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MNff...ARDHANGINI..TH#2..last part...18/6.PG 33 (Page 23)

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 9:51am | IP Logged
sab se pehlay tu thanks a lot for updating it...as i am eagerly w8ing for tht.but wht would happen after 3 days...jab yeh finish hujayi ga...CryCryCry...aisa nai husakta k u iska sequeal start karoo...Wink.kaisa idea hai...?/??SmileSmile...lash na...LOLLOL pls think over it...

now cum to the update...

hmmm...it was fab, awsome update...HugHugHug...anr 7 rounds was just mindblowing of mayank and nupur's...ROFL

his is my humble submission to you that when you give me the responsibility of the home...food...taking care of the household activities...i promise you that i shall discharge all responsibilities for welfare of the family members and children...!!!

Mayank: isi  baaat ka tu daar hai

Nupur: matlab..

Mayank: nupur n house hold just imagine

Shilpa hits her head…yeah loog yaha bhi serious nhi hosaktay…..

Nupur: acha… tu hum apny style mein promise laytay hain…as per ur wish ...mein ghar k koi kam akelay nhi kero gi...tum meray her kam , her responsibility mein mera sath doo

tht was awsome...LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL...i loved it...
and mayank dad uff...wht a chracter he is...swettt...SmileSmile



Mayank: i do sweet heart ...

ND: threw a flower at him...rukh jao yahi per..

Mayank: ab ap kyun gabar ban gay

ND: bolo…tum single minded ..single hearted ..n single eyed raho gay …

Mayank: tu kya zindagi bhar is ko ek ankh se dekho ga….

ND: mayank…

Mayank: oki oki….I do…tumahry elawa sapny mein bhi kis k bary mein na socho ga ….na dekho ga….

ND: better…wran kuch bhi dkhny k qabal nhi raho ga

Mayank: putting his hand on his waist ..ap ko mjhy per trust nhi

ND: hai…per why shud I wont b part of this fun…im liking this style

and this part...ROFLROFL ROFL i am through laugh while reading this...i can imagine this scene as well..k kiya hurah ahugarouds laitai time...LOLLOL

and child wala part bhi buhat zabardast tha...

this update was really really amusing...Big smileBig smile


now m eagerly w8ing for tomorows update...Smile

thanks a lot for ging us such a beautiful ff...

love ya lot...Smile

yar i missed u lot today...CryCry


ROFL

Edited by drmaha - 15 June 2011 at 10:10am

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Wow Fiza
it was fantastic update
hehehehehee  mayur were too funny...- loved mayus nautanki
loved they way they were taking shaadi wala promises...it was damn cute...
loved the whole update...
i've enjoyed it a lot

fantastic job dear
keep updatng



Edited by -Faria- - 15 June 2011 at 12:08pm

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Cute updateEmbarrassed
Mayur and their whole family is havng fun durng the marriage..LOLLOL..aur dono kitna dramatic haiEmbarrassed
Update the next part soonSmile

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Simply amazing update sis
each vow was fantastic n beautiful words
my fav is this 1Bride...My beloved i will decorate you from feet to head with lots of happiness of different flowers...garlands...ornaments and fragrance...i will please you in every way i can...!!!
thank u so much hun for updating Hug 
n sure will remember u in my prayers
but sad this wonderful FF is going to end Cry

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
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Yaar yeh double treat dena Mayur aur Mayurians ka fav game hai rightWink...Mayur ne double promises liya n tumne double update ka treat diya Smile...thankyou...!!!

Mayank's father is really a devoted father...maybe he is wrong to some extent to Mayank which he too don't denies but that ddin't over shadow him as a good father...he defo is very much concerned for his son...he loves him way too much...though Mayank restricted him in every way to interfere in his life still he made sure to be there always for him...we can't deny that if it was not him then Sam would have been succeeded way back...he made sure to help Mayur in all possible way though not being on focus...Good to know Sam got the punishment he deserve...if not Mayur but someone had to punish him n who else would be better than his own parents...u covered up this particular part with such smoothness...brilliant work...!!!

Now comes the most awaited shaadi...dreamy n funfilled...arre yaar Mayur n Fun ka choli daaman ka saath hai...both r incomplete without each other...aur yeh double promises wala shaadi tou we can only expect from our beloved Mayur naLOL...ab hatke jodi hai tou hatke shaadi bhi to honi chahiye...!!!

Full on masti masti mood wala Dulha aur Sasur ho to shaadi rukhi sukhi kaisey ho sakti hai...aur hum kitni baar kahe I LOVE this duo...waise i don't mind saying it agn n agnWink ...jaisa Damaad waisey Sasur...Kanyadaan bhi kiya tou puri filmy style mein..."Day Doon"...hahahaa...!!!

