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PR Reloaded- II (FF) Note on pg. 76- do read! (Page 13)

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Posted: 22 July 2011 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Woot woot woot update.. okie havetn read it...

*runs to make a snack to enjoy this lovely update with*

Thanks Niki!!!!!

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Nikki Hug
Missed you Ouch 
 
Awesome , fab, super update Nikki HeartHug 
 
No complains, no demands Embarrassed ( have one though , update the next part soon LOL )
 
Awww... The flashback Arman scene was so cute Day Dreaming 
Stupid Manav  Day DreamingLOL 
Chalu Archu LOL 
 
I am glad Archu, finally understood her feelings and she chose to be vocal about it Smile 
Hope Manav supports her while dealing with Savita aai Ouch Poor girl Ouch
 
Aww. ...Manav Ouch 
Feel bad for him Ouch 
Hope as you said , Archu gives him some happiness Ouch  
 
This was the way cv's should have handled the track Ouch They just ruined the story Angry 
 
Hey Sweetie , When are your Exams ?
 
ALL THE BEST DEAR  Hug
 
 
 


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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged
heyy its very nyc part...enjyd reading it...
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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Awww ... u put in Dreams of fire ...
It is my fav from SM .. initially when I heard both Jai ho and and Dreams on fire on YT .. I actually preferred this ..
Jai ho took some time to grow on me .. I mean i liked the beginning of jai ho but didnt like the remaining two paras the first time I heard it ..
But the moment I heard DOF .. I instantly fell in luv with the song ( I wish it was a bit longer..) .. I just LOVVVEEE the flute bit in the end ...
 
Lol .. ok enough of my rambling ...
Uff .. finally ... woh ghadi aa hi gayi .. when archu is going to enter the D house again ...
Well Archu is in for a really tough time ... she has nobody on her side ... Savita is going to be vicious .. Sachin hates her .. the kids dislike her ..
Oh well , at least sachin isnt staying at the D house now ..
so thats one less hostile member for her to deal with..
Damo of course will drink till he topples into the gutter again ( in happiness of course ..) but damo's support isnt going to count much ..
He is going to be of no help to her ...I doubt archu can rely on him much to take up a few responsibilites during the time Manav is going to be in and out of hospital ..
 
Sigh .. I think archu will miss Atya like anything .. she would have stood beside her like a rock...
 
I think the kids will be the first to melt and start talking to archu again..
Oh .. I love vaishu .. I smiled everytime I saw her helping archu quietly in this part ..
 
She didnt say that much when the rest of the family were huffin' and puffin' ( well , except for when manju remarked about tarun..) .. but you could see she was firm about helping her elder sister ...
 
I just love varshu and vaishu in your FF ..
 
Ok , reg manav and ajit scene .. I dunno , maybe you wanted to show that ajit should be scared of manav now ..
but uh .. still .. I wanted to scream .. Manav stay the hell away from Ajit .. at least for the time being .. plz ..abhi thodi der ke liye yeh herogiri mat dikhao ..
 
I wonder how manav will interact with archu now .. I mean .. since he is obviously going to think she has come back to him out of sympathy and pity at his condition ...
 
Oh , and I completely understand why you took this route .. and not the one of manav seperating from his family..
 
Its archu's time to shine now .. 
Aur manav ko kitna kuch jhelna pada ..
archu ko bhi thode papad belne do !!!Evil Smile


Edited by lunza - 23 July 2011 at 5:48am

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Hi Nikita,
What an amazing chapter in the on going saga of PR Reloaded!!!!!!
Very gripping!!!    Had to read from beginning to end, uninterrupted. As I've said before, you have amazing talent!!!  Archana was shown as very strong, very loving and caring, as well as showing maturity. Great job on your part Nikita!!!
 
This chapter did not include Manav, yet you felt his presence there. Archana coming to terms with her feelings for Manav...absolutely brilliant. To realise what love truly means. To have the courage to follow through with your realisation and subsequent decision. Just amazing. I'm glad Archana has some support at home in the form of Vaishali.
 
Eagerly anticipating the next installment!!! Great job Nikita!!!

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
jst lovd this part!!!!
n nw interested to see manav's reaction after he sees archana!!!!
pls update the next part quickly!!!!

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Hai Nikki ,

How was the exams going on. Hope you had done well and doing well too.ATB. Smile

Then about the part 70, Nikki Dear, should I say I loved it. You would surely know I would have loved it. How come I will not love it, when its only about my archu(the archu i longed to see) and her strong stand to be with manav is told and some cute flashback scenes are there.

Again a well written part from your side and the route you have chosen is 100% fine with me though I was still waiting for archu-manav confrontation(so waiting for your next update,please update it soon after your examsSmile). I was reading this with excitement and with the thought  running all over my mind, whether archu meeting manav will happen in this segment only ,till reaching end,I looked for it.

Nikki, this is for you Hug for this wonderful part of making archu taking a strong stand or showing this kind of madness and telling especially the dialogue "I dont need anyone's permission to be with my husband" and finally realizing and telling that she was going back to him not because of responsibility but because she loves him.

And loved the flashback's(especially manav's say in bold) and vaishali's reaction also. when she helped  for getting bag,got the taxi,I was feeling warmth  in their relationship which I could not see in actual PR.

Nikki Dear,you are so talented Clap Clap that you always give us a wonderful part and end it in such a way that we always await your next part with so much eagerness from the moment we read the last line of the part you posted.
And now also the same as happened. I was eagerly waiting to see Manav's reaction,how he is going to take it, what is Deshmukh family's reaction to it ,as nobody like her there, I was still more excited to know how she is going to face them and try to have them on her side.


Really a tough line ahead for archu  but happy that she has more to do it and of course your wonderful FF manav is going to have some happiness by his side. Dont trouble him with more illness yaar. Let it be a sideline to understand each other.

Ok waiting eagerly for your next update. Please update it soon Dear but ofcourse after your exams. Take care.

Nikki ,can you send me a PM next time when you update it.I came late this time,yours was not on first page,so i missed it. just today saw it. so can you PM next time when you update.






Edited by umayal - 25 July 2011 at 1:35pm
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Posted: 25 July 2011 at 1:34am | IP Logged
OMG Niki how did I miss this... I never knew there was Part 69 updated and now I see Part 70 also Shocked how can I and how did I miss Shocked
 
Just read 2 Sub Parts of 69... Feeling bad for both Archana and Manav.. Tarun is also going and no one to support Manav.. And Archana no one is understanding her problems Cry

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