Hues Of Life (MG) Pt 12 pg 32 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 start!
 
continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing!!!

loved it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it...
love geet's attitude...
cant wait for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
ds is sumthng new... maan hvng hard time to handel geet!!!!!!!!!! forget about her getting impresed by him...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow love ur geet she so
different
the was talking with maan
superb
amazing part
love it
cant wait for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago


  frnd...

 
ur updates were
 
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Cute... n  dear...
 
 4 ur   ...n also .........👏👏👍🏼
 
 ......just  really ......😳
 
 4 PM me...😊.
keep updating dear...
..4 ur future work.😃..
dear lots of  n ...🤗
always  dear...
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
love ds geet... geet as a lawyer... interesting...
plz do cont soon..
thnx 4 d pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pooja,

had wanted to refuse the jacket, but he realised tht his hands were again hugging his body, so decided to take it.Wonderful beginning and delightfully funny. 😆

he felt a sudden warmth, and a shiver went through his body.A hint to the contrasting friction yet to come? Nicely done.

Maan was surprised by the coldness in her voice when she spoke his name, but he also did not miss the warmth with which she spoke Anvesha's name.My favourite line of this update, nice detailing. ⭐️

I am also ready to wait for years. Because I am not interested in meeting you,😆

Her eyes were tightly closed, showing all her feelings, and her fear.Again lovely detailing.

Hell! He hadnt even noticed that she was now wearing a pair of spectacles,You wonderfully bring out the humour from the characterizations. Excellent.😆 Love Sabah
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey interesting concept...
geet a lawyer and maan needing her help for a case...
well wat kinda case its gonna b...who is involved from the khuranas...
seems like its gonna b very interesting on how these two r gonna get closer...
can u pl add me to ur pm list...
thanks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Pooja ...nice start...nice concept...one more thing I must say that ur style of writing with correct and full spelling and easy words is one more thing I like...keep it like that.

U have written in start that this is ur another FF...have u written any other FF on Maaneet if yes then give the link please...may be I have read it but u know there are hundreds of FF going on so I can't able to recollect.

Edited by tushti-kiran - 12 years ago