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PR Reloaded- II (FF) Note on pg. 76- do read! (Page 73)

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
Niki

Thanks so very much for the updateHug such a lovely treat for us - today we got a double treat - confirmation of Sushant pepsi ad and your FF.

Will come back with my comments after reading

thanks again for it

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Nikita di thanks for the PM and update. It is really a beautiful update. Specially the sleeping arrangement on floor took me back to those days of PR. Really nice.
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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 12:40am | IP Logged
thnks for the pm n the update niki    ...


   what  do i say??   excellent excellent  writing...

         u hv shown us the small things that go on in a patients mind...
what feelings manav is going thru...   yes thats exactly he will feel   hes the one who took care of evrythng  of all the ppl in the house n now   all his ppl fluttering around him   he must be feeling so bad  ...    archu...aww...   shes a darling she understands evryone n evrythng  so well...

   now i just want manav to get well soon  n really soon  ...     Smile

  poor aai   realise what she feels now   wish she wouldnt hv hurt her ppl earlier

     love sachin !!   hes doing so much too...     loving how the family has got together...!

                    waiting for yet another exciting n touching update...!

n ya  thnks for that aww...cho chweet kiss !!  


n a spl. mention for the "pepsi Atom"  WinkLOL   u hv definitely given us an updated update...Wink
           likes...!!!!!!!!!!!Embarrassed


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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Thanx for the pm and the update NikkiHug
Ahh! What a wonderful update!
Love mannu when he scowls and acts like a spoilt kid when things are not going his way...he looks chho cute!...but poor thing must be feeling really frustrated and helpless at not being able to do anything,considering the fact that he has always been the backbone of his family...
Liked the way you put in " pepsi atom " in the story..."asli mard ke liye"!LOL
Loved how archu was patiently listening to manav while he was venting out all his frustration...loved how she tried to make him feel better in her own way...
The last bit  where manav admires his sleeping beauty and softly kisses her cheeks was so "awwlicious"Day Dreaming
Uff...why did that cheeky boy have to interrupt...kabab mein haddi!Angry
Had it not been for him,the romance would have continued <3
I wish that boy tells archu about the kiss next morning...she'll be all pink on the face!Blushing
Now eagerly awaiting the next update!Big smile

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 3:41am | IP Logged
wow.. finally an update..
i was worryin whethr u had left it...
thnx for t combak episode nikki..
n pls do update regularly.. bcoz we, fervent watchers of old PR r still waitin for ur PR-reloaded...

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Thanks nikki fr pm
Grt update dear ...love hw u used pepsi atom in ur update
And the boy is so naughty hw he is saying to manav k he will tell archu in d mrng hehe and manav ws so cute love hw he is saying k archu is his wife and he is nt afraid of her so cute ...loved manav's kiss on archu's cheek ...nw waiting fr d next update and some more romance of arman :)

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Hi Niki, Hug
First of all I must say no apology needed.
We all know how busy you are and truly appreciate the joy you give us with your FF! Smile

"Pepsi Atom!" LOL
Laughed so much when I read it the first time.
Quite the surprise Niki, as you always love to do...that is, to surprise us!
You are definitely current. Wink

I loved this update. It was gripping yet had a sense of peace to it.
I could feel the entire family bonding and growing closer together, and Manav maturing as well.
Great to see he and Ankita remain close and continue to understand and support each other.

I look forward to seeing what happens with the surgery and the recovery.
Also am eager to see what Sachin does with the garage and spare parts business.
I have a feeling he will succeed.Wink


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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged
heyyy.. niki.. what a comebackkk.. awesooomeee...
u know weeks after u updated the previous part.. I started missing this ff sooo much.. I had started reading it again from the begining.. just like I had started watching pr after sush left.. it is kinda refreshing u know.. the tiny things that u hav described.. keepiing the realistic aspect alive.. yet presenting an amazing story.. love it..

okk.. sooo cuming to the present update.. absolutely amazing.. ok I shuld find out somee new words.. as amazing fab have becum tooo common.. but then the little things that u describe..
the way u added the romance part.. with manav planting a kiss on archanas forehead.. awww was all I culd do.. reminded me of one episode wen manav had placed a kiss on archanas forehead.. it was after the leap.. n ankita wore a green Saree n sush black shirt.. that was a cute scene.. n the way u hav incorporated it here.. awesomee...
the way u described manav cribbing.. opening his heart out to archana.. clearly shows how their relation has developed.. from being just an unconsummated marriage.. to two ppl.. understanding each other.. even their silence can be understood..
n also the family members helping them.. specially manav.. how they hav becum one team.. taking care of their own manav.. who had been their support at a point.. yea.. def.. they hav to help him now.. n they understand it well..
I also really like the way ur story is developing.. like it takes care of all details.. a description.. wherein we can toally imagine yeh scene kaise hoga.. n never has it been dragging.. a perfect balance...
overall.. an amazing awesome n fantastic update.. pleasure to read...'
only one complain.. please dont keep us itnaaa waiting for the next part... n yeh as always.. update soon...
we know u too r busy.. but try for a weekly update.. hahaha.. greedy I hav beucm now..
neways waitinnggg...

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