Originally posted by: ByteMe
Sorry Im late again.. :(
You must think I nag you soo much for updates, but reply much later after you post it.That's okay! π
Just got a chance to read it, and its amazing, I really like it.
Dont worry Niki no one is leaving your FF, it has 10 times more meat and substance than the current version of PR which is on air.
I really like this, and from looking at it, anyone can tell that your a huge manav fan, since the whole story revolves around him. I would like to see Archu also get some footage and character growth actually. The story doesn't revolve around Manav, at least that was never my intention when I started writing it, and even today its not like that. The story opened with Manav thinking about Archana's life and how he started getting involved in it. Personally I think Archana has also shown a lot of growth, initially she was a very weak and shy girl who was always doing whatever her family asked her to and was totally dependent on her family, cut off from the world outside her. Now she works, studies and helps run her family along with trying to pick up the shreds of her life. She has shown considerable strength if you consider all that she has gone through (it takes great strength to accept your feelings for someone who you know has done some unforgivable deeds and go against your own people for the same), and will show more growth in the future tracks. Manav's character growth will be there too, but in a different direction (just like it has been earlier). I always try to give both characters almost equal footage- in fact I think I have written Archana's introspection in more detail always.
Anyways, her character is going to shine in the coming tracks.
Dont care much for a happy reunion, but would like to see them survive this rough patch.
Awaiting the next update.. :)
Oh btw just wondering.. are the Judges allowed to use such language int he court room π²:
"What the hell is going on?" said the judge. ππ
πThat was more like mumbling or talking to other people in court, not a part of actual court proceedings. I should have clarified it. π³
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