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MNff...ARDHANGINI..TH#2..last part...18/6.PG 33 (Page 17)

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ginny09

awesomeee :D
but wat about sam , nothing usse sudhar do :P
n mayur zayada plz in next part 
mayur spl update :P
if u put urslf in mayanks shoe who loves his brother unconditionally wht u have down
ya next part mein sirf mayaur hongy as it will b last part...but need to wait for it

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Awesom update
 
do continue soon
thnks daer
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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
superb update Fiza!
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm Smile

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
wonderful update

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
mindblowing. I love it.

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
mayur marriage! finally!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
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Mayur's short n close scene is very very sweet...they had gone through soo much but their Love surpassed all odds...their love is their strength...she had gone through soo much still don't want to rush things n wants him to take all his time...he on the other hand didn't want to wait any longer...as he only wants her to be with him right now n ever...He is really the sweetest creature...though went through the worst deeds of Sam still is ready to forgive as his love for his brother is far more than his brother's hatred for him...poor thing want to live in illusion...Sam is really unlucky to loose this gem of a person...!!!

He can really forget all pain n can be himself around Nupur...loved the teasing session on terrace...Saas-Bahu punch is damn hillariousROFL...ND is no less u see...this Sasur-Damaad always ROCKSSS.....Kis ke side per...KKR...K ROFL...this time SA too joins them....beta adat daal lo....as in giving hint to get ready for Joru-ka-GhulamSillyLOL...!!!

Shopping part is touchy n funny too...ab bechare shopkeeper ko kya pata ki Mayu ji apni pyari Nupur ke liye kitne choosy haiEmbarrassed...loved the way he said....Ab sharmana band karo aur shopping bhi bas karoLOL...!!!

Jan mat mangna...awww how lovingly he made her realize that how much she meant to him n his life is soo precious as he tends to live n cherish with her in his lifetime...too good FizuClap...loved the way Nupur convinced him for his father...father-son convo is put up in a very realistic way...their hesitation...longiness...excitement...joy...all emotions r wel portrayed...!!!

Family scene on wedding day is very beautifully written...u managed to cover-up every little things in  a very smooth manner...ND is cherry on the top in this particular scene...he lighted the atmosphere in the most sweet n funny way of his....Aaj insaan lag rahe ho....LOL...damn funny man...he plays the HEART of this FF...!!!

Brouch part is very touchy...Mayank soo misses his brother...bechara...!!!

Yaar yeh Mayank bhi na..damn sweet thing ever created on earthEmbarrassed...Ahhh he soo cares for his lady love...soo lovingly ask his mom to go n be with her as he knew she will miss her mom...such a sweetooo he isEmbarrassed...!!!

Hayeee kisi ki nazar na lagey...the most beautiful dulhan n the most handsome dulha on earth is on the way for the most awaited and dreamy shaadi Blushing...koi nazar utaro...!!!

Palkein bechaye...dil thamein baithey hai agle update ke intezar mein...aakhir shaadi jo attend karni hai of the one n only heavenly jodi...MAYUR...ki...!!!


Edited by valiyah27 - 12 June 2011 at 3:35am

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