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MNff...ARDHANGINI..TH#2..last part...18/6.PG 33 (Page 36)

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
lovely ff
looking forward to reading more from you

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
hey fizza!

what to say yaar?? i quite upset yaar itna zaberdast ff itni jalde end hogaya ek do saal tu drag kerte na serials ki terhaan kher 
every good thing comes to end so its ok but its realyyy  nice n cool story by u ! after BECAUSE U LOVED ME its totally different story u write in which u shows emotion, unconditional love , frdship , pain, betrating everything beautifully.
  i love the masti bharay dialogues b/w mayur , sayank n sanu n the very very special bond between nupur's dad n mayank its realy rare to find a relationship like that n thank god u not make her dad mogembo in the ff!!
              but one thing i expected in ur epilogue was guilty samraat and  he was forgiven by mayank n nupur but i red u not even mentioned his name not in a last part nor in epilogue thats not fair honey ... anyway thats the only thing i thought to tell u  as a true reader !!! ager bura lagay tu sorry yaaar i duno want to hurt u!!!

love
komal Heart






Edited by komal991 - 20 June 2011 at 12:00am

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*Sighs*...with heavy heart...!!!

Its the first time i was not eager enough to comment...SORRY...as i didn't want this journey to end sooner...im still not over it nor will be in future too...but had to comment for this mindblowing work of urs... sorry kept u waited...but sacchi i still don't believe this beautiful journey came to the end...!!!

Okk coming to the update...!!!
True time may change but what is unchanged is Love...n if it happens to change than only for the better...as its increases with every passing day...!!!
Ahha...Mr. Sharma is at Mrs. Preggy Sharma's service  so sweet...bechara biwi ko khush karne ke chakker mein kitchen ka kabaar khana bana diyaLOL...ahem ahem defo a better way to taste...sour yet sweet...Mr. Intelligent Romantic SharmaWink...!!!

Oh...becharey ko delivery room mein bhi nahi chora Nupur ne...seedha maarne ki dhamkiROFL...super duper hilarious...the whole time she was cursing him n bechara being the sweet sharma he is sirf han mein han  milata rahaROFL...the amount of  pain he went through out the delivery process shows the intensity of his love n concern for her...he least bothered abt his pain she caused piercing her nails...what mattered for him was only HER..." Itna pain to share kar sakta hoon hain na"...proves what marriage vows means to him...excellent Fiza Thumbs Up...!!!

Awww Raj is just the cutest n adorable too...bilkul parents ka photocopyTongue...loved honest words of Mayank " Usko dekh kar waisey hi kuch yaad nahi rehta"... simple yet romantic...soo innocently he confessed agn...it only proves his immense love which increased with every passing moment...these simple yet touchy things is what i like the most in ur FFs...!!!

Haha..2 mins silenceLOL...they can really be funny whatever situation may be...not to forget this is what  The Sharmas r excel at...!!!

"Its okk..u always make feel special everyday"..."Kya kero sweet heart ap her roz mujhe itne saarey gifts deti hai ki wajah janna mein jaroori nahi samajhta...simply proves no particular day n reason is needed to shower love...what is needed is just LOVE which they truly deeply madly does...!!!
Little teasing n blushing during Mayank's special gift session is too adorable Embarrassed...!!!

WOW Master Sharma is pretty much smart...kyun na ho Mr & Mrs Sharma ka asar hai...soo sweet of him to save for six long months to present them the gift of their choice...its actually the Feelings which matters the most...the way u wrote simply shows the love n concern this family is knitted with... feet touching part reflects the respect they hold for each other which is agn very imp for a family to blossom...Amazingly written Clap...!!!

The BEST of this update...."Thanks for being in my life...thats words can't...!!!

Ardhangini was mere a word SHE gave it a meaning...she proved to be his Ardhangini in truest sense...!!!

Be what a religion is the meaning of Ardhangini is alike...life is incomplete without ur better half...n its not easy to be one...being selfless n to love unconditionally expecting nothing in return is really tough but if u love truly nothing is impossible...This is what we got to know from this outstanding work of URS...U truly did justice to this word...U brought out the true meaning of it in the most simplest way...Thanks for providing us with this lovely piece...U actually showed the true meaning of LOVE...it was an AMAZING journey...hope u got ur first answer what ARDHANGINI has been for me...!!!

