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PR Reloaded- II (FF) Note on pg. 76- do read! (Page 43)

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Ok so the next part , manav is going to spill the beans about his illness ?
hmm ... Geek   ...
So many lil things you put in ...
1) Atya telling archu to figure out savita on her own ..
2) The varsha story finally moving ahead ..
3) Manav finally beginning to realise (?) what archu was trying to tell him , when she said she always loved him , but did a very good job of hiding it from the world and .. herself ..
4) The bit about atya knowing savita inside out .. and oh the house is in atya's name ?
5) abru nuksani track still on ( i liked this .. baba taking the initiative..)
6) and omg , both manav and archu surprised me ..
archu actually went on and on .. bheja frying manav .. putting forth one point after the another in her argument .. and wow ... manav actually got convinced by her argument... and is now preparing himself to tell everyone ...


lol .. I felt archu's arguments were aimed at me too .. LOL...  I am still not sure how I feel about this twist ...but .. ok .. I get it .. it is nearly impossible for a person to hide something this major from his family members any longer... what with him requiring hospitalization soon...

but .. plz ... I hope you dont show it like .. manav feeling guilty about lashing out at savita ,  when savita takes really good care of him .. or something like that .. I know you wont .. but just saying ...

And ya , nice to see atya back ..
one thing I am looking forward to in your FF , is to see how archu-savita form a cozy saas-bahu bond .. I think it would please manav immensely .. amuse the twins .. and lol .. confuse the chawl members even more .. if they see savita and archu laughing and joking around with each other..

And ya .. I am irritated at varsha too Sleepy .. even though I know her side of the story .. how difficult is it for her to talk to manav and archu directly ? That too in today's times when it is easy to contact a person...

and yes ... nice to see the ganesh chaturthi celebrations have started .. all the fun and games ..

Waiting for vandu's dance perf ...?
Is archu going to dance too ? Is manav going to dance? LOL  ..


Edited by lunza - 21 January 2012 at 9:48pm

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
and oh... dufus archu ... husband wife making up with a movie ..  LOL ..
maybe a year later --- a slightly .. bolder archu might say .. making out while watching a movie ..

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
fabulous update!!!!
jst too good!!!!
loved evrythng in this!!!!
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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lunza

and oh... dufus archu ... husband wife making up with a movie ..  LOL ..
maybe a year later --- a slightly .. bolder archu might say .. making out while watching a movie ..

 
 
Lunza,
Love this one.ROFLROFLROFL
Sounds more like our Ankita though.LOL

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Nikita,
Fantastic update! Worth the wait!
 
I loved it all, especially the fact that Archana and Manav were featured throughout the chapter. I'm now meeting Atya, as I missed most of your earlier parts. She seems like a nice lady, wise and measured. I know she will help Arman to repair their relationship. At the very least, Archana has someone else in her corner.
 
I loved the bedroom scene with Arman. They always seem to have their most profound discussions in their bedroom.Smile  Probably it's the only truly private place for them. It was good that Archana stood her ground against Manav and let him know how she really feels and what she thinks should be done. I'm also happy that Manav told Archana how he felt. This type of communication between them will only do well for their relationship.
 
The kitchen scenes were so sweet. Manav seems to be at his cutest and most vulnerable when he sees Archana working in the kitchen. I love these scenes. They seem like a couple very much in love in these scenes.Smile
 
The relationship between Archana and Atya is so genuine and sweet. Like saas/bahu.Smile I look forward to reading more about them. Poor Vandita, she still doesn't trust Archana, does she? Archana has her work cut out for her in this regard. Manav overhearing about the fast Archana kept for him when they were having difficulties in their relationship...I sense this having a positive impact on Arman's relationship. Wink  I can't wait for it to be taken to the next level.Wink
 
Enjoyed this part Nilita.Thumbs Up  Well done, and thank you for this wonderful birthday gift. I felt happier than normal to read this instalment of your FF on Sushant's birthday. Looking forward to the next part.Hug

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Posted: 22 January 2012 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lunza

Ok so the next part , manav is going to spill the beans about his illness ?
hmm ... Geek   ...
So many lil things you put in ...
1) Atya telling archu to figure out savita on her own ..
2) The varsha story finally moving ahead ..
3) Manav finally beginning to realise (?) what archu was trying to tell him , when she said she always loved him , but did a very good job of hiding it from the world and .. herself ..
4) The bit about atya knowing savita inside out .. and oh the house is in atya's name ?
5) abru nuksani track still on ( i liked this .. baba taking the initiative..)
6) and omg , both manav and archu surprised me ..
archu actually went on and on .. bheja frying manav .. putting forth one point after the another in her argument .. and wow ... manav actually got convinced by her argument... and is now preparing himself to tell everyone ...


lol .. I felt archu's arguments were aimed at me too .. LOL...  I am still not sure how I feel about this twist ...but .. ok .. I get it .. it is nearly impossible for a person to hide something this major from his family members any longer... what with him requiring hospitalization soon... Manav's disappointments with his family members is an important part of the story.. so it had to be dealt with..  It is to be seen whether the Deshmukhs can manage this trying time as a family or not, and surprise him this time round..

but .. plz ... I hope you dont show it like .. manav feeling guilty about lashing out at savita ,  when savita takes really good care of him .. or something like that .. I know you wont .. but just saying ...LOL No I won't.
And ya , nice to see atya back ..
one thing I am looking forward to in your FF , is to see how archu-savita form a cozy saas-bahu bond .. I think it would please manav immensely .. amuse the twins .. and lol .. confuse the chawl members even more .. if they see savita and archu laughing and joking around with each other..Will show that developing in future parts... without Savita Archu together, PR reloaded or ArMan can never have a happy ending.LOL

And ya .. I am irritated at varsha too Sleepy .. even though I know her side of the story .. how difficult is it for her to talk to manav and archu directly ? That too in today's times when it is easy to contact a person...Not someone like Manav who is not accessible to computers and not technology friendly.. Varsha sent telegrams earlier, cos Manav lost his cell, but Manav doesn't have Varsha's address, and then again the fear that the police might be keeping tabs on them... but then too I buy what you say.. Vaishali too said it in another part.. will write more about it soon..

and yes ... nice to see the ganesh chaturthi celebrations have started .. all the fun and games ..

