Originally posted by umayal
Wow, a Nice part ,a Nice feeling and rather than saying enjoyable,I would say warming, Heat touching one which gave a Final good feel on reading.Glad you liked it Umi!
You said it was less romantic and it may come in upcoming parts.But this was the most needed one, wished to see between them in my view. archu telling those words I trust you the most, it was my fault to misunderstand you and Manav hearing those words, Really the needed one for ARMAN.It was about time, I guess.
As you had said always and you wanted to show, You finally showed it and did it.
Yes archu doesnt return because of evidence,First because of pure love and then mainly and cent percent due to understanding what a Man Manav is and was.
Actually this part was most needed as it had so many answers to the hooks you had put till now.
It started with varsha part and I thought we will come to know about varsha much, but a Pleasant surprise, the confession came and I just loved it.
Though still it was not ended with a open heart communication,Both told what they have to.
Archu telling him and making Manav Know what she felt,what is she doing and the most needed one, saying sorry for not trusting you, is what made my day.
Finally Manav heard those words, but Pappa, he is still not able to come over with it and fully believe.
But this togetherness is great. They finally on the path of togetherness just purely because of understanding,Love and Trust. I liked it. They have started their footsteps together and leaving footprints too, Just like on the seashore, I know they will leave more footprints on our hearts too by being together. We know you will give it Nikki.
Like archu trusting Manav, we trust you a Lot.
.Aww... thanks Umi! All of you make me emotional by saying such things. And I loved your analysis above!
Their confession, Turmoil, emotional feelings ,all are fine.
Nice to read.
I may have talked so much about archu's confession or might be repeating the same, sorry to bore like that, but again this was one part I wished to see in original one also. There was no such explicit scene in actual PR. for all that Manav went through, for all that He has done, for all the running he did behind her to prove himself, for all that chances he was not given, He deserve such a apology from archu. But Nope, instead of that , instead of this understanding and apology, they brought Shravani in between and made the whole fiasco turned against Manav and showing him as Helpless one with no second thought for archu.Don't even get me started on the Shravani track! It was utter rubbish and spoiled the whole story to an extent.
The Cvs have spoiled it.
I admit I am a archu fan, and yes I too feel sorry for her, it was not her fault to misunderstand, as manav said, the circumstances was as such and that 15 days wouldn't got much trust, I understand her , but she should have given a chance and later an apology for not giving that.
So though being a fan of old archu,I admit that Manav deserve that apology from her for not giving a chance and for what he went through.Awww... you are as fair as always Umi!
Ok enough of actual PR, back to Nikki's one. Yours as always expected.ArMan stayed true to their nature. Felt sorry for archu too. she was so broken but this outburst will surely give her good ones is what I feel, soon she will feel strong with the Love and support of Manav.
But Nikki, Like actual archu, here too she put all the Blame on herself.I know she was a reason too. But pour soul, putting all blame on her. too heavy to carry on.Archu is so emotional na Umi, that is why! She will always look at her own mistakes first.. I guess that is why she needs Manav in her life.
You had great dialogues and symbolics everywhere in this part.Thankyou!
I like the dialogue of manav ' in real life, nothing 'ideal' happens anyway.', Exactly. and the way archu built her sand House, symbolically says that with this patience,love and affection she will one day built her own house of love too with the Love from the deshmukhs. she will surely get it with her efforts, she will get the trust of Manav, Love from him is always there, so just her part to be accomplished is his belief on her. and then the Love of deshmukhs too she will get. And ofcourse with Manav;s support as pillar is what send form the fence part.Yup! This time the sand-house shall stand!
Ok here ends the essay on the emotional part.
Then comes your naughtiest and the more likeable one.
Ofcourse the likeable part and the person for it,
who could it be rather than the Entertainer Savita aai.
When you Hinted in the post to the member only,i was thinking what savita aai would do that will change the view, i was expecting, so when you said, archu reached home,I expected this tamasha from Savita aai only and she will give left and right to ajit.
But you naughty girl
, just like the Cvs promos, you scared first and hooked to read more.(I have the habit of reading line by line only,I wont jump), so when you said, she went to neighbors House and get the Key and went and ajit thinking archu was all alone,I was , oh god, what is this, I was expected something else.Haha! I scared you.. I scared you..!!!
But your execution was not like Cvs who say something in Promo and do something else in epi
It was upright same and more than expected and fun.
So there came the Entertainer savita aai opening the door saying 'I am the owner of the house,where else I would be'
, Then asking how dare you behave like this with the daughter in Law of this house ...
and phir her rocking performance and ajit's left,back, right, backfire,I loved it.
Hearing this behvaiour of savita aai really happy. Hmm...her hate for archu is not so big when compared to some other things i think, especially ajit, so there is hope for archu that she can gain savita's aai's support. Though Savita aai was not ready to accept and support, at least in her mind if she feels so, Thats enough.Oh yes, Savita is not THAT bad.
The last unexpected date was also good.
So dharmesh jaipurwala is there to enrich Manav's finance. going to build a good Business deal, fine with it.Oh yeah, he is finally here and for good!
Then finally come to Know about Varsha, Though how she is going to get relieved from all this ,How Arman are going to get info about her and how it is going to be proceed, keeping aside all these ques,Just knowing that she was safe and with abhi is fine with me.
Thanks for a well written and Nicely narrated part. Welcome Umi and I loved your comments as always!
Enjoyed reading it and asusual pleasure is always Ours.
asusual couldn't stop the thinking why it has ended, eager to read more,
So again, here eagerly waiting for your Next part.Will try and update soon!