Coming to the next...U actually did justice to every particular part...no loopholes...u connected every little things n tied them very smoothly...be it ND...SA...MD...Rooftop...or...Mukti...with no rush...no mess...JUST PERFECT...every update has its BEST in it...no part is less than the ohter...U gave in perfectly what required...so for me har part khud mein best hai...!!!

But the best of the story so far is YOU.....yes u read it correct...its U...!!!
ARDHANGINI is ARDHANGINI bcoz of U...its U who made this happened...U gave meaning to every emotion in it ...Its U who hooked us from the very first till last update...So a standing ovation for U with lots of hugsHug...!!!

The best of the bestest that happened is US....not to forget FARU n MAHA....!!!
Ardhangini gave me with 3 precious gifts of life...this FF brought us closer with every update...with u came Faru(my pagal) n Maha...just wanted to tell u guys that i feel truly blessed to have u in my life...ur friendship means alot...Thanks alot Fizu for ur love n concern u show at times when needed the most...words r not enough to express what i feel for u...Thankyou Fiza for this Beautiful journey...Thanks for ur unconditional love...it hurts to read its the last time u r addressing in this FF...but remember whether u address or not i was...is n will be very much present in this thread as i do read BYLM till date...so i will be doing the same here...soo its not at all end to me...its actually a new beginning towards a friendship LIFE LONGApprove...!!!





Edited by valiyah27 - 20 June 2011 at 7:00am

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by valiyah27

*Sighs*...with heavy heart...!!!

Its the first time i was not eager enough to comment...SORRY...as i didn't want this journey to end sooner...im still not over it nor will be in future too...but had to comment for this mindblowing work of urs... sorry kept u waited...but sacchi i still don't believe this beautiful journey came to the end...!!!

Okk coming to the update...!!!
True time may change but what is unchanged is Love...n if it happens to change than only for the better...as its increases with every passing day...!!!
Ahha...Mr. Sharma is at Mrs. Preggy Sharma's service  so sweet...bechara biwi ko khush karne ke chakker mein kitchen ka kabaar khana bana diyaLOL...ahem ahem defo a better way to taste...sour yet sweet...Mr. Intelligent Romantic SharmaWink...!!!

Oh...becharey ko delivery room mein bhi nahi chora Nupur ne...seedha maarne ki dhamkiROFL...super duper hilarious...the whole time she was cursing him n bechara being the sweet sharma he is sirf han mein han  milata rahaROFL...the amount of  pain he went through out the delivery process shows the intensity of his love n concern for her...he least bothered abt his pain she caused piercing her nails...what mattered for him was only HER..." Itna pain to share kar sakta hoon hain na"...proves what marriage vows means to him...excellent Fiza Thumbs Up...!!!

Awww Raj is just the cutest n adorable too...bilkul parents ka photocopyTongue...loved honest words of Mayank " Usko dekh kar waisey hi kuch yaad nahi rehta"... simple yet romantic...soo innocently he confessed agn...it only proves his immense love which increased with every passing moment...these simple yet touchy things is what i like the most in ur FFs...!!!

Haha..2 mins silenceLOL...they can really be funny whatever situation may be...not to forget this is what  The Sharmas r excel at...!!!

"Its okk..u always make feel special everyday"..."Kya kero sweet heart ap her roz mujhe itne saarey gifts deti hai ki wajah janna mein jaroori nahi samajhta...simply proves no particular day n reason is needed to shower love...what is needed is just LOVE which they truly deeply madly does...!!!
Little teasing n blushing during Mayank's special gift session is too adorable Embarrassed...!!!

WOW Master Sharma is pretty much smart...kyun na ho Mr & Mrs Sharma ka asar hai...soo sweet of him to save for six long months to present them the gift of their choice...its actually the Feelings which matters the most...the way u wrote simply shows the love n concern this family is knitted with... feet touching part reflects the respect they hold for each other which is agn very imp for a family to blossom...Amazingly written Clap...!!!

The BEST of this update...."Thanks for being in my life...thats words can't...!!!

Ardhangini was mere a word SHE gave it a meaning...she proved to be his Ardhangini in truest sense...!!!

Be what a religion is the meaning of Ardhangini is alike...life is incomplete without ur better half...n its not easy to be one...being selfless n to love unconditionally expecting nothing in return is really tough but if u love truly nothing is impossible...This is what we got to know from this outstanding work of URS...U truly did justice to this word...U brought out the true meaning of it in the most simplest way...Thanks for providing us with this lovely piece...U actually showed the true meaning of LOVE...it was an AMAZING journey...hope u got ur first answer what ARDHANGINI has been for me...!!!

