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PR Reloaded- II (FF) Note on pg. 76- do read! (Page 18)

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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Thanks Nikki for liking my reply(then will always write such long essaysBig smile).Actually I too feel so pleased and gives me great pleasure  to tell you how I enjoyed your part line by line.
And a hug  for the answer you give. You never fail to make me ponder at how your next part would be and how am I going to enjoy it.

There you go. you said that "expect the unexpected scenes of ARMAN"Day Dreaming and we are for in a surprise in which Deshmukh will get in the side of archu first. this proves its going to be worth reading many times.

Nikki, Do You know how many times i read your last part.
countless. whenever I bored ,even at office ,then I started reading it.

So here,very eagerly waiting for your next part, actually its giving me life at office in stressful hours
and when the actual PR sucks.

Nikki,Please post the next part soon. waiting here. But then see to your convenience also.
Its not a force ,its a request.

Bye Nikki dear Hug

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Posted: 18 August 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Hi Nikki Hug
Awesome part Nikki Smile 
Girl you are a genious sweety , the way you are handling this story is truly amazing Thumbs Up 
The so called professional CV'S should be ashamed of themselvesAngry
 
Coming to the story, it was a well written realistic part Smile
Loved ARMAN in this part Smile
The parts i liked were their dinner together, their confrontation, the morning scene Day Dreaming
 
Waiting eagerly for the next part Smile
Love you Dear Smile
 

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 2:06am | IP Logged
Loved it to the maximum. If the update was to have Trps..it would have touched the highest. It set the mood for great drama with mirch masala. 

m so eager to read how ArMan grow closer under the same roof. they are so near yet so far. Perfect setting!!! 

really really wanna read the  nxt. so when is coming up nikki?  

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Oh My GODDD Shocked!!! 
(I'm actually not sure that whether I'm shocked or not Tongue bcoz I know u r too gud n u r capable of making our grt original PR CV's and also many other writers run for their money in ur writing skills but still... this s just awesome...Big smile..  as far as I know, u r doctor by profession rite, whr did u get these marvellous, spellbound writing skills Nikita. I would really like to be ur patient & listen to ur talks inperson LOL)

What an update... Thumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up!!!

Ur bestest ever ClapClapClap !!!

I wanted to give a really longer reply as soon as i finished reading it the first time only...
But couldn't stop myself from reading it again & again & again...
& each time i come here, i'll start reading it again & forget myself...

[Actually I wanted to give a long reply to the prev. update also Smile... but u put me deep into thoughts that i started imagining what will happen when Archana will tell Manav, "I'm finally BACK Star and I LOVE U Heart" & also how she will explain that she is not back because she felt responsible & duty to serve & be with him during his time of illness but because she actually understood her feelings for him. By the time I was done with my imagination (actually I was not, thats why I dint reply then, but that was a really super duper update), I got this BESTEST episode from you]

EDIT add:

Oh My GOD Nikita...
I wonder, if this one can make me mad like this, what ll happen when actual reunion ll happen?
EmbarrassedBlushing
K, enough of my blabbering of the effects of ur writings had on me...

i'll continue what & all i liked, no loved in this EPI in next post...



Edited by dhahi - 20 August 2011 at 9:02am

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged
K... continuing my prev. post...

I'll try to tell in short, wat and all i liked hre...

as obvious, 

1. Archu waiting patiently for Manav & not running away as Savita abused her that too physically this time... 
Archu s so sweet nowadays... n becoming stubborn too...  gud for her & for us too... LOL

2. abt Manav's dreams where his late mother comforts him saying Bappa will take care of him... obviusly she knows what her DIL is gonna do... 
hmm.. Smile if at all she wuld have been alive, she & Archu would be the Best MIL-DIL pair n she wuld ve traeted Archu like a princess n y not, her one & only son's angel jo hai... (somhow like present or. PR Savita aai & Archu).. 
but then what would be the interest in the story LOL... & v need all masalas... so thats fine...

3. when Manav comes & sees Archu in moonlight (u r too romantic sweety n hre ly my heart rate increasd...) & wonders whether its his imagination or his angel is really sitting thr waiting for him

4. his few moments of happiness considering she has returned finally to HIS o THEIR home...

5. his concern for her on cing shes sitting outside in cold and rain.. such a sweet Manav

6. how he convinced Savita aai & confronted her tat how she culd let Archu sit outside in rain & nite time...

7. his khichdi for her... (oh i wish, i'll get some1 lik Manav Day Dreaming) & vin dinner together with sneak peaks& imaginig doin foo-foo Blushing...

8. their embarrassment on telling Vedant to sleep outside...

9. the nervousness they felt before talking...

Oh my GOD... 
STOP!!! wat am i doing... 

if I go on like this, my post mite exceed ur FF's length...

n I dint evn come to 3 LIGHTENING BOLTS... 
n I love U 
n how she tried to explain her feelings towards him 
n how he confronted her 
n still how he cant she her crying 
n the morning scene 
n her gesture of arranging the room lettin him know tat she s hre to STAY 
n how she convinced him bak with his words ly 
n their plan to esc Aai 
n Savita aai's Sona song  ...

what ll i lv and wat ll i tell D'oh...

so i'll stop hre ly...

but let me tell u.. 

i really really LOVED this part... each & evry line...

i can write an essay writing also on this EPI (reminded me of my school days whr v ve to giv our POV of the story)

This is ur BESTEST ever...

n expecting BESTESTEST next...

i really really enjoyed the length...
pls dont reduce it...

if u dont mind, 

I LOVE U and lots of Hug for u...

n sorry for the longer reply...

pls don mind...

i really stopped myself frm writing much longer...
still it became long... SORRY...Ouch



Edited by dhahi - 20 August 2011 at 10:03am

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
@Dhahi: Loved your post. Well said about how you felt. Exactly all of us feeling the same.
Infinite number of Hug to Nikki wouldn't be sufficient for this part of hers.

Nikki made all of us go mad (pagal) with her last part that we cannot get out of it and read it many times. After making us roam in ARMAN land ,dont know where Nikki as gone. Unhappy. Got busy i think. Hope she is doing well and got busy with studies.

She said that still expect the unexpected scenes of ARMAN in future. I was eagerly waiting for it.
Nikki Dear, come soon na.


Edited by umayal - 20 August 2011 at 12:42pm

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Nikki , where are you Dear? At home? Is it holiday now?


Edited by umayal - 20 August 2011 at 1:20pm

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Posted: 21 August 2011 at 12:45am | IP Logged
@dhahi .. lol .. loved ur super gushy post .. she writes fab na ??? !!!
hope she writes a book someday !!!
i guess she is at home and taken a break from the forum ...
i miss her !
 
hmm ... niki , so the twins mite not be the first to warm up to archu? ..
wait a min , dont tell me savita will be the first to melt towards her ?!
that would be absolutely shocking ...
 
actually , more than next update .. i am more curious and eager for some of the later updates .. i really want to read those manav-savita interactions that u said will come up later..

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