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The Revival III UPDATED-48, 49 and 50 (Page 13)

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:13am | IP Logged




Madhura was lying on the setee in her room, watching the mural painted ceiling…The intricate floral design spanned the entire length of the ceiling…

'Aaj hum baat kar rahe hain pyaar ke bare main, today is Valentine's day special…Toh ye gaana un sab ko main dedicate karna chahoonga, jo such main pyaar karte hain…'

Don't love me for fun, girl,

Lemme be the one girl,

Love me for a reason,

Let the reason be love…



Paras looked at the digital watch on the screen. Eighteen more minutes of chatter.

He removed his headset and relaxed. There were six more minutes for him to reappear. He downed his coffee, watching the digits count down to his cue. He put on his headset again..

"Aaj humne pyaar ke bare main kuch kaha, kuch jaana, kuch aapse suna, aur kuch maine kaha..Aakhirkaar yahi kehta hoon,"

He kept down his script.

"Jo log pyaar main hain, wo bahut lucky hain, jo abhi tak nahi hain,unhe dukhi hone ki koi zaroorat nahi hain, Love will come your way…."

Madhura looked at the radio in disbelief. It seemed like a straight address to her! She knew exactly what he was talking about.

Parth looked at the digital watch. That line, even though spoken aloud was exclusively for his own sake.

'Ye keh raha hain RJ Paras aap ko goodbye, sayonara, shabba khair…A very happy Valentine's Day to you all..Humare mulaquat hogi kal, isi waqt, tab tak ke liye, bye-bye! Ye last song, khaas aapke liye….'

Paras removed his headset, and turned up the volume of the song, and it filled the studio….

Madhura turned over, at closed her eyes taking in the music…

Chahe tum kuch naa kaho

Maine sun liya, ke saathi pyaar ka mujhe Chun liya, Chun liya, maine sun liya….

Pehla nasha pehla khumar, naya pyaar hain, naya intezaar

Karloon main kya apna haal ae dil-e-bekaraar…..

Mere dil-e-bekaraar tu hi bata…

Tu hi bata..

Tu hi bata…

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged
great updates

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 6:33am | IP Logged
gr8... had lost the link to the portion i read... do continue it please... i know the forum hardly is left with people but still we can have it in active mode!!! u guys r amazing writers... always remember this!! :)

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Loved it as always Pooja!

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Kya kya kahoon? Kya kya sunun? Confused

Our team is best solving crimes and professionally...Star

But when it comes to personal and love, our team is so very disassociated... With themselves and with their loved ones... They are disastrous!!!!!!!!!!!Thumbs Up

But still, love will definitely find it way... Love our team... Love the cases... Love their love!!!!!!!!!!Approve

Waiting for more deary!!!!!!!!!!! Clap

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Great UPDATE after such a long time...
waiting for more...

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The Legan Chir had been done a few days before. Niloufer's father had personally come to convey his blessings to Boxer.

The traditional mehendi ceremonies had been finished the night before. The actual nikaah was to take place at a hall booked by the families…

Aaryan stood at the door, watching the baraat come in. Dressed in a simple kurta he looked mature, watching with affection at the rest of his friends.

Ajay and Zubeen were dancing boisterously with Boxer's friends, while Shotgun too looked cheerful, waving his hand and shaking a leg once or twice…Boxer himself was sheepish, and blushing as he looked at his friends. Ajay dragged Aaryan in the happy crowd…

Deepika, Rajashree, Junhui, Neha and the rest of the girls were watching the baraat from the upstairs windows.Deepika gasped in surprise as Aaryan too began to dance to the music. As on cue, he looked up, just in time to see Deepika's gaze on him. He blushed and exited the scene. Junhui whistled loudly at the boys, much to the amusement of the rest of the girls.


The nikah ceremony had taken place a few minutes before. Congratulations poured in from all quarters. Aaryan was taking care of the commissioner and a few senior officials missing out on the timepass the others were engaged in. A corner of the spacious lawn had been conquered by the team. Ajay and Shotgun, with Zubeen were standing there, waiting for the others to arrive.

Parth arrived hastily, fifteen minutes later than the nikaah. Greeting Boxer and his new wife with a sheepish smile, he offered his heartiest congratulations, which was reciprocated with equal warmth.