Coming to the next...U actually did justice to every particular part...no loopholes...u connected every little things n tied them very smoothly...be it ND...SA...MD...Rooftop...or...Mukti...with no rush...no mess...JUST PERFECT...every update has its BEST in it...no part is less than the ohter...U gave in perfectly what required...so for me har part khud mein best hai...!!!

But the best of the story so far is YOU.....yes u read it correct...its U...!!!
ARDHANGINI is ARDHANGINI bcoz of U...its U who made this happened...U gave meaning to every emotion in it ...Its U who hooked us from the very first till last update...So a standing ovation for U with lots of hugsHug...!!!

The best of the bestest that happened is US....not to forget FARU n MAHA....!!!
Ardhangini gave me with 3 precious gifts of life...this FF brought us closer with every update...with u came Faru(my pagal) n Maha...just wanted to tell u guys that i feel truly blessed to have u in my life...ur friendship means alot...Thanks alot Fizu for ur love n concern u show at times when needed the most...words r not enough to express what i feel for u...Thankyou Fiza for this Beautiful journey...Thanks for ur unconditional love...it hurts to read its the last time u r addressing in this FF...but remember whether u address or not i was...is n will be very much present in this thread as i do read BYLM till date...so i will be doing the same here...soo its not at all end to me...its actually a new beginning towards a friendship LIFE LONGApprove...!!!






awww...valiyaaa...HugHugHugHugHug ...cant believe tht u have taken my name...Shocked...m really honoured ...thanks aload dear...u cant imagine how mch m happy...Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile

aur janii frndship tu hoti hi precious if aap samjhoo tu...WinkWinkWink.,...

FIZA: WELL I WOULD ALSO LIKE TO THANK FIZA COZ IT BCOS OF HER THT I MET U PEOPLE...

LOVE U LOTTT FIZU.UUU...HugHugHug

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

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really dont have words to describe my feelings...Smile...this ff is now ended...yaqeen nai huraha...beautiful ff...the way u describes the feelings of two different people...amazing... situations, circumsatnces which brough tthm together, making thm understnading eachother...sweet...

whn ever i read this ff i truly enjoyed it...it never made me bore...every time i sumthg found new in each and every episode...hwich was the best part of this ff so far...till the end...dialogus, emotons, situations eveythg u handled u nicely and smothly...heads of to u dear...u deserves a big hug...HugHugHug

CUM TO THE UPDATE:

maynk cookd khatai aaloo ...yummy...Party...how caring he is...Smile...aaj kal kaha itnai aachay husband miltai hai...buhat rere haota hai...LOL
and i loved the hospital scene...mayank mai tumhay maar daloo gi if tum meray kareeb bhi aayei...ROFLROFLROFL...i was just laughing imagine this all...LOLLOLLOL

and wht a intelligent boy raj is...bilkul mayank pai gaya hai...WinkWink...kiya gifts diyei hai sweet...


Nupur: mein batao kiya keray

Mayank: kiya

Nupur:  us incedient ki yaad mein 2min silence'pls'.

mayank: nupsi plsss'..

he looked at her with plead guilt n love'..pls'sorry '

nupur: thik hai'Happy anniversary (nt the weding anversary)

mayank: moved fow n took her off feet in his embrace..tighly hold her '.i love u 'happy anniversary '


atlast tumnai likh hi liya 2 min khamoshi...ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL mind blowing, awsome, i was literally badly laughing at this moment... mayank bhi too mch hai...and raj bend down for taking blessings...my god...so sweet ..copy hi apnay dad ki...ClapClapClap...


At night she was palying with his shirt reting her head on his chest..n he on was playing with her hairs'

Mayank: nupur

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: thnku'.

She raised her head as his words have speciall feeling ot it

Maynak: thnks for being in my life'thnks for colliding with me the frst day'.thnks for scolding me the other '.thnks for caring for me whn I was injured..thnks for understanding me whn I wasn't abl to'thnks for holding me whn I was dying'.thnks for being mine'thnks for being my better half'thnks for being My ARDHANGINI''.

N hugged her tight'.convey much more..tht words cant


i love the ending .seriously...u really made a justice with ARDHAGNI... AND REALLY PROVED IT FIZA... .loved the way u portrayd ardhagni...and it is true every religion has the same meaning of ardhagni if u think so...buhat khubsuraat relation hota hai yeh...u cant bachoff this...life ka real meanings tu issi malom hota hai...

