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ParneetS IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
hey Shru...:)
1. well the pace of the story is perfectly fine..:) it's gng great..:) u r  telling everything in details...i'm pretty much happy with the story..:)
2. i'm luking forward to some cute..romantic or intimate scenes btw AR n i know it'll come soon...but dw write if u comfortable with them...cuz i know it's hard to write than to read...:)
3. the story was never ever boring sooo stop fussing over it...okie dokie... it's always been amazing..n i completely love ur writing skills... sooo stop doubting ... everything is perfect and
4. i've no doubts so far...lol :)
cont soon..:) <3

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Answer to your questions

1. pace of the story is good. It's not at all slow
2. Some intimate scenes will be good but if you are not comfortable then it's okay
3. You are an awesome writer. I love your writing
4. The present track is good. No need to change
5.  I would love see some bonding between armaan and rhea

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
hey Shru...:)
1. well the pace of the story is perfectly fine..:) it's gng great..:) u r  telling everything in details...i'm pretty much happy with the story..:)
2. i'm luking forward to some cute..romantic or intimate scenes btw AR n i know it'll come soon...but dw write if u comfortable with them...cuz i know it's hard to write than to read...:)
3. the story was never ever boring sooo stop fussing over it...okie dokie... it's always been amazing..n i completely love ur writing skills... sooo stop doubting ... everything is perfect and
4. i've no doubts so far...lol :)
cont soon..:) <3

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
OKAYYY I GOT ANSWERS!!! Big smile

1. Pace of the story is fineee! :D Plus, I don't want it to end sooo it's purrrfect! 

2. YESYESYESYES!! Omgoshh you need to write them scenes girrrl! haha jk I knowww even I'm not comfortable writing them but hey, You are Shru, you can do anything,so yeshhh! ;)

3. ...Shrutika, why did you even ask that??? You're the best writer so shut up :)

Numero cuatro, AWOTB will never be boring -__- that's all I gotta say.
Anddd I have no questions, but UPDATE SOON! <33333 :))

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged

hey

its awsome...

now u are not at all going slow...

u have indeed become a better writer... n ya im loving this phase of story...ie. transition ... of relationships...

n ya i do want intimate scenes... bt it can be with the pace u r going on... means in it'll do in later stages...

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Guys! I want to read your comments! Edit your reserved posts na! Disapprove

*Grumbles*

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
gosh i'm in love with this story! If only dill mikll gaye was still on! :) 

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belle_moi Senior Member
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
Hey Girl/boy,
now, when i meant the story is not moving forward, i was not discouraging you. You are the best writer we've got at this place. I was seeing it from a very literary point. The way you have woven your story is beautiful, its soft. And nice. And i think you have a great potential. But you need to horn your skills if you are taking this business seriously. Kay? I hope i am not offending you. Okay, ya, you have presented us with certain changes, but nothing that took our breath away, or let me make it more personal, my breath away has happened. Isnt that what you read Sheldon or Deavor or king, or any other great writer for the say, for? That surprise element is missing. Let me warn you again, i'm being very critical, this is the best ff we have here. But it cant be the greatest love story of the world. That is what I meant, and I really enjoy reading your ff:)
Love.

P.S- I'm a little cynical, so its not just with you but everyone. CHILL!  


Edited by belle_moi - 02 June 2011 at 5:20am

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