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Aanya. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 6:42pm | IP Logged

You know my thoughts already! Shall edit after school :) <3


P.S - All 3 of us gave updates for each other! I love us LOL


Shruuu Hug

Coming to the update, amazing much? :D I loved, loved, loved it! :)

Mahnn I'm so super curious about what happened to Armaan!!! He sounds hurt :| Aww please let Munchkin manaofy him jaldi se :) It'd be a treat to read <3 :D

Hahaha the whole motion sickness bit was funny LOL Bahaha Riddhima is one scary girlfriend! *shudder* I'd hate it if I was in Armaan's place! Bechaara ROFL But I love them <3 *sigh*

"Munchkin you've got to see this!" His hands were in my hair, and I smiled as his breath kissed my face. "Wake up darling!" He murmured.


"Are we there yet?" I asked sleepily, still not opening my eyes.


"No, a few minutes away. But look around!" I heard the excitement in his voice. I opened my eyes and felt the sharp light pierce my sight. Blinking a few times, I took in the whole view in front of me, through the windshield.


A gasp escaped me. I had never seen a more beautiful sight. I smiled as I stared out at the colors of blue, pink and orange mingling in a wet wash of sunlight and clouds.


"I knew you would love it!" I heard him and nodded.


"Its so beautiful!" I sighed happily. His hold on my hand tightened and I realized he hadn't let gone of it ever since I fell asleep.


"It is. That's why I stopped!" He said, and I grinned at how proud he was of himself.


I looked down at the road, and saw a few cars pass us by.


"How far are we?" I asked.


"A few minutes away, we'll reach the entry. Do you want to leave?" He asked me with a smile. He must have read my mind, not a novelty, because I had no intention of letting go of this paradise sight.


"5 minutes?" I gave him a sheepish smile. He rolled his eyes and leaned forward to kiss my cheek.

Awwwh this part was *blush* beautiful <3 I loved it! The way he takes care of her! And he held her hand throughout the ride <3 Can he get any more perfect? *sigh* I wish I was in Riddhima's place LOL

Bahaha the fantasy part was ahhmaazingg LOL He read her diary???? LMAO :D And their little argument was SO them! 

Awwh kiss on the Eiffel Tower waala fantasy was so cute :) And so were the others! And the "ahem" one at Miami made me ROFL! I was surprised there was no kiss in the rain! It's one of my top fantasies! Ooops LOL 

"I promise I'll make it all come true." He said softly. I looked at him and saw a soft smile playing on his lips. Knowing him, I knew he would. 

This line was ... LOVEE <3 I adored it :) Just like I adore them :D

The entire update was beautiful, really :) <3

Hope you're doing good :D 118 days to go for November Wink



Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 06 July 2011 at 3:42am

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ksg_ritika Goldie

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
awesum part ... all thanx 2 sanaa di 4 bein born ...
bt d mystery remains as it is ... plzzz update wenever u get tym ...
thanx 4 d pm ...


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SankiPagal IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
nice to see an upd8 from u...

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Riddss IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
nice part
continue soon

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Jyo. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 12:31am | IP Logged

Sorry for editing so late. And I won't say I was busy.. because I was not.. just being lazy :P :P 

Update.. HAW :O Kya hua? Why are they fighting ? :( Itni jaldi you made them fight. Abhi toh they started living together. .and already.. :( I don't like this.. and we won't be seeing another update till november.. :O tab tak wait karna padega? mar gaye! :P :P jokes.. It was a really.. err.. sad update? I dunno.. but I liked the flashback.. it was cute.. :) :)

And ya, the birthday gift... this is a nice idea :) Really sweet of you and Aanya just to update for Saana! :) Belated Happy Birthday Saana! :)

Lots of love

Edited by ..Jojo.. - 08 July 2011 at 2:02am

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anshara Senior Member

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged
hey awesome part love her fantasy cont soon nd thanks 4 pm

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sakshilovesAR IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 1:30am | IP Logged

first of all

sana thx for bring


hmm i guess this res will remain as it is till novm...

ObodroKargosh IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 1:35am | IP Logged
OMG so sorry for editing this late but ah u know I was busy with exams, then family and then I was being lazy to edit and had no motivation to read FFs LOL  but seriously I can't believe I stayed away from this FF for this long Stern Smile after reading the update I was like okay this is the reason I love reading FFs Embarrassed

ah it was just amazing!!!! I loved every bit of this installment Embarrassed
Ridz is just like me LOL even I get car sick during long car rides Ouch and it's definitely not fun and taking medicines is annoying but I have to...the annoying part is that it makes you really drowsy Ermm and you can't enjoy properly Thumbs Down

anyway moving on to the update!! it was so cute!! they are staying in Bellagio Shocked my bro and bhabhi stayed there when they went for their trip like not too long ago LOL co-incidence much LOL and yah I guess u know now that 18yr olds aren't allowed in casinos but oh well it's an FF LOL

OMG views in early morning are just so beautiful!!!! the color of the sky is just sooo beautiful I could stare at that forever!!!!!!! it's so pretty <3 I'm so happy you included that Big smile

ROFLROFLROFL the 5 craziest fantasies of Ridz ROFL and Armaan wants to fulfill it all Blushing we'd love to read about that, so keep in mind to write all that in the future updates which also means this FF ain't shutting down soon Tongue or for the longest of the longest time Approve

Peanut-Munchkin convo's are always so fun to read!!! even in fights and heated convos there are these really adorable moments you add and it makes it a lot better to read Embarrassed

Armaan really needs to start opening up Ouch it's not good to bottle it all up Ouch and OMG when it was like I'll pay when I earn thing going on, I thought Ridz might spit up the job offer already and I was just like nooo don't not yet the entire time LOL

but I know it will happen in this part cuz of the title and the first paragraph of this update Stern Smile

aww the ending of this installment was so cute!! Embarrassed tehe Armaan put a pillow in between them LOL he's such an adorable guy Day Dreaming

okay I was drinking water when you wrote abt his friend puking on his date ROFLROFLROFL YUCKKK I had to spit the water out ROFLROFL that is so gross Dead

overall this installment was sooo cute!!! Peanut and Munchkin story read after so long Embarrassed okay now next installment Big smile can't wait to read about their masti Silly

Edited by Dr.BasketGupta - 01 August 2011 at 2:28am

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