MNff...ARDHANGINI..TH#2..last part...18/6.PG 33 - Page 24

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

 

 

hey even i dont know abt thm as of nt my religion ..help was frm jiya valiyah n maha

 

ur most welcum

i love to provide sumthng new..n whn geting u all so apprciative it feels so good...

 

 

PS..i hope ur nt anger on wht happen at neela's thread

no way. in-fact i loved debating with you on that matter.
i'm a debater by the way.
sorry if i've hurt you some where doing it.

superb update Fiza!

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

hey ridi..

thnks a loot ..

lol..so u know these charcter too well so u can expect such out n out weding nght

true...mayank is so tht only he can do it ...i miss him yaar😭

 

thnks a loot...

ya i know this characters...after all i love them...missing mayank too yaar...😭

Fiza outstanding Update and ist part was too good, phairas and Everything was so good, and loved the way when Mayank said sasur ji, it was Brilliant Part, and their Wedding night Part was too Romantic and i cant say much as i am still blushing and i am so Happy finally they are happy and belongs to each other..Fiza WonderFul Parts

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

superb update Fiza!

soo romantic 😳

update the next part soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

thnks dear

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Lovly update.😊

thnkuuu

Originally posted by: -moona-

Fiza outstanding Update and ist part was too good, phairas and Everything was so good, and loved the way when Mayank said sasur ji, it was Brilliant Part, and their Wedding night Part was too Romantic and i cant say much as i am still blushing and i am so Happy finally they are happy and belongs to each other..Fiza WonderFul Parts

thnku sooo much mona darling

Originally posted by: -roshnee-

no way. in-fact i loved debating with you on that matter.
i'm a debater by the way.
sorry if i've hurt you some where doing it.

ya tht i ca feel the way u were arguing😆..

Originally posted by: drmaha

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till whn ..im abt

CHAPTER 26 C (last part)

With passing days there are certain thngs tht do nt change 'if we assure n promise tht whtevr howerve we are'this the bst way thngs shud move''..

Yeah tuM ker kiay rahy hoo'

UFF NUPUR u have lost it'im cooking

Per meray kitchen ko kiya kiya''.

Ek tu wifey im cooking for u n u''

Acah pati dev kiya ban raha hai'..

Khatay aloo'.wanna taste'..he put one in her mouth.. waited for her expression for a moment

She closed her eyes'in tuich'.as it was too sour

Mayank..its to sour but thy r yumi'..hmm taste 'she offered him one

He grinned'

Sliding his hand on her waist he pull her close'..causing her to collide to him

I have better way to taste it'..n he leaned a sour yet sweet dish''

'''''.

Mayank agar tum meray asa pass bhi aay na ab tum mein tumhain maar dalo gi

Nupur..relax pls realx'.arms se clam down'

Clam down '.mera dil chah rah hai tumhara qatal kerdo''ahh

Nupur'hey shone im there with u na'.pls slow donw shout me ny wate ur enegy ../.bad mein mjy mar dal na'..abhi conc..

Ya im dying with pain right now'..yeah sab kuch tumhari wajaha se hoaa hai

I know I know'.but abhi pls realx'..pls'

With  one hand she was holding the starchier n with other his hand'so tigly tht her nails were too tiged in his skin..he didn't complained as she was in much more thn he can imainge..n moreover he was freaking out 'due to the sight'..

Here u go MR.sharam'.ur lillte boy..

He hold it with proud '.dekho nupur mera beta'.

We dropy eyes she looked at the little fellow'oye mera bhi hai''

He kissed her forehead'..thnks'..

Ur absoulty not at all welcum'..

Sorry'he said with so much guilt as if he was the only cause of all the pain

She chukled n collide her head with is''thanks stupis Sharma

He winked'ur more thn welcum'..hmm'hold him..he put there son in her arms'n she grip his hand'.n looked at him in guilt to wch he looked at her in surprise'..

Im sorry tumhara hath'.OMG '

There were very deep scres of nails on his hand''.

Heeyy'he put his arms around her shoulder'n sat beside her ..promised to share evrythng with u..itna pain tu share ker sakta hoon'haina'..

She kissed his cheek''

Be just like ur dad

No down b dumb in love like me''

Mayank'..pls'dnt'

Acha na'.phir se dahoot gi'pora labour room dekh raha tha ..pati per atiyachar

Acha aur mjhy per jo horaha tha woh kiya tha'.

Tu mein ny kiya kiya

Tum ny kya kiyaa'..

ND: ab kya kiya is ny

Mayank: batao batoo..kya kya kiya mein ny'.

Nupur: dad'mera beta''

He took him in his arms

Mayank: he is cute haina'..he said almost jumping in joy '.

ND; yes he is just like my daughter'he strt taping his feet'.crosing his arms arm his chest

MAyank: ap mera credit nhi lay saktay '.he is my soon

ND: bs is baat k daar hai'

Nupur: kya keray dad'.bs'.

Mayank: haaa''ab dono baab beti'.no prblm mein apny betay k sath team banoo ga'..kyun champ

''''''

 

Raj: dad'he hited hs head with hand'.ap phir bhool gay

ND: mayank tum gay ..aj nhi bacha sakta

Mayank: kya kero..us ko dekh ker wasy hi kuch yaad nhi rehta'aur dates tu mjhy khabi yaad nhi rehti ..islyan tu hisroty k paper mein pasing marks aaty thy mera

Raj: too bad ..ur were such student '..very bad

ND chukled n mayank pass a glared to him

Mayank: bad k bachy dad ki help kerny k baj'mazk uratay hoo

ND: help urslef kyun ab sham k 7 bj rah hain'..

