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PR Reloaded- II (FF) Note on pg. 76- do read! (Page 35)

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Posted: 25 October 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushyap

okay now i can comment Smile

what a wonderful update nikki di!! there were so many things i loved about this chapter...i loved Manavs flashbacks of how his and Savitas relationship started...it was ery relaistic to see how damo reacted to Manav saying he was going to work... and of course all the amran parts were wonderful Day Dreamingthe best part about ur FF is that its so realistic and the characters have actual human like feelings unlike the crap balaji puts on screen for us Dead keep it up!!! Thumbs Up
 
Thankyou Anu for the sweet words. I hope you enjoy the parts ahead too..

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Posted: 25 October 2011 at 11:48pm | IP Logged

oho  It's like  I am   reliving nostalgia 


just  missing  popcorn  &  Fanta      ..   


Want  Popcorn???

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Posted: 27 October 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Hai Nikki. Hug

A wonderful update. Very nice. Enjoyed the deep
through relationship you showed between sav and
manav . This in story or side was never shown in
pr . Your one just reminded me of kool Di discussion of sav
Aai . Kool Di used to tell this hard core was the result of
Sav marriage with damo and the circumstances she gone through.



Though sav aai ways are not approved and none of us doesn't like what she did to
man av, yes she can be given a second chance and reconsidered where she
remorse for her doings.


And why manav ,a studious student left the studies at early stage and why he
choose this path was well said and written.

Loved archu giving the first priority to him and
making him feel his importance was very nice.

Manav deserve this and for once his wish and peace
being given priority and preference make me feel
too good .


Thanks for this part.


As i told you earlier, as i am typing from mobile, written only
a para




Edited:
Surely on reaching home on Monday, Sunday shifted to Monday :)
Will write a essay as i wish to tell you more.


Bye. Take care .

Edited by umayal - 27 October 2011 at 2:01pm
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Posted: 27 October 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Destiny-

oho  It's like  I am   reliving nostalgia 


just  missing  popcorn  &  Fanta      ..   


Want  Popcorn???

 
Glad that it could help you relive old days...Smile
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Posted: 27 October 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by umayal

Hai Nikki. Hug

A wonderful update. Very nice. Enjoyed the deep
through relationship you showed between sav and
manav . This in story or side was never shown in
pr . Your one just reminded me of kool Di discussion of sav
Aai . Kool Di used to tell this hard core was the result of
Sav marriage with damo and the circumstances she gone through.
Yes Umi, I also used to think that we would get to see a flashback of this sort one day, but we never got to see it. When the show started, then inspite of Savita's bad behavior, I didn't really consider her a villain cos I thought such a flashback might be coming anytime. It wouldn't have erased her deeds, but it would have given some hope of Savita Aai improving, or drilled in the fact that yes, she does love Manav. I used to wonder earlier whether she has any feelings for Manav or not(at this point in the story, not later)  since she used to do only nasty things.


Though sav aai ways are not approved and none of us doesn't like what she did to
man av, yes she can be given a second chance and reconsidered where she
remorse for her doings. Many people do get hardened up due to poverty. Savita Aai is one of such people. Upto a limit the reason behind her thinking is understandable. If she had only fought with MAnav or something like that, we could still have understood, though disagreed. But she went too far in trying to attain what she wanted and her actions are thus not justifiable. But yes, the story does try to show that whatever she is- selfish, greedy, Archana hater etc, but she is NOT Manav's enemy.


And why manav ,a studious student left the studies at early stage and why he
choose this path was well said and written.

Loved archu giving the first priority to him and
making him feel his importance was very nice.

Manav deserve this and for once his wish and peace
being given priority and preference make me feel
too good .
 
Thanks for this part.


As i told you earlier, as i am typing from mobile, written only
a para


Surely on reading home on Monday, Sunday shifted to today :)
Will write a essay as i wish to tell you more.Sure Umi, will wait for your essay, hope you had a great Diwali at your Grandma's.


Bye. Take care .



Edited by nikitagmc - 27 October 2011 at 12:00pm

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Posted: 28 October 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Hi Nikki Hug
How are you ? Missed you a lot dear Smile LOL
 
Well i think i will sound repetitive if i say I LOVED THIS PART , but still i woul say I loved, loved, loved this part Smile
 
Gosh...Nikki , this was awesome sweety Smile How the hell can you write so so good being a doctor Confused ?
 
Loved the flasbacks between Savita and Manav . The things which i always wanted to see in PR , you have written this part very thoughtfully and perfectly Smile
 
Loved the innocence as a child Manav had , also felt bad to see it get lost as time passed Cry
You know the part where i felt the most bad was when Manav asked Savita to prepare Aloo Gobi as he gave her money Ouch  It showed how simple Manav was Ouch
Also his fear to talk with Savita , slowly accepting her ...Awesome Nikki Smile
Also liked Archu prioritizing Manav was very nice to read Smile Loved the simple moments Arman shared Smile
 
Waiting for the next installment Smile
Love you Smile
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Posted: 28 October 2011 at 6:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nikitagmc

Originally posted by svforever

omg!!! that was amazing!!!! how can you write so well!? I was so engrossed in reading it that when the 3rd part was over, I was like nooo. anyways, please continue soon. this ff is really awesome!!!
 
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Hi! You're commenting after such a long time that I thought you had stopped reading!LOL Thanks for the appreciation, you made me happy.Big smile
I became lazy from time to time so I didn't commentEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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Posted: 29 October 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Swati_

Hi Nikki Hug
How are you ? I'm fine Swati, hope you are fine too. Missed you a lot dear Smile LOL
 
Well i think i will sound repetitive if i say I LOVED THIS PART , but still i woul say I loved, loved, loved this part SmileMe glad to know that.. Big smile
 
Gosh...Nikki , this was awesome sweety Smile How the hell can you write so so good being a doctor Confused ? LOLLOLLOL
 
Loved the flasbacks between Savita and Manav . The things which i always wanted to see in PR , you have written this part very thoughtfully and perfectly SmileThankyou Swati!
 
Loved the innocence as a child Manav had , also felt bad to see it get lost as time passed Cry
You know the part where i felt the most bad was when Manav asked Savita to prepare Aloo Gobi as he gave her money Ouch  It showed how simple Manav was OuchManav was a bhola bhala baccha and Savita was the mother who liked to pamper this bhola bhala baccha in whatever way she could. Too bad things got ruined between them.
Also his fear to talk with Savita , slowly accepting her ...Awesome Nikki Smile
Also liked Archu prioritizing Manav was very nice to read Smile Loved the simple moments Arman shared Smile
 
Waiting for the next installment Smile
Love you SmileMe too.

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