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Part 23
Since I haven't reserved I'll give my comments here...
So glad to see Maan awake finally...but then the thing that everyone had been dreading...his paralysis attack..it happened ...π...n he knew it
i know it happened...followed ur words and wrote what i had planned...i was scared to update it knowing everyone's reaction...but i lived through it π ...how is she gonna face him...
It's going to take a lot because there are two bodies but one soul...one is just as affected with the other's pain
he takes so much pride in himself being The MSK...he needs a lot of courage to accept the truth n help himself to be healthy again...I hope he won't drown himself in bitterness n self-pity...
It's taken a pretty hard blow on him...he is MSK after all...but that also means that he will never be weak for longπ
n Geet n his family are always there to support him with their love..
yup...they are there...at every step
.have to read part 24 now to see what u did to him...going there...π
hopefully u are happier with the next one
Part 24
Aww...see i knew it that Maan will feel like that..
i told you already...at times...u understand our characters better than we do..
he sought comfort from his Daadi at first...but yes only a mother can give him the needed emotional support above all...
I was actually really emotional writing that scene...i don'y know why...but no matter how old a child get...he is still a child for his mother and Dadi ma has been his mother in every way...so i tried to show their bondπ³
he needs to be somewhat strong to face his love in that condition n so he took that support from his Daadi n he was able to face Geet after that...their interaction is so sweet...both trying to be each other's support...I hope this won't last long... n he'll be back to his former self...
i like the positivity you have eshu..things will get back to how they were sooner than laterπ
lovely update though its still sad...I'm looking forward to see happy updates soon...n also romantic ones...π
Haha...u spoke too soonπ...there is some romance in the next oneπ³
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