Rang Badalti Odhani


Rang Badalti Odhani
Rang Badalti Odhani

Jab Hum Mile- Shanak Fic 30 pg 48

adventure_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
Author's note: I do not know what my new work schedule will be like so I may not be able to update as frequently as I used to with first fic Tu Hi Meri Zindagi. This one takes place for now in Mumbai but it is AU in the fact that Khanak has her own cause and career. Shantanu has a  career of his own as  well. Hope you enjoy this first  part,( first few paragraphs are the preview posted in the Tere Sang Shanak OS threas page 14, I have added more to it )

Khanak  Sharma never expected she get into serious trouble quite like this. She had been raised in  household where everyone was liberal and exercised their freedom to the fullest. She was her parents' only daughter. She had an older brother who was a cop and her father was the police commissioner in their restrict. She should have been safe. She didn't know how she got herself into this mess. She had been doing social work. She wanted to keep the orphanage safe from a local gang instead she herself was in turmoil.


 She slowly opened her eyes as cold water was splashed on her face.


" Hey !," she yelled.


" Hello doll.  You are going to be  guest here until and if your father follows our wishes," one ugly gangster hissed.


She eyed him disgustedly.


 She looked at him,  trying to size him up. There had to be at least one weakness he had.  She was a cop's daughter  she needed to fight back somehow.


The gangster pulled out a knife two more emerged behind him. She gulped. One she could deal with but three big goons versus her, she needed a plan fast.



 Meanwhile  somewhere in the distance CID officer was approaching. He was a young man in his mid-twenties.  Danger had become second nature in his life since he got recruited  four years ago. This gang could lead him to the head smugglers that were causing havoc in Mumbai. He was part of a special task force. He often went on missions alone and sometimes he would be away from his family for months. As far as they knew he worked  for a private agency and he would have to travel on last minute trips here and there.


 He sensed some commotion ahead, he got his gun ready as he approached.

 Gangster number one was confident with two more men behind him this girl would have to listen to whatever he wanted her to do. He could harm her, scare her  and harass her all he wanted. There was no one here  hat would protect her honor. She would be nothing compared to them three. Another set of men would take over after some time. There was no way her father or brother could get here and out with her alive.


 The CID officer noticed three men edging  towards a common destination. He slowly came closer to catch what they were all interested in.


Then he heard  the gasp of  what he realized had to be some poor helpless girl. He closed his eyes in anger. He did not want them to be warned of his presence. These brutes had already crossed a limit in his book. Ganging up on an innocent woman was one of the things he could not stand for. He had to take action now.


Meanwhile, Khanak tried to think of what to say or do to make them back off.


"Please let me go. I'll tell my father to do whatever it is you want him to. Just please put that knife away," she urged.


"Haha. No way! We finally got ourselves a prize. We are not gonna let you go until we have some fun," he sneered.


 She looked at him with disdain.


" Come on boys get  a close look at this beauty," he declared.


There was no movement behind him. As he turned around  dumbfounded the last silent shot nailed him in the forehead.


When  he fell, Khanak's breathing started to relax as she stared into the most intense eyes she had ever seen.


 He came closer to her.


Her breaths increased in fear. What if he was from some rival gang? He would take her elsewhere and she would  never get to go home again.


" Don't worry. I'll get you out of here before the others come along," he assured her.


 His words touched her soul and assured her he was one of the good guys. She relaxed as he  released her from her bonds. Before she knew it, he was leading her out of there.



 They had to climb through some damp tunnels. Suddenly they heard some footsteps and yelling. He pinned her against a wall protectively as they both hoped they would not be discovered.


 He released her and they continued to make their way out of the place.  He took out his phone. He punched in a few things and soon his gps was activated.


"Wow you have a gps in your phone? I never had use for one," she stated nonchantly.


He rolled his eyes. He couldn't tell her he usually used it for missions. It  was an uncoded phone. She didn't need to know this. He would get her a safe distance from here then his duty towards this stranger would be done.


 Some time later they found an opening. He climbed up first then offered his hand to her. She almost slipped but he caught her in time.


Khanak gasped as her feet had slipped. However the strong, handsome stranger had  pulled her out in the  nick of time.


 They shared an eyelock until they both realized the situation they were in and how they just had met a short while before. They pulled apart. They walked side by side for a bit until they reached a vehicle.


" Where should I drop you? I have to go do some work but I don't want you to land in trouble again," he stated.


Khanak looked up at him.


" My father is Sanjay Sharma, he's a police commissioner . You can drop me at any police station. They will inform him once they see me," she insisted.


He looked at her puzzled. She had probably been through so much but then again she had no reason to believe he could be trusted either.


" Aap ka naam kya hai?," she inquired as he stopped the car at the local station.


 He smiled slightly.


 "Just call me SK," he retorted.


" Thanks for saving my life. I am Khanak," she said with  smile before she started to get out of the car.


" Take care Khanak," he whispered as he watched her walk away from his life for the first time.



 He felt something in his chest as  she moved further away from where he was. He soon sped off into the distance. He could not linger too long here. No one should know  his full name here. He could not blow his cover just yet.



Part One pg1

Part 2 pg 2

Part 3 pg 3

Part 4 pg 5

Part 5 pg 6


Part 6 pg 8


Part 7 pg 9


Part 8 pg 11


Part 9 pg 12


Trailer pg 13

Part 10 pg 14


Part 11 pg 16


Part 12 pg 17


Part 13 pg 19


 Part 14 pg 20


Part 15 pg 22


Part 16 pg 23


Part 17 pg 26


Part 18 pg 27


Part 19 pg 29


Part 20 pg 30


Part 21 pg 32


Part 22 pg 34


Part 23 pg 36


Part 24 pg 37


Part 25 pg 40


Part 26 pg 41


Part 27 pg 43


Part 28 pg 44


Part 29 pg 46


Part 30 pg 48(last part)


Edited by adventure_gurl - 04 July 2011 at 6:37am

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RB81 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
hei sonali,
just now opened this thread..n got ur PM too..

ok sonali..so our SK is a secret agent..sounds interesting..continue soon..
i know u r one of the regular updaters who wont make us wait long for the next update..

Edited by RB81 - 16 May 2011 at 9:36pm

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dishbhan Goldie

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
Interesting Dear!

Pls continue soon...


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purvi08 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
it is very interesting sonali di
keep writing

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angel_9 Goldie

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Hey Shona di...HugHugHugHugHugHugHug

wow loved it...

SK is CID officer...(right)...lovely & wonderful description...

khanak is social worker belonging to family of cops...amazing description...ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

he saved her...awesome description...

he does not want to reveal his identity...excellent description

its very interesting so 
continue soon...

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iluvmanar IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 12:20am | IP Logged
awesum yaar..luved it...

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-Manita- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 2:09am | IP Logged
wow Sonali...it's different and so interesting !!!
I liked the beginning and waiting for more...continue soon !!

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adventure_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 4:51am | IP Logged
thanks ladies get my new schedule soon, can't update everyday this time around but will  try to  a few times each week. glad you enjoyed the first update!

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