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The Revival III UPDATED-48, 49 and 50 (Page 3)

aamirkhanfan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 July 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
great parts...shy got married, good...

Veena.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 July 2011 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
hey pooja how r u? missed  u dear Hug

gr8 update awesome work... really happy to read ur ff after along time..
shaina got married oh good so yes Mr.aryan its time to move on

keep it up dear and waiting for more and more
thnx for updates Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap
ArRoGaNT-CHINTs IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Nice update...
And the part was when deepika wake up aaryan and then he told that..
"Deepika, ye jo tum mujhe roj uthati ho na, wo mujhe bahut accha lagta hain."

"My alarm clock….Subah subah tumhari awaz uss mechanical tring se acchi lagti hain…."

 So cute...

Anyway waiting for more because now aaryan have to move on...

Veena.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 11:11am | IP Logged
hey pooja desperately waiting for more Unhappy
maha_prakrti IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Me too! Pooja ji! Pata hai studies hai, lekin humara intezaar bhi hai! :)

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 9:36am | IP Logged
My apologies!!!
So sorry!! :D

Posting the update! :)
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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged



"Deepika can I talk to you for a few minutes?"


"Baitho Rajashree."


"Thank you. Actually Deepika I was wondering if I could get leave for a few days…..My cousin is getting married…so…."


"I see….Kitne din ki chutti chahiye?"


"A week, if possible."


"Five days at max, without counting the Sunday." Deepika replied.


"That's okay…..Thank you so much."


Deepika smiled at the girl, her enthusiasm affecting her in turn.




"Subroto mujhe leave mil gayi!"


"Hm…kitne din?"


"Six counting the Sunday. I am feeling so happy. Six days, no pakana, no bartan dhona! Heaven."


"Accha hain." Shotgun smiled.


"Kitni saari taiyaariyan bachi hain, clothes, accessories, footwear! Parson shaadi hain. Kaise hoga ye sab?"


"Usme kya hain…just go to the market, buy something, comeback…"


"Ek minute. Socho koi accha dress hain, toh uske saath acchi accessories honi chahiye naa. If you have to live it up, you do it in style. Samjhe?"


"Ek dress. Koi chappal. Aur kya lagta hain."


She rolled her eyes unbelievingly…. "Are you- chalo chodo…jab shaadi ho jayegi naah, tab pata chalega…"


"Toh fir main aisi ladki se shaadi karoonga jo apni shopping aadhe ghante main khatam karti hain."


"Jindagi bhar aisa hi rehna padega! Aisi koi ladki is duniya main nahi hain!"

She retorted. Suddenly changing the subject, "Waise kya pata kya pehnoongi shaadi main…sari…shayad…ya koi dress….naaahhh..I got it…..Shaadi ki pichle shaam ko sharara, shaadi main saari aur reception ko koi accha dress."


"Kya? Mere kuch samajh main nahi aaya."


"Nothing." She winked at him. "Bahut maza aane waala hain…sab cousins, sab dost milke bada maza karne wale hain."




"Tum bhi naa…ye kya reaction hain – hm-hm…Kuch acchi toh reaction diya karo."


He rolled his eyes at her.


Taking pleasure at seeing him control his irritation at her, she attempted to hide her smile.


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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 9:39am | IP Logged




"Subroto, Rajashree bahut dinon se humare ghar nahi aai…"


"Maa, ye usk ghar thodi hain, ki wo yahaan roj roj aaegi!"


"Subroto! Main sirf pooch rahi thi…"


Shotgun threw his jacket on the sofa and rolled his eyes. He leaned tiredly on the back and closed his eyes tiredly.


"Maa, wo ghar gayi hain. Kisi ki shaadi hain."




He opened his eyes.


His mother was sitting near the window looking out at the clear, starry sky.


From the time his father passed away six years ago, Subroto's mother had become increasingly aloof from social life and gradually eager to see him settled.


Her health deteriorated rapidly, forcing them to move backing India.


She was disappointed when he broke up with Cynthia…



He shook his head.


"Maa chaliye….Bahut der ho gayi hain."


He cajoled his mother to sleep.



He came back and looked outside the window.


Cynthia….the name no longer evoked the same turmoil of mixed emotions….


They had met in the laboratory, both students of Forensic, smart, intelligent, and career-focused.


Pretty, vivacious, eager to express her opinions and keen to defend them with the same determination. That was Cynthia.



Casual conversation turned into friendship, and soon into love. Scotland Yard was within reach when Shotgun had to come back.


Numerous letters with the insignia on the top filled his letter box for years to come, but he did not budge.


Mother is more important. The one who gave me birth, my mother and the one who raised me, my mother land….. He wrote in his journal.


The night was chilly.


Life had changed a lot, he mused. He was no longer a young lad to fall in love with his lab partner.


Aaryan's dedication, Shyna's passion, Papaji's ways, Ved Saab's turmoils, Ajay-Neha's relations, Boxer's uprightness, Deepika's principles……


Everything had touched him. Everything had left its mark.


Shyna had got married. She had moved on.


Did she love Rishi? He wondered. Perhaps she did, but not in a way she loved Aaryan…..She was happy now. She had moved on…yes, she had….


That is what he was doing just now, he thought, moving on….That is why the emotions no longer rose in his chest….


Instead, something else set his pulse rate up….


He remembered Rajashree staring at the sky in the same way…that long dark hair had a life of its own, radiant black wisps floating on the air….


 But he was young enough to fall in love again.


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