Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

ManeetFF:Ek Prem Kahaani|Chp3:JanamDin|Pg.6

-Shankar- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 6:57pm | IP Logged


 hola maaneetians!
 here is my FF titled 'Ek Prem Kahaani'
 first chapter is really short!
 it's in the post below...
 please comment / click LIKE button.
 thanks Smile
Chapter 1: Pg. 1
Chapter 2: Pg. 4
Chapter 3: Pg. 6

Edited by -Shankar- - 29 May 2011 at 5:45pm

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-Shankar- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 6:58pm | IP Logged
 Chapter 1: Mera Zindagi
Hi! My name is Geet. To be honest, I'm clueless of my last name. Actually, I am an orphan. I went from home to home, and I am sick of it. Right now, I am just an ordinary Indian girl living in a small house with a sufficient salary. Enough about me, lemme get to the real stuff! Hope you enjoy my unique story.


*ring* *ring* I am awakened by the annoying sound of my cell phone. I am exhausted. It's 6 in the morning! I'm late for work! Yeh, 6 o'clock is 'late' for my boss. I look at my cell phone. Nine missed calls! Oh no! I'm in real trouble now. Ooh! An SMS from... Mr. Dev, wait, what's my boss's last name again? I forgot. Oh well. He's really going to kill me now. You don't need to know this part of the story... fast forward!

So it's a couple minutes past 7. I just reached work. Dressed in my loose white button-up shirt and knee-length jet black skirt, I confidently (not really) walk down the aisle to my seat. I work in a bank called... oh no! I am so forgetful.

"GEEETT!!!" I never thought the sound of my own name would hurt so much. It was like someone stabbed my over and over again.

"Yes, Mr. Dev"

"Tum, itne late kyu ho?"

"Uhh, I woke up a little late. Maaf karo mujhe, sir"

"Okay, but don't do it again!"

"Okay, sir."

What just happened? It was like the devil turned into an angel. Something is fishy. And I am NOT trying to find out. I just want to get home and relax! The hours past quickly between helping customers and listening to gossip about why Mr. Dev... Kapoor, that's his name, was so nice today. By 9 o'clock, my knees are ready to collapse. But I was looking forward for tomorrow... my day off! I head off to bed. *snore*


*buzz* My alarm clock finally worked; great day so far! I take a shower and put on my red salwar kameez. It itches a little but that soon subsides. With my pooja thali ready, I head off to the mandir, a few minutes shy of 5 o'clock in the morning. It's dark, gloomy. I think that it will rain. I better hurry up! I walk quickly till I reach the steps of the mandir. They are slippery. I'm reminded of yesterday. Why was Mr. Dev so nice? There must be some reason! Ugghh! I shouldn't be bothered with that today. Didn't I tell you? Today is my birthday! It's the first one that I had it is a little special. I ring the mandir bell with my right hand. Suddenly, I smile. Why? Why do I feel that today, something will happen? Something that will change my life?

hope u liked the first part.
will only continue if I get postivie response.
btw, it is told from Geet's point of view.

Edited by -Shankar- - 19 May 2011 at 5:19pm

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shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 8:01pm | IP Logged
wow..amazing concepts.
love it
cant wait for the nxt update
do contiune plz.
plz..add me to yr pm list

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mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
great concept
pls update soonnn
pls do pm me


Edited by sharmake11 - 17 May 2011 at 9:49pm

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--Saavi-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Nice Start,please continue...

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sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:15am | IP Logged
nice start
plzz continue
and add me to the pm list
pickachu IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 26 October 2009
Posts: 27731

Posted: 18 May 2011 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Loveee the concept!!
Continue soonnn.
Can u plzz add me in ur pm list?


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Downhill IF-Addictz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 1:24am | IP Logged
plzz add me in...
sounds promising...
will be waiting for the updates
keep writing

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