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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 5:57am | IP Logged
1) i lvoe the pace the story is unfolding in coz it tellseverything in very gud detail so i dont want to speed up
2) i wudnt mind intimate scenes just a few but if yur comfortable then u dont hav to
3)yur writing skills hav improved alot (not tht u were bad be4) but you hav gon in to much more detail thn be4 and i like it like tht
4)the track is very intersting! if u want u cud spice it up but u dont hav to
and lastly 5)i wud like to see sid and andrea hav an happy ending too..plus i wantto see more rhea-armaan scenes :)

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Shrrruuu <3
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It Was Cute. I Loved Itt <3 Hehehe.
Riddhima Is One Girl Who Gets Tensed Quickly. LOL
Oye Hoyyee. The Kiss They Had. Was Perfect <33
Hmm Will He Kinda Freaked Me Out. When He Askd Riddhima Owt.
Luckily Riddhima Told Him She Has A BF & Loves Him Alot <33
Awww Ammy Is Shoo Shweett <3
He Can Make AnyOne's Day Betta <3
Love Himm <3
Continue Soon =))

Answers To Your Ques-
1) I Love The Pace Of The Story. Its Not Too Slow. And Its Not Too Fast. It Is Just RIGHT!
2) Intimate Scene. I Dnt Mind. As Long As You Are OK With Writing It =))
3) I Just Love You Writing Style. It Has Improved <33
4) The Track Has Always Been Intresting <33 You Dnt Need To Change It =D
5) You Cover Everything Babe. Yeh Would Love To See More Of Armaan-Rhea-Riddhima <33
And Yea Would Like To See Andrea-Sid Happy Story =))



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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Okay first off, you're crazy! There are no flaws in your story! Otherwise I'd have told you already ;)
So, CHILL!!! :D

Ans 1: Happy? I'm ecstatic! Dude, they confessed like 5 chapters ago! And even then there were so many issues...her going back to India and stuff! Then they had this whole thing about whether she was ready for the "fiance" tag or not. So in short, they've had a lot of stress off late...they need time off that too without the supervision of anyone else! So yes I'm happy with the pace :)


Ans 2 [Gosh, this feels like I'm writing an exam or something LOL] : Haha you know the answer to this one! We had a very detailed not to mention highly crazy discussion about this one, you me and Sanaa ROFL I wouldn't mind it at all ;) And I'm not too comfortable with writing them either...not that I'm a prude but I just don't see myself writing something like that! Thankfully, I have long way to go before I reach that stage in LI ;)


Ans 3: I love the way you write!!! They've improved, I'd say! Last week or something I was reading random chapters and there are quite a few improvements! And your writing is loads better now...so I don't think there's room for improvement or if there is then I don't see it :) 


Ans 4: Yes it is!!! And if by spice it up you mean involving Will Fern in things that are none of his business then I forbid you to spice it up LOL No, seriously, I think it's just fine <3


Ans 5: Nothing that I can think of as of now! Armaan-Rhea sounds nice though :) Will let you know if I can think of anything! :)


*Phew* finally done! I feel like I just gave a biiig exam LOL Hope this pacifies you <3

Pssht. When I saw that "posted an installment" thingy in your PM, I was like- "Oh my God! Another one? Wow!" and then I hurried up to read it only to find that it was the same one...Haayyee meri phooti kismat  ROFL

Take care <3 Ciao :)

xoxo
Aanya

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:25am | IP Logged

Heyyy dear...wowww a Questionnaire...ok...I Lets start...Smile

1.hmmm...I just Love the way story is going...not so fast ,no so slow...The way u showing AR relationship...Loved it to the core...Clap
 
2.he he he...as far as the ahem ahem moments concerned...yess I love to read that...but usse jayada I like cute and Romentics scenes between AR...and If u r trying to write something intimate,,go for it yaar...I am sure u rock that part also...Smile
 
3.wohhh Girl...I just Love ur writing...AWOTB is one of my fav FF on IF...and u r My fav writer...Love to read more of ur writing dear...
 
4.The current track is quite intreasting...no need to changed it dear...
 
5.I also Love to see more bonding and emotional moments between Armaan and reha...Big smile

I hope u are satisfy with My answers...and as far as the installment concernd...awesome as alwazzz...Love the way Armaan pacify panic Riddhima...try to complete the part soon...thanks for the PM...take care...
 
Lots of Love
GEET
 
 

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
I think the pace of the story is going perfect its not slow its not fast and considering that they just got together this pace is what we would ask for.
As far as intimate scenes go, I guess if you find something hard to write its your wish as to when you include it, but its obvious that moments like those shall just come between the both by and by .
I guess for them atm bonding with each other emotionally, and getting dependant on each other is more necessary because they are together away from family and have only each other for now.
They have had lots going on before this so they do need some time off all the stress. I just have this one hitch though, I do feel that at times Riddhima takes Armaan for granted even though he is always taking it in the stride and not reacting.

I think as far as your writing goes its as pefect and beautiful as it can get , no need for you to do anything on that front.

I think this is an awesome idea though, having a discussion with all your readers !

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
hai so first things first. about the installment. i totally luvd it and i even commented on it and as i said i luv the jealous type of armaan but i just wish because of that boss there wont be any breakup or something serious
and about ur questions
1.the pace is completely and superbly perfect. i just luv ur ff to the core.
 
2. and yeah about the parts i wuld luv if there wuld be some intimate parts but not vulgar coz vulgar prts totally destroy the amazing luv between armaan and riddhima. i wuldnt mind a cute romantic and a limited intimate moment which wuldnt destroy thier purity of luv.coz many ff's show them as sex addicts which i totally despise. sorry no offence made.
 
3. ur writing skills are totally and marvelously fabulous. i am thinking of taking tutions from u.lolz. but seriously u are a fantastic writer. just luv ur writing.
 
4. the track wuld glue me up to my seats so it is of course intresting or way beyond intresting. yeah if u wanna spice it up i hav no probs unless yeah i hav an exception that is break up or serious probblem btw AR is forbidden , a complete no no.
 
5. and yeah i realy want comedy scenes especially btw AR. i just luv thier cute fights.
 
that is it i hope i havent hurt u with my ans. just my opinions

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
I agree fully with Aanya!!!
 
That's me being lazy and not bothered to write it all down coz i would have sooo much to say..but basically it's ALLL what Aanya's said..!!!
 
Armaan - Rhea bonding sounds amazing..!! In fact I can't wait coz I really wannna compare it to the way my brother and I are..there's a difference of two years between us..!!!
 
Question 2 - hmmm..physical intimacy..it's a very delicate topic..but it's totally up to you. Just slip them in when you think they're needed and they don't need to get THAT intimate..(ok they could..but WE don't need to know about it..LOL ROFL..That will keep Aanya's mind on track and ideas about Riddhima getting pregnant..though it would be a good prank on poor Armaan!! lolxxx)
 
Aanya's Ans 4 - I COMPLETLEY AGREE!!!! EVERY SINGLE WORD!! couldn't put it better myself..!! 
 
I don't think you need an answer to question 3...but to soothe your raging hormones..LOL..and mood swings.. you're frigging awesum!!!! You're writing is loadzzz better like TONNESS especially if you compare it to DJDW on the blog..!!!
 
And you know i'm pretty ok with the pace as well right?? Like i already posted up before..!!
 
baaki..CONTINUE SOON!!!
 
love,
Sanaa
 
 

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