Jab Hum Mile- Shanak Fic 30 pg 48 - Page 38

minnu345

@minnu345

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey sonali😊
lovely ending
but i dont know what are the lacks in Ur life
don't loose Ur hope at any time i wish ki u achieve what u want in Ur life
u have great writing skills
plzzz do start another FF

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Pooja

@candy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was a wonderful happy ending!

Congratulations 😊

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576961

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful Update and supperb Ending
Loves the Whole FF Sonali
shanak Journey was awesome and wonderful..Loves it
Waiting for Your Next FF..Pl write Soon🤗

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angel_9

@angel_9

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

hey Shona di...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

wow awesome & superb update...

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beautiful ending...loved it...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

loved the whole FF...

what an amazing writer u r...take a bow...

continue soon with new one...

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: minnu345
Hey sonali😊
lovely ending
but i dont know what are the lacks in Ur life
don't loose Ur hope at any time i wish ki u achieve what u want in Ur life
u have great writing skills
plzzz do start another FF

thanks you are also another new reader of my work, my life is not really bad, just hoping to get more

a stronger hold in my career and find a guy to settle down and marry.

Everyone has lows and highs in life, when I am writing it gives me a chance to take a break from thinking about the issues and focus on what could be or how my life could be much worse, and I realize I am lucky to have some really awesome friends on this forum who keep encouraging me.

May, Anisha, Simi and Angel are just four of the girls I have confided in that have always supported me since I joined the RBO forum. Thanks to Shriya and Manita who take time out of their busy schedules to read my stuff and comment on my vm thread as well.

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Sonali

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepali88
Beautiful Update and supperb Ending
Loves the Whole FF Sonali
shanak Journey was awesome and wonderful..Loves it
Waiting for Your Next FF..Pl write Soon🤗

glad you liked the fic Deepali thanks for your support!

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_9
hey Shona di...🤗

wow awesome & superb update...

&

beautiful ending...loved it...👍🏼

loved the whole FF...

what an amazing writer u r...take a bow...

continue soon with new one...

As usual I don't know when I will return with something new so like last time I shall make no promises. Thanks Angel for the support and wonderful pms!

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601153

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Posted: 12 years ago

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
⭐️ Congrats for completing 50th page!!!!! ⭐️
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Lovely update ... Twins ... Cool!

story bahot fast bhag rahi hain ... madam ... whats the new twist being planned now?

Waiting for the update ...

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 12 years ago

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Pooja

@candy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dishbhan
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
⭐️ Congrats for completing 50th page!!!!! ⭐️
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Lovely update ... Twins ... Cool!

story bahot fast bhag rahi hain ... madam ... whats the new twist being planned now?

Waiting for the update ...

~Cheers,
Dish

Dish... Story ki Happy Ending ho gayi (read Properly) 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb update sonali👏👏
👏luved it

The ways he is restless ... longing to be back in mumbai... actually longing to be beside his wife😉

Lovely flashback... the way u've descried the scene" pulling her into bed till shouting at the top of his lungs"... super cute😊

Getting presents parts was nice

OH arushi... the Savior... the little angel could sense it😃

i gulped at the water scene😳... but that what makes ur ff special... paying attention to each and every thing

my fav lines

" You are an angel kiddo," he exclaimed.
" Do whatever you have to do. I want them both safe," Shantanu declared.

awww... twines... i jumped with joy
really cute names ... i luved it

sitting beside his wife... holding her hand... dun wanna leave... there was progress wen he was here... luvly... penned beautifully👍🏼

a new member akhil... wow

the leap and the sunday morning description was beautiful... knowing dat its alwayz her

Since we have met I have been changing," he stated... shoo shweet

recalling there first few meetings

"There was something special about you. I just could feel it the first time you walked away from me," he stated... THUD

"I had a feeling you wouldn't leave my thoughts so easily either," she whispered... hayeela☺️

but there luv is still the same or the luv each other more... romance is dere... 😍

the banging on the door... as expected kids
wishing them

wonderful ending👏

thx for such a lovely ff...🤗

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