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Imperfectly Perfect -short story UPDATE 6/30, Pg 8 (Page 7)

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
What an update. Stupendous. ClapClap

From Shravan's confusion to Sanchi's understanding to doctor's amusement to Bunty's earful to Shravan's acceptance: everything was so perfectly written and expressed.
Shravan needed a kick to make him accept that he indeed had fallen in love with Sanchi and I am very glad that kick was done by Bunty. It was like he put a mirror in front of Shravan's face and made him face the reality. For me, he was the star of the day as he didn't back down from what he was trying to do and eventually succeeded. Now all lies on Shravan alone on how long he will take to express his feelings to Sanchi.

Great update, Anu.Clap


Edited by jahnvi.angel10 - 12 June 2011 at 9:51pm

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Awesome update anu. Ive been checking this topic everyday, eagerly waiting for you to update. I cant wait to read how shravan confesses his love.

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
I absolutely loved it.  Cant wait for ur next update.

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 12:08am | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!!ClapClap loved everything in it - shravan's confusion at the doctor's (was hilariousLOL) , his meeting with Bunty (that guy is a gem!!!Smile),the slow realization...eagerly waiting for the next update!!SmileSmile

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Fantabulous update Anu.
 
What a hilarity to see(yes the description was so vivid i felt i was there at the hospital) Shravan undergoing a range of emotions from wonderment, to embarassment to insecureness to protectiveness; a medely of emotions any would be  father  will feel during those times. only difference is he is yet to realise his deep seated love for the one and only Saachi.
Waiting eagerly for the next update.

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Anu what a great updateClap From Shravan's confusion to the double date...! Can't wait for the next chapter...!

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Very well written anu!!,you described his mixed feelings at the hospital nicelyClapWhole check up thing was absolutely fantastic!!.
 
bunty is the only person with brain among the 'three idiots. he never steps back to express his mind.
 
All the character's convo is really real  and i love this ff very much for it!!Tongue

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great update lol i can imagine shraven confuseddd lol

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