Nikki Dear,
You have Left a Large grin π on my face with your Update.
thanks a Lot for it.
As said, Trust is of more forms and here too you have fulfilled for the one we have.
Every part of it, as said in the parts, was amusing, amazing ,Happy to read and leave a smile.
Archu's reaction π² π and Savita aai's reaction π²ππ
And Manav's reaction and His self talks ππΌ π. All were too Good.
This Slap was one slap which was fully acceptable slap that should had been Given.There have been more slaps in PR, but this one was always Pending and not be given.
Archu as once done I think ,but for her mother she did.
For Manav sake it wasn't done I think. whereas it was the one that should had been given first and foremost. So ,i am so happy to read it in yours.
The below part had got me π...Savita aai bhi na...π
"Where is she? Where is she?"
came a voice and the next moment Savita Aai burst into the room. "I came
to know what happened in the court. And I.. Arey move na!" she said
dismissively, shoving Manav aside so that she could sit next to Archana.
"Why are you chipkoing to her so much? Reserve all this stuff for the
bedroom, right now let me talk to her."
Embarassed, Manav moved away quietly while she sat next to Archana. To his shock, Savita took Archana's hand and kissed it hard.
"Muah muah muah!!" she kissed her hand. "Yayyy! You slapped Manjusha with this hand!!! Wah meri bahu, kya chauka mara!
Today you have proved that you are eligible to be the daughter in law
of Savita Deshmukh, otherwise I was thinking why has God given me such a
cow for a daughter in law! Haha! Vandu told me about it! What a slap!
What a slap! Wish I'd been there, I would have given her one too!"
And Finally, Manav coming to Know about archu's return, the moment I had waited for, when will this fellow know that she had returned for him and to be there forever rather than for illness.
It happened today π₯³.
Last line and Para was β€οΈ π. surely could imagine the way archu would have sleep and the way Manav would have saw her.
Pony's last thought of night counselor and Enjoying the cat fight ...π...Good one.
So many elements are there that I had liked and loved. will write it again as I am off to sleep now.
Thanks again Nikki.
Edited by umayal - 11 years ago
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