~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 4 - Page 26

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She was so angry with Maan for putting her in this trouble, that she failed to realize she was not going to see her best buddy ever again. He was so thrilled about his new life with kavitha that he didn't bother to keep track of his dodo.

 
He slowly reached to her. She wiped her tears & turned immediately to face him. It was bit odd for him to digest the fact that she loved somene... but it was her..his dodo.. things couldn't stay odd for long. So my dodo loved someone. He teased her. Her cheek turned red in embarrassment. She tried to look away.
He cupped her face to look at him
mujhe bataya bhi nahi
a tear formed in her eyes. Wish u were there her voice crushed into his embrace as he pulled her in for a bear hug. He knew it was his mistake, he should have been there, at least kept in touch, she would never hide anything from him. I am sorry he said painfully.
He kissed her head, he could feel himself hardening in her embrace, her hand slipping on his back was not helping. His hand caressed her waist savoring the softness, delicacy of her curves under his palm.  Her heart was beating erotically against his heart which seemed to follow. He pulled away straightening himself, cleared his throat well I am there now.
She smiled & turned to look at the view of the field.
He was here to talk to her about all the ladki dehkna stuff & he can't even take his eyes off her. He was definitely in trouble. He gather all his wit, pushing his odd felt physical urges away .. he finally tried to talk on wat he was he for. Kal ladken walen aa rahen tumhen dehkne
the least she expected from him. How could he.. a min ago his heart was beating for her with her, in sink with hers..& now he says all this, he definitely have lost it.  She clinched her fist, she was getting irritated more annoyed at his silly attempt to even mention this to her.
Mujhe koi ladhka nahi dehkna she said it in an irritated tone
he was strangely very happy
dehkne main kya hain..shadhi thodikarni hain
genie kaha na nahi tho nahi. Waisen bhi tum in sab main mat padho
u r getting even with me aren't u he said it in a sad tone
she turned to face him wondering wat even is he talking about?
Main ne tumhe kaha tha don't interfere in my personal life, thats why u r saying this to me now
woh tumne gussen main kahan tha.. I know u didn't mean anything
tum mujhe se naraz nahi thi...he asked curiously
Thi .. his heart sunk
lekin usse baat ke liyen nahi.. he wondered phir kis baat ke liyen
tumhari wajah se sab mujhe jaane se mana kar rahen the.. I really had to fight with them & go. It was all so difficult.He made a baby face sorry.
She smiled.. thats ok.. main ne bhi unhe mana hi liya.. she smiled victoriously.
How did u do that?
Main ne unhe dhamiki di
his eyes popped out
I said I will run away
he laughed .. tu sach main dodo hain

Maan happily went to his room.. something was bothering him. He didn't know wat it was. He was definitley happy for his dodo.. but then why was he so uneasy. he just couldn't sleep.

Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago

Edited:

Yaaay Me first 😃
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Should be revising but couldn't stop myself from commenting today... 😆😛
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Awesome update baji loved it all...😃

Loved the conversation between Maaneet... 😍😳
It was quite emotional as well, feel sorry for Geet as Maan was never there for her, something must have happened between him and that girl he was with that is why he hates his past soo much...

Oh Maan he really is a dodo, he has such strong feelings for Geet 😳 and he has taken up the challange of getting Geet to see the ladken wale...

He just about manages to control himself when he hugs her, and he is after Geet meeting the boys side 😆

Love how Geet knows that Maan will not be able to bear seeing her with anyone else and she knows he will burn seeing her with anyone else... 😆

But Maan will only find out when he goes through the burning sensation... 😃 And his restlessness has only just started 😉

Hope Geet really patoes the ladken wale 😆
Precap looks good seems like Geet has started her pataoing, but would be even better if it was Maan who was trying to make sure that the ladken wale don't agree 😉😆 can't wait to read the next update... 😊
xx


Edited by humz_786 - 12 years ago

res sry double post...Edited by my_maan_geet - 12 years ago

Maan singh khurana u r really becomind dodo
 
if u let her go buddy soon her kids will tell you Maan mama

you have lost it
Edited by heermeher - 12 years ago

awesum update

omg maan to geet se bhi bada dodo nikla...why can't he understand her...kab samjh aaua sabkuch di...looking forward for maan doin mahman nawaji of ladkewale😆...

Thanks for d update 😳 yippy! * edit* 😃
lovely part.Geet is absolutely right😆 Uff! maan is really d dodo 😡 trying to convince his dodo to meet a guy for marriage😲 he is on mission impossible 😉 oh! Gosh! He b so jealous pata nahi kya karega 😆 n looking forward to c how he takes care of d ladke walen .Please update soon 😳 Edited by siroilily - 12 years ago

Awesome update as usual...

he he..poor Maan...
I am sure now that Geet was and is in love with Maan 😛

that's very intersting i wonder who is the boy  & wt will be Maan's reaction i think he will be a big J😡😡  geet will be watching maan enjoying the big big J😉😉