Gunahon Ka Devta


Gunahon Ka Devta
Gunahon Ka Devta

OS.~Musical love story~updt completed

danno IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
    Hello friends,Smile
                         First time i have tried something new kuch hatt ke...Wink
                               if their is any mistake plzz forgive me..
                                MUSICAL LOVE STORY
                                                         Part 1

"wow!!!!AST's live concert" screamed  manjiri.LOL

She is in a cafe with her hubby kanooEmbarrassed and best friend Arpita.she is talking abt live concert of singing superstar,singing sensation Avdhesh singh thakur.Embarrassed

Arpita   :I don't like music rather I don't like AST.Confused

Manjiri  :kya yaar phle toh tumhe music bada pasand tha..kya gaata

Hai yaar AST,ek dum mast'''

Kanno  :musze bhi jyada handsome lagta hai tumhe who????

Manjiri   :ha lagta hai'. Toh??? (she is teasing her hubby)

Kanno  :common arpita don't say this na,chalo na yaar'.

Arpita : no yaar plzz don't force me''

Manjiri :no if no but saath chalna hai jhat patt''samji ke nahi'.

 Arpita agreed because she didn't want to break kanoo and manjiri's sweat heart..

Kanno   : concert is tommorow at sharp 9:00 pm.tyaar rehna hum tumhe  kal yahi se kidnap karenge'hehehe'

Arpita : mai tyaaar rahongi okk byee c ya'..


Next day:::::

Arpita is getting ready for concert but she didn't want to go to AST's  concert

Arpita to herself  : kya yaar, mere ko nahi jaana hai'per uss manjiri ko kon samjayega'..mai uska chehre kabi nahi dekhna chahti the'..

 While saying she stopped and lost in his thoughts'..there are some tears shedding through her blackish eyes'.


she got one msg from majiri'

"arpita tyaar hui ya nahi ke mai aao..tumhe toh pata hi hai ki agar mai waha aa gayi toh''.." .arpita laughed and reply that she is ready'


why arpita don't like music???Confused

What was her past  which bring tears in her eyes????Confused

press likewa if u r like my first attemptTongue

will update soon...Tongue

Edited by danno - 04 June 2011 at 5:19am

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yoga23priya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Heyyy Muniii Hug

look who is editing the post finally ROFL

mUnNi Congo Shongo on your first OS Clap Clap Clap

Avi is a Rock Star Shocked Blushing Blushing ROFL

btw Arpi doesn't like Avi...Interesting Ermm

love ya Hug

Edited by yoga23priya - 06 July 2011 at 8:53am

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ozzyie IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 7755

Posted: 18 May 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Hey sharanClap

its really hatke dear.WinkClap
I do waant to kw .. why Arpi doesn't likes music anymore.Cry
Waitin eagerly...

update soon dear.

Edited by ozzy88 - 18 May 2011 at 7:28am

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rainurubal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
nice start...
aage kya hoga...
thanks for pm

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-Prashu- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged

                    for ur first OSEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

AST is a rockstarStarStar Though he really isHeart

Arpi dsnt like music or ASTOuchOuchOuch

Loved it...Plzzz ContinueEmbarrassed

M waiting fr next one JalebiEmbarrassed


Edited by prash_t - 23 May 2011 at 2:08am

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chatterbox IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 9:39am | IP Logged
hmm interesting   here also past is there

good start sharan

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Sidda8 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 7877

Posted: 18 May 2011 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Sharan, your OS sounds very compelling. I'm excited for it. Can Avi also play the guitar? I would love to see him in a band with his gang. 
KYPH-AK IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
sharu eik dum awesome start hai...ClapClapwaiting to read further Big smile

Edited by KYPH-AK - 18 May 2011 at 9:05pm

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