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The Revival III UPDATED-48, 49 and 50 (Page 12)

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Posted: 27 May 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amri174

Thank God you updated! I was really missing your story.

Loved all the installments, as usual...hope your writing spree continues!


Hey! I'm glad that you enjoyed it Big smile
Yeah, i will update soon!

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Posted: 27 May 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by darknite

Update kijiye naa please...Cry


Whoa! Sorry!!!!! I'll try, I promise! Smile
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Posted: 31 May 2012 at 6:42am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Veena..

it was awesome update pooja after a looonnnggg time Confused
itna intezar mat kraya kro na Wink

but seriously enjoy reading it... boxer marriage and preparations are superb yar... annddd
so 'someone' is going to surprise 'someone' wow lovely Embarrassed
deepika aryan bi thu surprise karen na ek dosre ko Wink
waiting fir more updates
and oh yes pooja dear thnx for lovely update Hug


Hey Veena, how are you?
Thanks a lot! Big smile  Yep, someone is in for a big surprise!
I will update more, soon!
Aww, thanks! Hug


i'm very well pooja... how r u? Smile
missing ur updates yar Cry
plzz update soon Embarrassed
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Posted: 04 June 2012 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Awesome UPDATE POOJA..
Great...
Keep it up..
waiting for NEXT...
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Posted: 13 July 2012 at 11:41am | IP Logged
I've read yr ff more than 5 times n i really liked it...
Pooja plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
hey pooja where r u yar Unhappy
miss u all and ur updates
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Veena..

hey pooja where r u yar Unhappy
miss u all and ur updates


Sorry! My college and my internship have conspired to rob me of my free time! LOL
Updating asap!

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:13am | IP Logged

36. GOINGS ON IV


That Night


Rajashree chatted away pleasantly over dinner. Shotgun found it hard to believe that it was the same surly woman who had used her cutting tongue on his some hours ago. Now she looked radiant and fresh, as she talked away with his mother, smiling and laughing.


After dinner, she cleared up the table, and put away the food.


Shotgun did not oppose her, as he did not want to instigate her temper. So he just helped her out. No conversation took place, and there was silence except for the chink of the utensils being put away. Rajashree wiped her hands on a towel as she settled down on the cane chair in the terrace. Shotgun came later, with two mugs of steaming cocoa.


"Coffee mili nahi, isiliye cocoa banaya."


She did not reply, merely took small sips. "Accha hain." She finally said.


He beamed at her compliment. He looked at her, pensive. She was looking up at the sky broodingly. Her long hair was held back by a single clip. She was wearing a white kurti with tights. The memories of the last month passed through in his mind.


Harsh words had been common in them, and they flew around the room easily. Cutting remarks, haphazard questions, and ambiguous answers were the current rage. They behaved civilly with each other only during a case. Shotgun knew their nonsense would not be tolerated by Aaryan and Deepka. And try as he might, he could not find the reason for the hurt and parody that had sprung up from the day he had seen her with Pankaj.


Rajashree looked up at the moon broodingly. She blamed herself for the strained relations between herself and Shotgun. Her hurtful remarks were due to her quicksilver tongue and nothing else.


She looked at him, and was taken aback to see that he had been looking at her. He quickly averted his gaze. She looked at his form, washed in moonlight, and a strange ache rose in her. It was a mixture of pain and pleasure, and she felt it surge through her body.


When she had clamed down enough to speak, she said softly, "Subroto…"


He had been looking out to the sea, but when she uttered his name, he looked back at her. She rose, unable to concentrate, suddenly conscious of his eyes watching her every move. She walked to the railing and kept her hands on it.


A strangled sob escaped her, as she said in a loud, firm voice, but at the same time meek and tentative, "I'm….sorry…."


Whatever he had expected, it was not this…He got up, and quickly went to her side, and whisered, "No…maafi toh mujhe maangni chahiye, I have been absolutely hor-"


He broke off, as she encircled him with her arms and rested her head on his shoulder, allowing a tear to escape from her eyes. He stood on the spot, shocked. She extracted herself a moment later. Straightening her hair, she looked up at the moon, and said in the cheery voice, whose dishonest tremor only she could detect, "Maine toh poori Mumbai main flood situation paida kar di. Anyway…sorry?"


His eyes were hidden from the shadows by the moonlight, and she found herself looking at his face. It was safe as long as she could not see those eyes. Those wonderful, piercing eyes she was mad about.


A smile came to his lips as he saw a tear clinging to her eyelashes. He wiped it off, surprise by his own courage.


She gave a smile, before returning to the chair, to retrieve her mug of cocoa….

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