                                 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------

EPILOGUE:

beautifully describes the word ardhagni ...short but covered each and every thg ...wht a journey fiza this frm the last 6 months...finalyy this journey is ended but leaft loads of beautiful memories with smile which retain in  our minds for dont know how long...HugHugHugHug


ANSWERS:

1. WHT FOR U ARDHAGINI HAS BEEN?

    for me it was the journey of two difernt  natured people..who thmselves didnt know abt true meanings of life, love, respect...

for me it shows the meaning of ardhagni in true senses...life is not just abt taking sumtng from it but to give it back is the true happiness and satisfaction which u felt...

Alove story jis mai ek dosrai parwah kerna bina ek dosrai ko batayei ek dosray ki pblms aur tensions ko kam kerna...

in short i truly loved it...

2. WCH WAS THE BEST PART OF THE STORY ?


- BEST PART WHN MAYNAK CONFESSED HIS LOVE IN FRONT OF NUPURS DAD...

- WHN MAYANK WAS HIDING HIMSELF FROM NUPUR IN COLLEGE...TO SHOW THT HE IS NOT IN LOVE WID HER.AND WIDOUT HER HE CAN LIVE...BUT BECHARA HAAR GAYA THA SHART...LOLLOL

- THEIR WEDDING NIGHT...

- BESTEST OF ALL...  WHN NUPUR SIGHNED THE PPAERS OF THEIR MARRIAGE IN ORDER TO SAVE MAYANK...SmileSmile



EPILOGUE OF MINE...  ROFLROFLROFL

HOPE THT U CUM UP SOON WITH THE SAME ADDICTED FF WITH NEW CONCEPT...U REALLY MAKE US ADDICTED TO THIS...ROFLROFL...

LOADS OF THANKS FOR GIVING US SUCH A BEAUTIFUL FF...REALLY THANKS  ALOT...FOR CUM UP INTO MY LIFE AS A PERSON WHICH I NEVER THOUGHT THT I WULD BE  SO CLOSED TO  U AS I AM TODAY...HugHugHeart THANKS FO BEING WID ME WHNEVER I NEEDED U ...LOVE U A LOAD...



love ya a lot...hope u liked it...muahhh...

Hug Heart


Dr,MAHa ( ur Turtle) WinkWink
Heart





Hey maha

Honored to see ur comment…n such n honor to know tth u peple are feelin the same the way I did writing the last part…

Thnku so much for finding a fresh aspect evrytime in this ff

 

Kya kero real life mein tu milty nhi islyan khani mein likh lik ker khush holoo

Haha ..im soo glad u loved all the scene n hospital n raj's converstion

 

My all hard work is payed if im able to put a smile on ur face ..thnkuu

 

OMG..u almost summarized ardhngini morethn the way I did

Thnkuu for writing a better epilogue

 

Lov ya too dear..n stop thnking me….just always rember me in ur prayers

U know I have n idea jumping in my head….so surly after making walking with u in stable position I'll strt the new one ..very soon….

 

Lov ya

Fiza

 

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -roshnee-

it was all over a treat to read ardhangini. this particular love story was so different from the others cuz there was selflessness in this. and thats what real love is. its selfless. i so loved those days when mayank was sick and nupur took care of him. i saw some wonderful bonds here as well as some namesake relation.
i thoroughly enjoyed it. thanks for writing it.
 
 

hey roshnee

thnks for being here…I have always enjoyed ur stement sumhow or the other ..u sumerize an update beautifully in aline or two….wch made me feel tht I was able to convey wht I want too

 

thnku so much for calling it a different story …thnku so very much for atyimg here thoughout the journey

 

hope I m always able to make u connected to my writing

lov fiza

 

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arjun-forever

amazing fiza...
loved the entire story...
everything together makes the story beautiful...so really difficult to choose one part...
brilliant end
thnku soo much dear
 
gald u loved the whole story together...so houred to see ur coments
thnks fr joining this journey with me
 
lov fiza
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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by palz_ArTi4ever

i myself am teary eyed that u ended this ff..it was really vry close to my heart...plzzz come with a new mayur concept asap...this one was classic...loved every bit of it..a perfect ending to a perfect love story...Embarrassed
 
 

Hey palz..

Thnks a loot

Thts so sweet of u for connecting so much with this story..belive me for me myself its very close to heart …

OMG….classicc…im feeling dizzies….i cant just say anything above thnks just shrt of words for the love u all showered

 

Thnkus soo much….i''ll cum up soon

Fiza

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