OS.~Musical love story~updt completed - Page 5

superrb one dear sharan👍🏼

Part 4

On stage

Priya:…so ladies and gentlemen……….jara dil thaam ke bhaithiyee..

Prashu… kyuki aane wale hai aakpe dilo ke rajkumar

Priya..aapke jaane bahar

Prashu…bahut hi famous kalakaar

Priya...ab bass bhi kar na yaar……….plzz  welcome the singing sensation

Avdhesh singh thakur……………………

AST

Enters  on stage in fully  filmy style

AST… hello frns

R u ready for concert

Crowd….yesss

But there is no happiness,  no passion, in avi'S  voice. He noticed arpi sitting on her seat.

AST….lets play some Punjabi music…………………………

        Aaj din hashar da

         Kal mai nahi rehna

        Je laayi yaari

        Mull modhna paina

       Je to aagey vadhiya tainu farak ne paina

     Je mai peeche hatt  gaya

     Mera kuch vi ni rehna…………………………😭😭

Arpita leaved the haal and came back to her house. She is very sad. She got one voice msg on her landline phone……

Voice msg..😕

"Hey arpita, sorry beta.we had solved that case…I mean one year ago MMS scandle…..

We r really very sorry beta that was not true. Avdhesh solve that case after u r expelled fron academy…it was rv who do this cheap thing…..

I want to contact u ealier but I can't find u r address or phone number…."it was from  miss ramona owner of music academy😛

Arpita shocked and feel guilty that she didn't trust on avi and believed rv…

Arpi.. ohh no………. how can I do this???? I can't trust avi.

Oh god!!1 kitni badi galti ho gayi………….

She ran towards motimahal

 

kya hoga aagey??😕😕😕

jan ne ke liye aate rahiye gkd forum pe😳😆😆

thanxxx

sharan😳

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by danno - 12 years ago

Hey munni 🤗Edited by yoga23priya - 12 years ago

Ok me not first sec to hai naa😉

oye Sharan what a update yaar👏

 

ur Hosts for eve were great😆😆

 

n Avi ka gaana uuulala kya dengerous lyrics hai yaar is it new one or some old panjabi sorry to ask but meri Panjabi songs ki knowladge thori kamzoor hai😳

 

wow Arpi knows Avi was innocent thanx to Ramona madam😆

 

yaar plz no twist ab bas mila do zaldi se,

 

plz yaar update soon me waiting😍

Edited by joliefille - 12 years ago

Jalebi😳😉


Finally truth is out!! nd Arpi knws Avi is innocent!!!😳


nd  now they wld be together😍


Lovely update😳😳😳😳😃😃

Muaaahh...

Eagerly waiting fr next one..Jaldi Jaldi se update karna😉😆

Love ya

       
            
Edited by prash_t - 12 years ago

Updated posts on page 5 and 6😉

Sharan, thanks for this update. I loved how Prashu and Priya introduced Avi but the poor guy had no heart to perform. I'm happy that Arpi found out the truth. I can't wait for Avita's reunion. 

Lovely update sharu...BRILLIANT piece of writing ...keep it up!😃

now will avi forgive arpita

Part 4- OMG.. Poor Avi. So much pain & Passion in his voice. Thanks to me, I told that Arpita everything.. Sweetheart & Toofaan did a good job, but kitna time waste kiya.. Dnt they know that Im waiting for Avi to come.. Overall, it was a wonderful update