7 waday aur 5 mins sochne ko...LOL...Mayank n his shock giving nature...well very much expected...akhir  Mayur ki shaadi hai...the craziest couple who makes ppl go crazy without much effort...bechare Pandit ji ShockedLOL...!!!

Their self promises were so much fun yet it reflects their Love...Care...Concern...and above all Trust...!!!

Those punches in between pheras are damn hilarious...."Ab aap kyun gabbar ban gaye hai ROFL..."To kya zindagi bhar isko ek ankh se dekhon ga"ROFLROFL...ND bhi kuch kam kahan after all partner ka saath tou denge naLOL...aisey fun filled shaadi ho tou he won't be a part of this fun kya..."Kuch aur dekhne ke qabil nahi rahoge".LOL...!!!

Ab Nupur will feel left out akhir shaadi uski bhi tou haiLOL...so why she won't be participating in those masti..."Tumhari saari promises bachon se shuru hokar...n mujhe side line kar rahe hoLOL...well his Hubby is always soo ready to annoy her she should know LOL..."apne bachon se jealous...n meri Hum Tum ki Rani MukherjeeROFLROFL...God his sense of humour...!!!

Thank God they atleast agree on 1 promise for a change...soo much relief  for ppl around themLOL...!!!

Pati Parmeshwar n Prabhoo...I DO...was no lessLOL...!!!

LMAO Mayank ki soo excited that forget  sindoor n Mangalsutra rasm...!!!

Aww how sweetly he thanks ND for being there everytime they needed...so touchy n emotional...!!!

Aisey Rocking shaadi sirf Mayur ki hi hosakti hai BY GOD Embarrassed...JAI HO Mayur n Mayurians ki...!!!

Now blessing time guys...May they live happily ever after...!!!
 





Edited by valiyah27 - 16 June 2011 at 6:08am

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged
fantastic update Fiza!
very well written Clap
finally mayur married Big smile
in ki nautanki to mandap mei bhi khatam nai hui LOL
loved their cute nok-jhok Embarrassed
update the next part soon
nd thnx for the pm Smile

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

sab se pehlay tu thanks a lot for updating it...as i am eagerly w8ing for tht.but wht would happen after 3 days...jab yeh finish hujayi ga...CryCryCry...aisa nai husakta k u iska sequeal start karoo...Wink.kaisa idea hai...?/??SmileSmile...lash na...LOLLOL pls think over it...

now cum to the update...

hmmm...it was fab, awsome update...HugHugHug...anr 7 rounds was just mindblowing of mayank and nupur's...ROFL

his is my humble submission to you that when you give me the responsibility of the home...food...taking care of the household activities...i promise you that i shall discharge all responsibilities for welfare of the family members and children...!!!

Mayank: isi  baaat ka tu daar hai

Nupur: matlab..

Mayank: nupur n house hold just imagine

Shilpa hits her head'yeah loog yaha bhi serious nhi hosaktay'..

Nupur: acha' tu hum apny style mein promise laytay hain'as per ur wish ...mein ghar k koi kam akelay nhi kero gi...tum meray her kam , her responsibility mein mera sath doo

tht was awsome...LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL...i loved it...
and mayank dad uff...wht a chracter he is...swettt...SmileSmile



Mayank: i do sweet heart ...

ND: threw a flower at him...rukh jao yahi per..

Mayank: ab ap kyun gabar ban gay

ND: bolo'tum single minded ..single hearted ..n single eyed raho gay '

Mayank: tu kya zindagi bhar is ko ek ankh se dekho ga'.

ND: mayank'

Mayank: oki oki'.I do'tumahry elawa sapny mein bhi kis k bary mein na socho ga '.na dekho ga'.

ND: better'wran kuch bhi dkhny k qabal nhi raho ga

Mayank: putting his hand on his waist ..ap ko mjhy per trust nhi

ND: hai'per why shud I wont b part of this fun'im liking this style

and this part...ROFLROFL ROFL i am through laugh while reading this...i can imagine this scene as well..k kiya hurah ahugarouds laitai time...LOLLOL

and child wala part bhi buhat zabardast tha...

this update was really really amusing...Big smileBig smile


now m eagerly w8ing for tomorows update...Smile

thanks a lot for ging us such a beautiful ff...

love ya lot...Smile

yar i missed u lot today...CryCry


ROFL
thnku sooo muc dear
ahh u know how much i have bothered u valiyahn jiya for this update...
thnks for liking n enjoying this part
yaar im missd u tooo...
 

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayur_eternal

Cute updateEmbarrassed
Mayur and their whole family is havng fun durng the marriage..LOLLOL..aur dono kitna dramatic haiEmbarrassed
Update the next part soonSmile
 
 
hey thnks dear
thnks for loving it
ya i want u alll to have fun till this ff end...n glad u r having to
nex part hopfull 2morow

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