Waiting for vandu's dance perf ...?
Is archu going to dance too ? Is manav going to dance? LOL  .. Yeah, he will dance on Pappu can't dance saala..LOL BTW ever seen the way Sushant dances as Manav? Very awkward and all- going with the character... the only segment where he danced thoda khulke was after their remarriage.

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Posted: 22 January 2012 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Loved the update Niki Thumbs Up 

Loving the progress in ArMan's relationship. Archana ruffling his hair while he slept was so sweet. Manav eavesdropping and staring at Archana was very sweet as well. Your descriptions are so vivid that I can feel and imagine the whole story Tongue

I really love this line as this is how I always felt about Archana: Intentions mattered as much as actions did, and Archana's intentions had never been bad for the Deshmukh family, though the family had certainly suffered due to the alliance.


   

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Posted: 22 January 2012 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Hai Nikki Smile,

Aww...Finally got the nest installment from you...So happy here...Big smile
On seeing the PM, rushed here to read it...

Nikki, you know ,actually i wont see what you have fully written or how many Parts you have provided , will start reading from the start,  sentence by sentence ,will enjoy it and read it...

Similarly, started today too, But was Shocked   when i saw the XXX very soon and your post after that...

Oh a short one this time. Unhappy.Unhappy... Disapprove    Disapprove...


But wouldn't find fault with you as you have updated on your busy schedule and most importantly
You have sweetly  made it up for me with showing Archu in a different light  , and cute scene between them in their room and in the Kitchen and then the revelation of archu's fast for Manav...


So I just loved this part too , just wanted more as i so loved yours and eager about it always...
But know that the next one will be a maha hit  as this has showed the light for many future tracks...


Loved Archu or should i say, this part showed the rays that I would love archu more in upcoming parts...
She hasnt shined much, but she showed different reactions that I didn't expect from her and gave me the hope that she would shine in upcoming parts...


First the reasonable  Husband-wife fight or the discussion cached the eye...
Both had their point put forth strongly with the reasons, but archu Convinced manav with reasonable & sensible  points,  Yeh tho Kushi ki baat for me Big smile...

The dialogue you had ,they should be taught the spelling of responsibility, Exactly well put...


And then comes the cute scene where you had put in and all our complaints on the part was short gone away...
Archu want to make it up for the fight and poor Manav dear, what and all he thought Embarrassed, dear , archu as not grown up yaar ,what to do... ok, but going for a movie or spending some private time wasn't a bad idea, hope they get it in future...

And then the fav scene where she looks at him and fondled his hair, could imagine it with real ARMAN(SUSHITA) and how warm it looks you know... really liked the soft love archu as for Manav and the way she develops it...

Then comes the Fav Atya, she is too Fair in all...
When she said about Savita,I know you had a different dimension for Sav aai's character and that is what will make archu to decide to make it up with her whole heartedly and form a nice bond...
I was expecting it, but even I thought, oh no Atya should not tell all, should just guide,And archu should win all of them with their true efforts and love...
And it exactly happened that way and I am happy about it...

And if archu doesn't get it easily only ,we will be able to read more installment of yours na Nikki dear... Embarrassed   Big smile...


Archu's talk at the tap,I was shocked or glad that she spoke that way...shocked that she has got the strength back and she had the confidence to speak in and glad that she spoke all that...


Then comes another cute scene in Kitchen, where as usual Manav dear was worrying for archu and asking her to go way back home Ouch... every time he says this ,instead of archu ,i felt sad for him and always wish to tell him, to say louder,Arrey yaar she wishes and longs to be with you and not in going back to the home which was not hers now...Its your home which is hers now...

But this time no problem, Archu said it all with her actions and the responsibility Atya has given her... She showed him that she totally fitted in their household and was to take all the responsibility and all and no where ready to opt out.

Then your scene with ARMAN and the kids with the film names telling or conveying the situations ARMAN were in and the names being the answers for their thought and conversation,i just liked it...


Hope next part gets in vandu and archu some where nearer, taking the first baby step as this part clearly says she was still uncomfortable with archu... want them together to prepare for the dance performances for festival and having some time together...


Ok, archu was getting still more clearer with her knowledge on Varsha and still more getting nearer to acknowledge fully and prove that Manav was inncoent ,happy about it...
Similarly Manav was getting to Know that though archu had been a emotional pendulum, she still has feeling for him and do love him and wish him to have a life with him and thus what her actions say through she is keeping fast for him...

I was glad on that, their relationship is moving towards a better shape with good people like atya as people giving guidance ...


Like Atya said ,I too love/Like  this Girl and still expects her actions too speaks for the credibility of her Intentions and she being the one to support Manav and make it well for D's at this depressing situation...  I want her actions to add to the credibility or prove that her intentions were good in true sense... I dont wish her to be a weak mere character who get carried away with her love for maayka  people ending up doing foolish things  or doing something insensible for pleasing someone at sasural...


i know there is More in store for archu... and Us too...
the revelation of Manav's health, realization of archu's love by manav and realization of Manav's innocence and  truth by archu, Varsha's story and whereabouts ,archu;s making up with D's  and many more...

So waiting eagerly here to know all this ...

Bye Nikki. Smile...Thanks for the lovely update...






Edited by umayal - 22 January 2012 at 12:30pm

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