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JayaR IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
now really who is behaving like a DODO...  Man he is such a confused soul... just a few moments ago he didn't like the fact that the Grooms side was to come to see her...and now...he is asking her to take a look at him and then decide...what has gotten into him????

I think he needs some real bashing...

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Sabmeratu. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Me waitinggg!!!!Day Dreaming

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muskanp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:59am | IP Logged

Khud sah nahi payen ga agar koi mujhe dehken ga tho. Aab dodo ki tarah kaun behave kar raha hain.. why can't he just keep quiet khud hi aapne paavn main khuladi mar rahan hain. She smiled dossing off.

Maan happily went to his room.. something was bothering him. He didn't know wat it was. He was definitley happy for his dodo.. but then why was he so uneasy. he just couldn't sleep.

Next day Geet was fast a sleep when Maan sneaked into her room. He fished her suitcase there was nothing much of option. He decided to ask aunty. He rushed to the kitchen, where every one was arranging snacks for the ladkhen walen. He pulled Rano aside dodo ke liyen koi aachi se dress do na.
Rano - meri cupboard se len len
Maan - ji
he ran to her room, he saw few suits & then finally picked a nice beautiful red saree. He also picked matching jewelry. He came in very slowly, he heard her turn around in sleep, her payal sound was so prominent in the otherwise silent room. She was uncomfortable with something. He smiled, he knew it was her pillow..the one she usually holds while sleeping. She was looking for it in her sleep. He bend down to get it, she held his hand instead.

Her touch, her hold he felt 100 million volts of current ran threw him. He gulped hard, she was cutely tucking his hand imagining it as her pillow. She held it under her face. He sat down lost in that face... her curly hair beautifully falling all over her face. He smiled & looked away. He didn't want to keep looking at her.. he was sure to lose himself. He tried to pull away.. she tucked in closer.. humesha mujhe chodke challen jathen ho... she cried in her sleep.  He felt a lump form in his heart. He pushed the curls behind her lovingly. She smiled in her sleep feeling his touch.. her cheeks turned pink.. knowing it was his touch.. she giggled as his touch now tickled her a bit behind the ear. He didn't know wat he was doing.. he inched closer & closer.. her lips looked so beautiful with that smile.. he was so close, he could feel her breath fanning him.. making him breathless.. it was driving him.. even closer, his heart beat was rising, his lips were going dry..he unknowingly closed hid eyes, when she suddenly opened her eyes & jerked sealing the distance between them.. his eyes popped open.. her eyes widened.. he couldn't breath anymore.. all him just wanted to part his lips & take in those beautiful, delicate petals.. but all he could do was innocently blink continuously.. he didn't even think of moving away instead was feeling her.. like he always knew this how it feels.. & he couldn't resist himself further... she realized she was holding his hand, she was moving closer.. she slipped away.. trying to look for her duppta.. he immediately stood up & turned his back. Woh..main.. I got this for u..
she snapped yah kya hain
he turned to look at her.. oh god she looked so temptingly beautiful.. he could still feel the touch ..that burned.. invariably his gaze wandered to the lips.. she immediately blushed.. & her hands knotted the duppata. He put the saree on around her head & tilted his head..looking into those deep almond eyes.. & nodded umm... her cheeks burned.. as she nodded back.. lost in those eyes.

She took the dress & went to the wash room.. cursing herself.. tu jhali.. hain.. patanahi tujhe kya hojataha hain iske samne.. kya zarorat thi.. haan bolne ki.. she wore the saree after having a bath & came out drying her hair.. he raised instantly... his jaws dropped.. open.. he kept gaping at her. She looked magical.. he was blown away.. his heart probably just missed few beats.. he wanted to just steal her away from her from every one ... His gaze desirably scanned all her.. again & again.. drinking every bit of her beauty.. the wet hair was making it more sensuous.. she bend her head side ways, drying her hair... exposing her curves.. she looked at him from corner of her eyes & pulled her pallo as his gaze had already slipped to tha now.. he came closer.. took the towel from her.. genie... she wanted to stop.. but it came out more like a moan.. he wiped her scalp softly.. cupping her face.. pulling her closer.. he was about to do.. wat he himself didn't know .. when they heard raji..
jiji.. ladken walen aa gaya..
Geet face was wild as she snapped the towel from his hand & twitched her lips.
He clinched his fist in anger.. he didn't like it.. someone seeing her .. that too when she looking so gorgeous.. no.. no ways.
Yah saree acha nahi hain..he said restlessly
she looked at him in shock.. he was looking down ..a smiled touched her lips..
he angrily looked for something in the suitcase.. he picked randomly a suit.. yeh teehk hain
she couldn't control her laughter..  yeh
kyun ismain kya problem hain
genie yeh night suit hain
.. she could clearly see him burning red.. within.. she was enjoying it ..
mujhe nahi change karna & walked pass him..

he held her wrist & pulled her back angrily.. turning it in & pulling it hard.. it was hurtng.. but a sweet pain..she felt. As it was his possessiveness with jealousy
genie.. she cried in pain...

tum yeh nahi phenogi bus!!
He turned her hand backward.. snapping her bangles.. kha na ..nahi tho nahi..bus!!
he left her hand & threw another simple white suit at her face & walked out
he didn't know why he did that.. why did he want her to change into a simpler dress.. when he knew she looked really beautiful in that. Why ..wat was wrong with him??

he furiously walked to into the all just to see the guy who had come to see Geet!!! a typical punjabi muda!!

he scanned him top to bottom..he looked exactly wat his dodo will fall for. His expressions turned miserably. But he was looking for some thing odd.. though he couldn't...then yah guy from village.. why will his dodo want a village settled guy .. avery short lived part ..thats when papaji introduced Maan.
Papaji - this is Rahul.. settled in london.
Maan almost choked...
rahul - hi.. in typical british accent.
Muskan would see fumes flying out of genie's ears..
papaji - rahul beta this is Maan .. geets best friend.
Maan had to extend his hand.. oh!! god he hated it..
Rano - Maan puttar issen hawali dhika do
Maan nodded sadly & gave a very fake smile to rahul & took him around. At one moment he wanted to push him off the roof.. then felt like strangling him.
-BLOG maitri part 31-

ShockedMaan spying on geet OHHHD'oh

thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment

Edited by muskanp - 23 May 2011 at 11:26am

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:59am | IP Logged
gr8 part..

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beautifully written... Smile

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Awesome update::
Awww loved maans posessiveness over geet & how he made her change her clothes cuz he can't bear any man lukin at his genie besides him
Haha luvin the precap,,,maan007 Mission to spy on geet & RahulLOL
cont soon Xx...

Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 22 May 2011 at 12:12pm

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my_maan_geet Goldie

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
omg maan burning in jealousy...i can smell fumes hereWink...

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