what Shall I tell you(But I wont spare you from my essay whichever part it might be
). After reading this part got a sort of mixed emotions. Surely it was a shock at first as you know we all were expecting the scenes of how archu trying to win Manav's heart and to see the steps for it. But seriously with your replies could understand why you had gone for this
and we all have very good hope that you will handle it in a more better
way that at last it ends in a proper note.
Seeing the Jailing scene I was like
, oh no, all the castles(hopes) archu try to build last night and in the morning was smashed completely at a second by this.
Even in serial I was not for to see Manav in that way, reading your part,still could remember how manav(Sushant) acted in that scene.
. How humilated and hurt he was and how archu was dying hard to make that she wasn't at fault. At the same time I had felt it would had been handled much more better in the serial as I thought that the sachin's death & shravani issue as overtaken the issue of humiliation meted out to Manav and his family by manju and the actual efforts should have been take for it to make it proper. I was completely not for shravani's one and the way archu paid for her vahini's faults. Exactly not. In that no where Manav was benefited or atleast to say have a sigh of relief for the things he had gone through. So whats there in it. Manav suffered brutally in police hands and archu suffered in savita's hands and d's house for that. both suffered separately and nothing for them much happened.
So I really really liked YOUR PART of archu's return immediately and the way it was handled. manav's anger and archu's actions. Both are quite Justified with their characters. And exactly the one I wish to see in the serial you showed me here (archu returning back , talking to Manav, feeling and crying hard on seeing the bruises and for what he went through ,caressing him and making up for it in her own way). Thanks for that Nikki.
So her return and the conversation they had at night was really touching, as you are always ,as a talented writer, you had us in hook there. Both archu's soft heartiness , the way she cried and wept in her heart on the seeing the bruises was really heartfelt from her and the manav's anger and the slow down and finally he giving in to archu again, the same manav. couldn't change.
Liked that part so much as the part was itself touching ,emotional and they stayed true to their characters. Nice Nikki.
But for such a Manav and the one he went through, I thought that testimony would had been a better one(Not thinking of right or wrong), as a reader I would had been satisfied. Even though I love archu , when she went to square one, even I was disappointed. And couldn't blame Manav.
Why I felt disappointed is, first she back on her decision which again will not help her to prove that she is trustworthy to Manav. But even that could gain in the coming days. where I really felt bad is ,she shouldn't have simply said 'No' at first. could have explained him what she heard in phone call and then could have placed her talks in a matured manner.
Yes Nikki, Archu couldn't have put a blame immediately on Manav's aai and that too in a heated situation like this. Slowly it should had been. Though manav is so good to her,couldn't know how he will react on his aai issue. So cannot put the blame on sav aai at night. Should have told the truth but cannot expect at that moment that too from archu . And that too on seeing the bruises and the emotional she was in, she was right in accepting for testimony at night.
And couldn't blame the Mam on phone too. what if this gives sav aai an additional advantage. what she told is also fact and true.
But at the same, how sav aai shouldn't be made feel going scot free for doing anything in future, Doesn't manju should also have a check for her actions. How can she be let scot free for her actions. ok, if it is for sav aai, then like archu thought,Manju could have complained on sav aai alone. that was not her intention, She was cruely making Manav and his family getting suffered brutally. So I need her punishment too.(Not once she has been punished in the serial for that fault of hers and cruelly separating ARMAN and leading them to divorce
). So only thought testimony would be fine. Hope in yours she gets her part as well.
Ok, I was also in a dilemma to chose which would had been the better option. Couldn't decide though.
So to decide on that here again waiting eagerly for your next part. whenever you post one part we will wait for the next from the minute you put end of partX.
Nikki, why said mixed emotions is that, first seeing Ajit ,thought why he had to be(angry) , Then jailing totally shocked and felt sad on seeing both archu and Manav and their hopes, dreams they had that too that morning completely shattering by this. Then felt good and touched on places on seeing archu's return and the chain of scenes after that. even like Manav, I too jumped on hearing that testimony and the smile from each other following it. Then again dropped down on the twist of she going back again on her promise. And at last waiting to know what was Ruhia's part to be. whats her part with Manav will achieve .
Nikki. How archu will face him, will that NGO Mam will have a talk with Manav and will that mam's talk will have a effect on Manav, how this issue is going to go further, how is D's going to react in upcoming part, Will archu be able to fight back and get their love back, especially manav's love and trust. Is it possible by little harder means, With these issues around( a big wall) how is she going to be in his side for his illness, How the care is going to be,
Still So many more questions, Unanswered and wavering through my mind.
So will wait to see what happens.
Nikki, Thanks a lot for the this part and a
for writing a long part and posting it for us out of your net problems and holiday commitments.
Hope you are not charged out or disappointed with my comments.(Hugs)
Honestly Nikki Dear, I had disappointments at certain scenes, I was really felt touched, emotional , glad at certain points that the track was like that, I really like certain, I really look forward for certain scenes and I always loved your writing skill. so again it was a mixture of thoughts.
So, Hope to see you back with the bang. Hope I didn't trouble you with my usual essay or comments. Waiting to see your take as usual.
And one more ques, I posted a lot above
, so sorry.
You asked us to think of which Deshmukh will melt towards archu first, I thought Manav was ok and who will be that. Now Manav's stance was only at doubt. That too in the condition archu is in now,I couldn't think anyone on D's will go easy on her except Damo baba.
Then,Nikki Dear, Dont forget, you said expect the unexpected scenes of ARMAN at last time,
I am still waiting for it.
. Hope this is not that one.
Ok. Bye Nikki.
Edited by umayal - 28 August 2011 at 5:16pm