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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
Oh, and Friends With Benefits is AMAZING as well! One of my current obsessions! =)

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
And these as well! Sorry, I just checked my posts and realized there are many worth recommending! -

And Then She Said It-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1671781


Straight Out Of Fiction-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1619795

Infinity...This is the Prologue, the actual FF is different! You'll have to search for that link though!-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1688842

Ten Ways To Get Him Back-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1630793

Heartbeat-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

Links to AMAZING OS's and FFs! 

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
m readin this core of my existence and its cute, thanks!! but u know, the best 2 i have eva read are definitely yes and TWOS. TWOS is amazin, although the story isnt very actchy but the way rachna has written the thing is SO nice.

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
I've caught up with your FF and i'm loving it so far!!! I wouldn't really suggest any improvements except I can't imagine this Will guy Confused So the Will in my head is Will (Mr Scheuster) from Glee (don't know if you watch that) as I find him kinda attractive lol. About intimate scenes, I kinda like them now as it is anyway and wouldn't mind more intimate scenes if you are comfortable. But I think some twist might be nice like Riddhima getting pregnant or something to see where AR go from there and what they famly say (inspired from the film Salaam Namaste). But then again for that, you'd have to write about some REALLY intimate scenes so maybe not Confused But I like the pace now anyway

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aquarius17

I've caught up with your FF and i'm loving it so far!!! I wouldn't really suggest any improvements except I can't imagine this Will guy Confused So the Will in my head is Will (Mr Scheuster) from Glee (don't know if you watch that) as I find him kinda attractive lol. About intimate scenes, I kinda like them now as it is anyway and wouldn't mind more intimate scenes if you are comfortable. But I think some twist might be nice like Riddhima getting pregnant or something to see where AR go from there and what they famly say (inspired from the film Salaam Namaste). But then again for that, you'd have to write about some REALLY intimate scenes so maybe not Confused But I like the pace now anyway


No, I'm definitely not getting her pregnant! I'm going to stick to reality! LOL

I mean, obviously, I don't know if that does happen, probably abroad, but I wouldn't believe it until I see it! And nah, I want to create something of my own, don't want to use ideas from movies! I do have things lined up! Let's see how they turn out! Big smile

Thanks a lot! Hug

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
answers to your questions :)

1. yes i think the pace is just right! :) i loved how you changed everything completely. Like from the point they were best friends to the point where they are lovers! you are such a great writer :)

2. Intimate scenes would be GREAT :P nobody will say NO to that :$ hehe but um if YOU are not comfortable, then don't! it all depends on the writer which is you! hehe :)

3. is that even a question? LOL your writing skills have ALWAYS been perfect! im serious! all the way from the beginning till now, I have always been in love with your writing :$ hehe but yes i did see some improvements and i love it! keep it up hun :)

4. the track is going soo good! but idk what's gonna happen with this Will dude :| lol but other than that, its going great :)

5. nope. i dont have any confusions or doubts! you're going great so far! <3

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
hey nice update...plz continue soon..

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 2:08am | IP Logged
wen u will complete the part shrutika ..then I will edit my res dear :))

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