"Aap ne toh late kar di!" Niloufer exclaimed indignantly.

"Maaf kijiyega, kaam main phans gaya tha…"

"Paras kahaan hain?" Boxer enquired.

"Wo aa nahi saka. Kaam tha. Usne aap ke liye ye bheja hain." He handed over a huge boquet of flowers. Niloufer smiled at him, taking in the beautiful smell of the flowers.

Taking his leave, he wandered towards the lawn.

Seeing only half the members there, his forehead creased.

"Ladkiyaan kahaan hain?"

Ajay looked at him horrified, "Yeh toh meri jagah lene ki koshish kar raha hain. Aate aate poochta hain ladkiyaan kahaan hain…"

Parth had the grace to turn a shade red. He was saved from further embarrassment by the arrival of Neha. She was wearing a ghagra of palest lavender. The colour complimented her skin, and she looked more gorgeous than ever. The material folded around her, and she looked regal.

Ajay's mouth fell open with surprise. He had seen her western sexy persona, but this side – he was totally unacquainted with it. The way her long earrings tangled, and untangled with her loose hair, the way the little bindi gleamed on her forehead – it was too much for Ajay to take in at once. For the first time in his life, he spoke less, and thought more…

"Baki sab aa rahe hain." She replied in answer to his query.

Zubeen and Neha went off to help Aaryan, followed by a mute Ajay. Shotgun decided to see to the caterers, and right on cue, left Parth standing all alone in front of the path leading to the inner recesses of the garden, hidden by eight feet high hedges. He looked around a moment, and was about to follow Shotgun, when he heard someone speak.

Techincally it was just one word of a mild profanity, but he could recognize the voice on any ends of the earth. He whirled around, and stood there stunned. He blinked. Once. Twice. Thrice. The figure refused to disappear. That coupled with the swear word uttered moments earlier convinced him of the presence of the person, and not another daydream- one of those, which he had had often.

Junhui was standing in the middle of the pathway, looking as stunned as him. Gradual blush rose on her cheeks. He looked at her appreciatively.

Sari. A magic garment which transformed every single woman. Junhui was no exception. The material clung to her body, complementing her short hair, and dark features, instead of smothering them. The sari itself was a masterpiece- a melody of trendy maroon with a sprig of the traditional green and golden borders. Golden bangles clinked decisively in her hands. Her eyes were khol rimmed, and she wore maroon tops in her ears.

"Tum..Hi…" she managed to finally utter.

Hesmiled, but he could not say another word.

A few tense moments later, they were sitting on the bench, chatting.

Parth noticed that her bindi was a little askew.

"Tumhari…bindi"he said, motoning towards her forehead.

Her hand flew to the bindi to straighten it, but she succeded in messing it up further.

With a barely repressed chuckle, he straightened it.

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The Journal Of Junhui Mehra

(A few photos were first pinned up – Junhui in a sari in the lawn…SS team with Boxer and Niloufer, Aaryan Deepika at the buffet line, Ajay Neha exchanging loving looks, Shotgun, Zubeen and Rajashree laughing about something. The last one was special. It was taken by somebody with her camera. Junhui and Parth, sitting on a bench, both blushing)

Today Boxer got married to the love of his life…He was always a man apart. It is not his upbringing that separates him...It is his maturity, his devotion, his hardiness; Niloufer could not have found anybody better to share her life with. Bhai will be hers till the end of this life, and the next seven.

Boxer's happily ever after somehow convinced me of the existence of such a thing in today's world.

It was reinforced by him…Today I wore a sari for the wedding due to Madhura and Paras' insistence. It was a pity both of them could not see me today. Madhura is in Nashik for a conference and Paras was at work. But Parth did come to the wedding…

When I saw him there, suddenly out of the blue, resplendent in his sherwani and a confused expression on his handsome face, I knew I had fallen hard. The delightful bubbly feeling that rose in the pit of my stomach, and the way my heart burst into a joyful song on seeing him provided testimony.

He is…The One…

The Journal of Parth Mathur

Sari+Janhavi Mehra= Parth Mathur fallen hard hard and really hard…

(He could not write anything else that day, but kept staring at the pictures on his cell, most of which were of a short haired willowy woman.)

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