanding...Mayank's n his Mom convo was funnyLOL...then the naughty Mayank in car is just soo cuteWink...Nupur being Nupur kahan chalo aage peeche left rightLOL...but Mayank is no less instead lifts her rather giving boyCool...BUT what came the next  just took my breath still not recovered yet...THE ROOF TOP what can be more perfect than thisDay Dreaming...yesss its the very place from where the journey began...every little moment they spent here is precious...even this very place holds a special place in their life n heart as they shared their few secrets to only this place which they didnot even dare to share to each other...this place is no less than a heaven in itself...they not only shared their joy but sorrows with this place...this roof top is a witness to their first realization of being in love...this place is where they took their drastic decision of life to part what can be more perfect than this place to began with life once again with their lives...soo serene it is...a rock table...shadow of leaves...carpet of dry natural as natural as their pure love...looking at the serenity of the place she look backs to him n finds him a light of God himself whom God decended to give meaning to her existence n to him she seems an angel who is engraved in his souls...who owe his being ..they truly r digged inside each other souls...they chose the edge to celebrate their togetherness...being here they feel finding themselves back...back from those miserable days they were apart...he did pour out his pain as how he didnot miss but he died every moment without her n was back in life when got her back ..they know each other inside out...he knows what can bring smile on her face...she knew how to comfort him...loved the way he made her confess abt their sweetly he made all fears of her vanish...made her believe that it was not any betrayal but only her selfless love for him...what passionate hug...what  blissful closeness...his loving gaze...her blush...their comfort...AND their first KISSBlushingEmbarrassed...not to forget the cute act of rubbing nose before claiming her lips is soo awww...every gesture of his shows how much he trust n love her...her gestures to be with him always no matter what...both showering love which they hold in them since ages...again the Roof Top is witnessing their heavenly love confession which is no less than a bliss...the palm game is soo touchy ...the way he declared that no matter how they placed they accompany them perfectly...MORE THAN PERFECT way to let other know that these palm or their whole being was only made for each other...!!!

i fall short of words Fiza to appreciate this SORRY as according to me my comment is not justified for this heavenly update...u ROCKEDClapStar ...!!! 

Fiza, ab main extra kya likhunOuch
sab kuch to iss Valiah ne likh diyaOuch

Valiah, kuch to rakh deti mere likhne k liyeOuch

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-Samira- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Salam Fiza
congorts for the new thread Party
this was beautiful n perfect part sis
sorry sis i want to comment more
but don't got much time
lov u

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