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MNff...ARDHANGINI..TH#2..last part...18/6.PG 33 (Page 37)

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-


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Fiza----------- u ended this FF
ahhh feeling sad re- i know  everything good has to end...
but ye dil nehi manta...

u dont know how much i loved this FF- it was full of fun, excitement, mystery, pain , responsibility, and cute romance...

We got all d things in ur ff that mostly related to our life...

u portrayed mayur character very beautifully... they were too much different frm each other--- pher bhi they r DO DIL EK JAAN...


Awesome FF cascade- just too good

 

Ur final part was really very nice '.. I've enjoyed it a lot''

Mayur ,NSD, Raj all made a nice family bonding which is full of love , trust and respect'''

Its feel very nice to see a happy family like mayor'.

 

 

Now coming to ur question'.

 

a)      abt q1 ' mha said everything.. I m totally agree with maha'

maha well said dear'..  u r right ' as u said it's a journey of 2 different ppl who finally becme one' it was journey to share sorrow, pain , happiness with ur life partner' nupur is  truly a better half of mayank - I really respect her a lot'. i must say mayank is a lucky guy who hav nups in his life. and NUPS dad is a perfect dad who support her daughter a lot'- isn't it great???? And nups dad and myus relationship also very sweet'  

 

There r many parts in ur FF that I like very much' hmm such as

 

1. Mayur's each n every scene at college.

2. Mayank and NSD convo ' it was simply awesome'.. I didn't see such a cute relationship in any FF.

 

3. I loved when mayank came to knw abt their marriage through nups diary'.

 

4. also loved the way nups took care of mayank and signed the marriage paper'.

 

5' and the best and bestes part was their confession and weeding day'

 

 

Fiza I gonna miss this FF.  but I know u'll back with another awesome, mind-blowing FF soon.. So I m waiting for ur new ff'.

 

Weldone fiza'.. thank u so much for giving us such a nice ff. its feel great that I was one of the readers of  this  FF.

 
 

Hey meri ankhoo k tara ..mera janu bacha

 

I know u n maha …itna achank kyun khatam kerdiya…sequel strt kero….u know the feeling whn readers r enjoying ff till end is better thn to exaggerate it till readers say bss kerady yaar…..

 

Thnkuu so much for callin it a complete package….u always made my days

 

Thks dear

 

Thts sum how owesum tht a charcter tht I just write like tht always stays in ur heart..;like diya in BYLM..n now ND here..thnks for liking it

 

Thnku for likin the bond the family

 

Thnkuu dor always stying beside me…thnku for bosting my moral…thnku for cuming in mylife…..

 

Thnks dear

Lov ya …aloot  

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged

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ismein thanx ki koi gunjaaish nahi maha.. jo bhi aap ne kaha ekdum sach thaBig smile

aur fiza-ji aapke jawaab... hmmm

1. mere liye ardhangini mayank aur nupur ki zindagi ki kahani thi, ek safar jo un dono ne saath saath lekin alag alag tay kiya, safar ek dusre ki taraf, safar pyaar ki taraf, ek khushaal zindagi ki taraf. unhone ye saabit kar diya ke chahe koi kitni bhi koshish karle, kitni bhi muskile aan pade, lekin jeet hamesha pyaar aur sachchaai ki hi hoti hai! ye thi ardhangini mere liye

2. ye sawaal thoda mushkil hai, kyunki mujhe is kahani ka har pehloo behad pasand hai... par sabse zyaada pasand mujhe teen moments hai, ek jab mayank ne terrace pe apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya, do, nupur aur mayank ki wedding night aur teen, jab nupur ne mayank se marriage papers pe sign liya tha!

so... happy now!! mil gaye jawaab?? ab jaldi se doosra concept lekar aa jaaoBig smile

love
~jiya~

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JIya ji

Shukar hai apny apny alfaz mein kuch kaha

Ap janti hai yeah alfaz humary liyan buhat anmool hai…jab ap jasa writer kuch khata hai tu buhat acha lgta hai…

 

Is safar ko khass ap sab ny banaya hai…is kahni ko ek safar k nam dayny k lyan aur is k her pahloo k samhjny k lyan shukriya…

 
aur us her paal ko mehsoos kerny k lyan jo humary liyan bhi khas thy 
 

Thnkus o much for liking n staying here throughout the journey…..