Mayank: hmm'I know my wife 'I'll handle her'.             She cant be mad at me'.

 

He moved in side the room with guilt'holding his ear he stod infrnt of her''

She moved her face other side n he came agin'."sorry"'.plss

Bowing down his head holding ear

Mauyank: u know n aim stupid Sharma'..pls maaf kerdo'im soory I forgot 'I didn't'I rember it til yesterday but pata nhi kasay aj bhool gaya'.sachi mein ny gift bhi liya tha'.

Mayank:  Nupur: kya yaar'.aur time waste nhi kerty chalo kuch kertay hai

Nupur: mein batao kiya keray

Mayank: kiya

Nupur:  us incedient ki yaad mein 2min silence'pls'.

mayank: nupsi plsss'..

he looked at her with plead guilt n love'..pls'sorry '

nupur: thik hai'Happy anniversary (nt the weding anversary)

mayank: moved fow n took her off feet in his embrace..tighly hold her '.i love u 'happy anniversary '

broking the hug he make her wore a smiple necklace wch he bought'n kissed her shoulder'.n whispered sorry before kissing her ear'..

nupur: its ok'.u always make feel special evry day'so it doenst matter if u forgot a spcieal day'.u have showered so much of love on me'tht ek din tu wajha bhool jaoo tu bhi chaly ga

mayank: tu tum mjhy kisi wajha se payr kerti hoo

nupur: uffu stupid mera woh matalb nhi tha'..

mayank: mera gift kaha hai'.

Nupur: subha diya tu tha'tab bhi yaad nhi aaya

Mayank: ohho'.ipad'.kya kero sweet heart'ap her roz mjhy itny sary gifts dayti hain k wajha jana mein zaroori nhi samhjta'

Nupur: acha '

Sliding his hand in her waist he pulled her near'so near tth she can feel her breath on his face

Maaynk: I want sumthng more

Nupur: kya'.

Mayank: idhir dekho'.

She looked at him n he signaled her wht he want s..she lowered her eyes

Mayank: kya nupur..itna sab kuch hogay humary beech aur tum ek kiss k lyan itna Sharma rahi hoo

Nupur mayankkk'.

Mayank: im nt gonna take it today'..i want u to give like u gave me at our wedng night'.he grined widly n she blushed like anything

Mayankkk''plsss'..

Nupur..pls'..

Close ur eyes

He did so n she looked at him lovingly how blissd she feel to have him in his life'.his love his care his gestures'.he himself has been the reason for her to live her life'

Mjhy itny payar se baad mein dekh layna abhi woh kero jo pati nhy kaha ha'

He oped his one eye n chukled 'she to smile widely'..

Common nupurr'

She raised her slef to tose n move fwd'n take an hold of his neck'.placing her lips on his'he griped her from her waist..n pulled her near'moving inside'.he holde her with bth his hand '.take her of her feet'..she griped her hairs tighly n pulled him near 'if possible'..n explored him once agin'..

A knock on the door make thm came out of there world'he slowly put her back on her feet'

Raj: daad mom'.

He smiled listening to his son'n set his hairs..moving away he came back n peck her lps again

I love u 'n opened the door'

Mayank: yes champ

Raj: wht champ'ap ki wajha se mein ny mom ko gift bhi nhi diya

Nupur: dkha mera bety ko bhi yaad tha

Raj: ofcourse yaad the'mein ny khud cell me reminder lagay tha'.

Mayank laughed out loud n nupur shocked his head

Nupur: buklil baap per gaya hai'.

Here u goo'he fwd his gift to bth of thm

Mayank: can I open

Raj: ya plss..na jaldi se'he himself tor the raper n in exctment..n mayank was smiling at him

Mayank was so surprise to see a watch he saw tht day at shop n thought of buying n thn left for unknow reason''.yeah 'tum pagal ho kiya'from whn r u saving money for this

Raj: wht only six mounths'..

Mayank he kissd her forhead'thnku soo much dear

Raj: mom stop watching as like a filmy heroine n open it

Nupur open it n find apair of earrings in it ..smiple n elegant just thy way she likes..she too kissed him n the trio went to ND'thy bth bend down n took his blessing ..he hugeed mayank tighly'.sumwhere he realy repect him a lot for giving his daughter evrythng'..

Raj was watching thm n came upto mayank n was abt to bow down when he caught him

Mayank..wht r u doing ..dnt

Raj: why u always do this to nanao'so I shud b haina mom'..

She smiled with teary eyes n he took him in his arms hugging him'..n hold him tighly'.

At night she was palying with his shirt reting her head on his chest..n he on was playing with her hairs'

Mayank: nupur

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: thnku'.

She raised her head as his words have speciall feeling ot it

Maynak: thnks for being in my life'thnks for colliding with me the frst day'.thnks for scolding me the other '.thnks for caring for me whn I was injured..thnks for understanding me whn I wasn't abl to'thnks for holding me whn I was dying'.thnks for being mine'thnks for being my better half'thnks for being My ARDHANGINI''.

N hugged her tight'.convey much more..tht words cant

 

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago