So, I want to know something from you guys! Its time I had a Readers' Opinion Session with you guys!
Frankly, I need to know a few things!
First, are you happy with the pace at which this story's unfolding? In my defense, I have shown a lot of changes in their lives in the past 5 chapters! The whole relationship evolved, from best friends to lovers and now to room-mates! And Armaan's career, the whole Krish issue!
But if you guys feel the pace is slow, let me know!
I personally feel, that the story is moving at the right pace! If anything, I am with you when you stated that a whole lot has happened in the last 5 chapters.
Absolutely no need to rush through anything! I, for one, would love to see a typical day in the life of Armaan-Riddhima now.
Second, what are you guys expecting now...In more clear terms, do you guys want me to put in any kind of umm...Intimate, for a better choice of word, scenes between the two? They will come obviously, but I'm not sure if I write them well, so I won't be giving it in much detail! but if you guys want me to, well, I'll try! I'm just going to admit this, that I'm not very comfortable writing those! I don't mind reading, but writing in itself becomes a task! I will give it my best shot however, because that is an aspect I have to concentrate on in this story...!
They are living together, so I would think, getting more intimate comes with the territory! For sure, they need to get a little beyond just the kissing stage!! I dont think I would want them going all the way though, so soon!!!
And I would love to read their awkwardness/reactions for everytime, when they feel they crossed a certain line or did something new!!!! reminds me of how Riddhima burst out laughing when they first made out!! That was just so cute and so natural!
So yes, give it a shot, I am sure with your style, you will be able to do justice to writing such sequences too!
Third, my writing skills! Have they improved/reproved, are you guys liking it or not?! The reason I'm asking is, I'm not doubting my writing skills, that just happens when I'm in for any of my mood swings, but I need to know how it is anyway! Its very subjective, some may like, some mightn't, and I need to know both aspects! I want to improve!
I have always been a big fan of your writing skills right from the first chapter. I wouldnt change a thing!
Fourth, is this track interesting? I need to know, because if it isn't, I won't change the track, but I will definitely try and spice it up a little! So let me know this as well!
This track is interesting and a pretty natural progression! Just because they are in a relationship, doesnt mean others wont ask them out (especially considering how casual relationships are considered in the USA)
But what I would like to see here, is not the usual misunderstanding etc, Instead, would like this track or any such track to be something that strengthens what they have versus driving them apart!
So dont give us tears already!! They just got together, for heavens sake!!!
Lastly, if there is any particular thing you want to know, want me to clear out, any doubts, any confusions, let me know please! If there is something you'll want me to cover in this story, then let me know, if you'll want more comedy, or romance, or more cute scenes, or more of any other character, let me know! Like one of you'll asked me to show more of the Armaan-Rhea relationship, yes, I am going to, for those who want happy stories for Andrea-Sid, yes I will think of something for them as well, anything else you'll want me to show, PLEASE do let me know!
Hands down, more romance! More cute scenes! Especially becos they are living together. That progression from Best Friends to GF/BF needs to be shown!
Anything centered around Armaan-Riddhima. The others can come in bits and pieces, but not have entire chapters dedicated to them! My opinion!
*Phew* that's one helluva questionaire, and mind you, I need answers to all 5 questions! Elaborately! Lol! Please, please, please do let me know! I know you guys comment, but many a times, some aspects, like the ones I've mentioned, are forgotten, and I really want to know this, so as to improve! So I'm just going to ask myself, so you guys can answer properly!
Do let me know! And along with your answers, do NOT forget to comment on the installment! And do unreserve your posts! Thanks! x
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