Lov ya

Fiza

 

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed



ismein thanx ki koi gunjaaish nahi maha.. jo bhi aap ne kaha ekdum sach thaBig smile

aur fiza-ji aapke jawaab... hmmm

1. mere liye ardhangini mayank aur nupur ki zindagi ki kahani thi, ek safar jo un dono ne saath saath lekin alag alag tay kiya, safar ek dusre ki taraf, safar pyaar ki taraf, ek khushaal zindagi ki taraf. unhone ye saabit kar diya ke chahe koi kitni bhi koshish karle, kitni bhi muskile aan pade, lekin jeet hamesha pyaar aur sachchaai ki hi hoti hai! ye thi ardhangini mere liye

2. ye sawaal thoda mushkil hai, kyunki mujhe is kahani ka har pehloo behad pasand hai... par sabse zyaada pasand mujhe teen moments hai, ek jab mayank ne terrace pe apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya, do, nupur aur mayank ki wedding night aur teen, jab nupur ne mayank se marriage papers pe sign liya tha!

so... happy now!! mil gaye jawaab?? ab jaldi se doosra concept lekar aa jaaoBig smile

love
~jiya~

[/QUOTE]
 
 

JIya ji

Shukar hai apny apny alfaz mein kuch kaha

Ap janti hai yeah alfaz humary liyan buhat anmool hai'jab ap jasa writer kuch khata hai tu buhat acha lgta hai'

 

Is safar ko khass ap sab ny banaya hai'is kahni ko ek safar k nam dayny k lyan aur is k her pahloo k samhjny k lyan shukriya'

 
aur us her paal ko mehsoos kerny k lyan jo humary liyan bhi khas thy 
 

Thnkus o much for liking n staying here throughout the journey'..

Lov ya

Fiza

 

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@red - fiza-ji, aapke saamne hum kuch bhi nahi.. aur aapne yeh kahani banayi hi itni khubsurat hai ki hum is safar ko tay naa karte, toh aisa lagta zindagi mein kuch khaass humne bewajah gawa diya.. isliye is kahani ko likhne ke liye shukriya, dil se thank you!

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --jiya--

Originally posted by drfizaahmed



ismein thanx ki koi gunjaaish nahi maha.. jo bhi aap ne kaha ekdum sach thaBig smile

aur fiza-ji aapke jawaab... hmmm

1. mere liye ardhangini mayank aur nupur ki zindagi ki kahani thi, ek safar jo un dono ne saath saath lekin alag alag tay kiya, safar ek dusre ki taraf, safar pyaar ki taraf, ek khushaal zindagi ki taraf. unhone ye saabit kar diya ke chahe koi kitni bhi koshish karle, kitni bhi muskile aan pade, lekin jeet hamesha pyaar aur sachchaai ki hi hoti hai! ye thi ardhangini mere liye

2. ye sawaal thoda mushkil hai, kyunki mujhe is kahani ka har pehloo behad pasand hai... par sabse zyaada pasand mujhe teen moments hai, ek jab mayank ne terrace pe apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya, do, nupur aur mayank ki wedding night aur teen, jab nupur ne mayank se marriage papers pe sign liya tha!

so... happy now!! mil gaye jawaab?? ab jaldi se doosra concept lekar aa jaaoBig smile

love
~jiya~

 
 

JIya ji

Shukar hai apny apny alfaz mein kuch kaha

Ap janti hai yeah alfaz humary liyan buhat anmool hai'jab ap jasa writer kuch khata hai tu buhat acha lgta hai'

 

Is safar ko khass ap sab ny banaya hai'is kahni ko ek safar k nam dayny k lyan aur is k her pahloo k samhjny k lyan shukriya'

 
aur us her paal ko mehsoos kerny k lyan jo humary liyan bhi khas thy 
 

Thnkus o much for liking n staying here throughout the journey'..

