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The Revival III UPDATED-48, 49 and 50 (Page 5)

Veena.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 September 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
hey pooja i'm desperately waiting yar

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 1:46am | IP Logged
Oh Veena, so sorry dear!
My problem is that the original revival file which is write in, on my computer is not compatible with the other computer which has access to the internet. Hence I have to type out the entire thing. I am working on it, and i will find some solution, i hope! :)

I will update soon!

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Veena.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
oh then no problem dear i'll wait infact eagerly waiting for ur update Big smile
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Posted: 05 October 2011 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Bahut bhayanak news hain guys.
My other computer is doddering and it has the rest of the revival in it! :(
I am praying that it doesn't crash and burn.
I'll update soon, I hope.
Veena.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 October 2011 at 10:29am | IP Logged
oh God plz  pooja's pc donot crash at all...
hey pooja relax theek ho jaye ga don't worry i'll pray Smile
and definately waiting for the update
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Posted: 30 October 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged






Shotgun came inside.


Rajashree was talking on her phone…He paused for a moment debating.


She sensed his hesitation and motioned him to come in. She winked at him and made one-minute sign.




Shotgun looked at her carefully. Her voice was authoritative; with the right mixture of pleasantness….


One would almost think that she was talking with a stranger…worse her shapeless matrimonial-guy who always loomed on her and her mother's conversations….


Shotgun felt alarmed…A guy? And Rajashree? The alien thought seeped into his mind, shaking him to the core…..


Matrimonial-guy that her mother had chosen…..


He thought about his feelings…


Friends don't feel alarmed or sad when their friends get married…They feel happy….


Only…people who lov-like the other person feel that way.


He glanced at her perturbed.


She was still talking on the phone.


One of her long curls slipped from the catch and rested on her cheek….


Her peacock blue dress emphasized her slim figure and her clear complexion.


Rajashree tossed her phone on the counter and elicited a long moan.


"Kya hua?"


She motioned to the tissue paper lying on the table.


Shotgun leaned in for a closer look. He was greeted by a large cloud of her perfume. He shook his head.


But the words on the tissue paper did instill apprehension in him.



9822348130- Maa ka Rajashree ke liye ophthalmologist dulha

Pankaj Desai

Next Saturday,

7:00 pm,

 Caf Mocha




Rajashree did not notice Shotgun's agitated expression. She stared at the tissue.

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Posted: 30 October 2011 at 6:11am | IP Logged



Some Days Before


Even though there was an undercurrent of pressure between Aaryan and Deepika, others pretended not to notice.


The plane landed at precisely five…They all checked out, planning to reach the hotel…It was still an hour's drive from the airport.


They hired an Innova, Aaryan in the front, Neha and Deepika in the middle and Ajay Zubeen cooped up in the back.


Normal conversations went on.


They reached the hotel at 6:30.


Overall it was a happy affair – the hotel was quite luxurious, and the decorations were of fine quality.


The woman in question met them in the lobby….She was not fully ready, but eagerness and happiness were radiating from her face.


Sometime later


Aaryan was standing in the gallery, which overlooked the pool in the hotel…Moonlight was shining on the crystal speckled water, thousands of bits of silver sprinkled by the moon on the water.


He felt a presence behind him.


"Piche mat dekhna."


He complied with the request, standing perfectly still…


After a few moments had passed, she asked, "Kaise ho Aaryan?"


He nodded mutely, her last day in the office running in his mind's eye…


From her quickened breath, he knew she was thinking along the same lines…


"Jab maine paper main padha….Anna Kartoos ke case ke baad….Mujhe vishwaas nahi hua tha…"


He fixed his gaze on the changing bars of silver scattered on the water surface.


"Maine Deepika ko phone kiya thaa."


He was going to whirl around in surprise, but he checked himself in time….Trying to keep the emotion out of his voice, he asked, "Kya kaha usne?"


She did not answer.


"Kya tum khush ho Shyna?"


Her voice was tender when she answered. "Bahut."


He smiled happily, turning to face her. This time, she did not counter him.


"Main bhi tumhare liye khush hoon Shy."


"Aur main tumhare liye Aaryan…Take care…Aur Deepika…"


He looked at her questioningly.


She disappeared without another word.


Aaryan sat on the bed; analyzing his feelings…He looked into the mirror and smiled at himself….


It seemed genuine…


It was hard, getting over someone.It was hard, getting on with life…And it was hard, falling in love once again…


Even though Shyna looked resplendent in her turquoise ghagra, that night, Aaryan only had eyes for another woman, who was wearing a simple blue dress…


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Junhui finished her paperwork and leaned back into the chair, closing her eyes…


Mummy was going quite lightly for the past few days….So she was lagging in her paperwork…make hay till the sun shines…Laze around till Mummy is distracted.


A particularly irritating wisp of hair was fluttering on her eye…She made no move to push it away.


Somebody else did.


The touch sent a jolt through her spine.


She opened her eyes, to find the deep, penetrating brown gaze of Parth Mathur, looking down on her.


It was mesmeric.


Like straight out of a KJo movie, she could hear guitars playing, lace curtains flying and an entire musical ensemble humming a soulful melody.She smiled at her hilarious thoughts.


When he smiled, she felt her heart skip a beat.


A smile like his should be banned…Nobody should be allowed to posses the type of smile which made her heart do jumps and her stomach back flips.


His deep brown eyes, twin pools of his feelings bore deeply into her soul, willing to share some of theirs…they seemed irresistible…


She stared back into them, losing herself in their chocolaty extent.




He smiled again. Then she remembered.


"I want to talk to you…."




"Yahaan nahi…kahi aur?"


Fifteen minutes later, they were walking down Marine Drive….


"Tum kuch kehna chahti thi?"


She couldn't. After all these days of planning and deciding, she couldn't tell him. She did not want another fiasco akin to the one created by Vishwaas.

"It's just...promise me something."


He looked at her, surprise by the sudden request…


"Promise me that…you will never change.Just…remain like this, okay?" She hesitated, debating.


He lifted her hand and squeezed it. "I will."

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