Jab Hum Mile- Shanak Fic 30 pg 48 - Page 36

Wow Sonali 😃
Sweet part loved it so much Shanak are going to become parents that's great 😃
Love Shanak convo always beautifully written 👏
Last few lines were too good 😊
He pressed a quick peck on her forehead. He touched her abdomen.

"Be good for your Mommy. Don't you dare come out until Daddy comes back," he ordered the unborn child.

 Khanak giggled and shook her head  back at him.

Thank u so much for the lovely part.U are a great writer love ur writing hats off to ur writing 👏

Love u 🤗

hey sona i have finally readed your ff ...i m sorry for bring late ...

good going girl ...shanak and baby ...oh i m excited ...😛last part was too cute ...shaan order his unborn child not to come out  untill he not comes back ...that so cute ...😳

saaz had already ended her ff ...and now u r also ..i m very upset ...😔

thx for your pm's dear ...hugs to you ...🤗


luv Zara

"Be good for your Mommy. Don't you dare come out until Daddy comes back," he ordered the unborn child.

this line is damn cute yaar...thanks 4 the update...

Super cute update 👏

" I bet you'll just freak out and call for Mom and Bhabhi,"Khanak teased him... OMG... kitna natural hai😉

"Be good for your Mommy. Don't you dare come out until Daddy comes back," he ordered the unborn child.😆

luved this part

continue soon.

Parents-to-be.. awesome part.. that last line... too good.. 🤣🤣

"Be good for your Mommy. Don't you dare come out until Daddy comes back," he ordered the unborn child.

sonali...dont end it plsss plsss dont...u can still get them in action even after a baby...man i love this ff sooo much

Hi Shona di...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Ya Sonali please don't end it i agree with Karishma there is still lots more action u can continue writing whenever u get time. We love this FF ❤️
Thanks 🤗

 Sorry girls but real life calls, I don't like to stretch my stories unless I had some juice left then I could go on for another ten parts lol. but I want to end it at 30 parts, never before have I had more than 24 parts for a story, so getting this far is a milestone in itself for me. Thanks for all the support and thanks for reading. Maybe next time i write something it will go on longer. I thought this one would be shorter than Tu Hi Meri Zindagi!