Originally posted by lunza
wow , vedant and vandu got so much of "screen time " in this part ...
till now they were in the background ... now i feel like i know them a
bit more .. esp vedant .. first time you have made him talk so much ..
lol ... Yes, I think this is the first time I gave him so many dialogues... basically from the beginning I wanted to portray him as a studious and quiet person, (though he did take part in the sibling banter with Sachin sometimes) there were frequent references as to how Sachin had to drag him out to play cricket, reading till late at night etc. Even in this part, he didn't really speak till Manav asked him to share his views. Plus very frankly speaking, our focus wasn't on him a lot earlier....now him and Vandu have a role to play in the story since all the action is at Deshmukh house!
i said vedant might turn out be manav part 2 .. still feel that way ... i really like vedant and vandu !!!
you know , till now , you have kinda clubbed them together .. referring
them to as twins or kids ... so i was beginning to feel both would even
hold the same opinions about the things happening around them ..that
you would probably not pay much attention to both of them individually ,
if you know what i mean ... it was nice to see that both see things
differently .. nice touch there niki !!!Thanks! The characters of all 4 Deshmukh children are meant to be different from each other, but they all love each other and that is to be their binding force. More on this will come up ahead.
and oh , you have got me excited about the ganesh chaturti celebrations
and games ... antakshari , dance etc .. will you describe all that in
the later parts ? ...Yes I will be writing about it, but I myself do not know in how much detail. Let's see..
you are pucca writing the archu-vandu thing na ? i mean archu helping out vandu with the dance ? ,... i so wanna see them bond Yes, Archu Vandu bonding together will come up ahead... basically how Archu bonds with each member will come up- we all know that is the key to Manav's heart.
and oh , i loved the scenes between manav and savita .. be it them
shouting at each other .. or manav later apologising to her and coaxing
her to eat ...
i really imagined ushaji in the scene ...
i guess i havent told this before .. waise kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai ..
its kinda understood i guess . that i too see the actors in my head
when i read your FF ... ankita , sushant , ushaji , prarthana etc ...
today i was visualising ushaji and sushant in my head .. .. they would
have totally rocked the scenes .. they have such good mom-son chemistry
did they have any such scene in the show ? of manav coaxing her to eat ? Hmm... I don't remember it if there was one... but I do know there was no scene in which they fought and LATER he coaxed her to eat... I would have loved to see such a scene.
and tee hee .. even i giggled reading that scene of manav closing his
eyes tightly ... lol ... and to think this guy was accused by everyone
of frequenting brothels and cheating on his wife ...
oh god !!!! *smacks my head* ... i should have guessed it was dharmesh ... how could i not ? i was thinking jaywant or DK !!!
i know dharmesh wont turn negative in your FF .. so i already like him ... i was seeing sumit arora sumit arora lol ...
hmm .. so archu has told damo .. and now .. everyone will know? i dont
know .. not able to decide whether i like this twist or not ...
i mean , i knew this would happen sooner or later ... but i thought .. a
bit later ... like manav i too didnt want sachin and savita feeling
sorry for him .. and hence coming back to support him ...
i thought you might calm things down a bit between savita-manav and savita-sachin first...
wanted both savita and sachin to admit their mistakes first , and apologize to manav...
but i guess .. you wanted to now show damo taking charge for a change ? and hence used this opportunity ? ...
waiting to see how you take things from here ... Yup, you will have to wait cos I don't want to give away this part..
ah , the ray of hope ... of manav turning "rich" .. i guess it has
already started ? i liked how dharmesh has entered the story ... Yes it has- not completely but yes, somewhat!
Oh btw .. you said you have a backstory on lot of people .. and you said you said you have something on the kids too ? Some of it was in this part, you see the storm rising in the kids heart about things going on in the house? And if you read between the lines where Vedant is concerned, you might just catch it!
did you mean this part .. ? and will sachin come back now .. knowing about manav's illness ? i dont think i would like that ... i wanted him to come back without knowing about manav's condition..I won't disclose this one now. Keep guessing!