Lov ya

Fiza

 

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@red - fiza-ji, aapke saamne hum kuch bhi nahi.. aur aapne yeh kahani banayi hi itni khubsurat hai ki hum is safar ko tay naa karte, toh aisa lagta zindagi mein kuch khaass humne bewajah gawa diya.. isliye is kahani ko likhne ke liye shukriya, dil se thank you!
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thnkuuuHug

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
Fiza,(My Cascade ur sadu+ khadoos+ aur bhi hai nehi bataungi...Big smile ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.)  and Vally(My shahsi kala)--- baas baas mujhe aur jaida e motional maat karo... baccho ki jaan le logi kya???
aisa acche acche bat karoge tou mera pao zameen pe nehi asmano pe uregi...


Thank u fiza- thank u so much for givng us such a nce FF and thank u so much for giving me frnds like u(monkey), Valley(my poor shashi kala- jo mera har pagal pan pyar se accept kar leta hainLOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.Big smile ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.),,, the extra emotional frnd maha ...(lol maine ekbar comment karna bhol gayi tou wo ro pari...LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.)---- i luv u all guys
u all have a very crucial part in my LIFE.
MAY ALLAH blerss u all- humari dosti humesha aisa accha + age ja kar aur bhi mazboot ho- ye dua karti hu..

nd FIza ji waiitng for ur net FF- taki main valley ki tang kuch sakti hu...LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.Wink ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page... i really miss it...

Love ya all

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Fiza,(My Cascade ur sadu+ khadoos+ aur bhi hai nehi bataungi...Big smileLOL)  and Vally(My shahsi kala)--- baas baas mujhe aur jaida e motional maat karo... baccho ki jaan le logi kya???
aisa acche acche bat karoge tou mera pao zameen pe nehi asmano pe uregi...


Thank u fiza- thank u so much for givng us such a nce FF and thank u so much for giving me frnds like u(monkey), Valley(my poor shashi kala- jo mera har pagal pan pyar se accept kar leta hainLOLBig smile),,, the extra emotional frnd maha ...(lol maine ekbar comment karna bhol gayi tou wo ro pari...LOLLOL)---- i luv u all guys
u all have a very crucial part in my LIFE.
MAY ALLAH blerss u all- humari dosti humesha aisa accha + age ja kar aur bhi mazboot ho- ye dua karti hu..

nd FIza ji waiitng for ur net FF- taki main valley ki tang kuch sakti hu...LOLWink.. i really miss it...

Love ya all


faria ki bachii...mera mazak banati hu...Cry( daikhoo phir roolaya tu ne...ROFL)

thanks a lot for the swwet comments...
yar sach mai mazza tu buhat aata hai fiza k ff padhani aur sab se ziyada comment kernai mai...LOLLOL

aur faria aab tu teri turn...aab daikhna mai tumhay kitna kerti hu...TongueTongue

love u too guyz...


fizza: tumhari promotion hugayei tum sadu, cascade aur khadoos se monkey hugayei...ClapClapClap...congras.treat chayei ...LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gopi06

awesome ending dear
i loved most  parts of this ff ...but my fav parts are mayur past days and after part 22 all parts are beautiful ...really .miss this ff
thanks for the pm

thnku so much dear
thnks for stying here n enjoying this ff...
im so honoured to knwo u loved it whole
 
thnkuu
 
 

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Favouriteofall

superb ending Fiza!
all parts if this ff r special...so i love all of them
m gonna miss this ff Cry
plz come back with a new ff ASAP
nd thnx for the pm Smile
 
hey dear
thnku sso much for ur love n supprt
im goonaa miss wrting it tooo
i'll cum up with new ff...right now ek hi kafi hai...but i'll as i know most of my readers are nt comforatble with the language

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