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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 2:51am | IP Logged
luvd it.it was awesome.hope this fern guy doesnt create a serious breakup or though but i really lyk the fact of ammy getting jealous.i think he luks cute while jealous lolz.plzzz cont soon
luv
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 3:02am | IP Logged
loved it..waiting fr more..:)

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 3:09am | IP Logged
Awesome stuff!
WIll give a longer comment soon
How come your A-levels are at such random times :S

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Aww...Their Small Small Moments Are So Adorable 
Why Do I Have a Feeling That "Will" Is Goona Create Something In Between Confused
Well I Hope He Doesn't But I Do Have This Feeling
Now You Update ASAP So I Can Edit My Comment LOL
Edited 2nd Installment
The Banner Looks Awesome Thumbs Up
Okay Do I Need To Say That I Loved This Part
It Was Full Of  Cuteness Finally They're Going To Vegas
I Don't Know Why But As Soon As I Read That They'll Be Going There By Road
I Had a Flashback Of Anjaana Anjaani It Was So Cute and I Hope You Aren't Trying To Do Any Sort Of Things That Happened In The Movie Like the "GAY CLUB DANCE"  LOLHaha I So Can Imagine Armaan Dancing ThereROFL Actually It Would Be So Much Fun
You Know What Give It a Thought Yaar I'm Sure People Will Die Laughing Over It
Teeheee Okay So Yeah I'm Done I Can't Write More or Else I'll Doze Off Right Now Sleepy

Take Care  Hug
Afia



Edited by Wish_Al - 21 June 2011 at 1:53pm

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 6:57am | IP Logged
hey
d post was so cute
write soon

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 7:32am | IP Logged
N-A-A-A-A-A-A-A-I-C-C-C-E-E...!!!!!!!! A lovely part, i must say.!Big smileBig smileBig smile
 
Complete the part soon..
 
 
Ps- I wanted to ask you before also that what exactly is there in the vegas part?? If u have mentioned it before then i might have missd it..!! So if u could plz tell me.!!SmileSmile
 
PSS- By the way im liking this unexpected installments..!!! Keep up with it..!! Im loving it.!WinkWink

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by belle_moi

*Edited*

Hey now, that was an awesome installment, I love the way you write, but I am a little critical. I think you should work more on the story, just dont drag it, not that i dont love it, but the story isnt moving forward. Everything apart, its truly nice reading your ff:)
Love.

*Edited again*
AWWW!!! Sorry! That was a fantabulous installment.
Love:)


Dragging? Shocked

Okay! I was actually under the opinion that its going very quick
But if you feel so, can you please also mention exactly what is being dragged, so I can work on it?! Because I don't really have any idea what is being dragged, I haven't noticed anything as such...

And actually I think its seeming to be dragged because I'm irregular with updates at the moment, because if you notice, they confessed, like what, 5 chapters ago? And they've just moved in together, so that is reaching another milestone in their relationship...The real story's just started now...A lot to come still!

Still, if you feel its being dragged, please do tell me what is being dragged...Or else I really won't know what you're talking about! So if you could tell me, I'll definitely improve on it! Thanks a tonne for an honest opinion! Smile

Thanks, I appreciate the honesty! Big smile

And I've just put up one installment! So why the two comments, if you don't mind me asking? A bit confused here! Confused


Edited by Castle-Beckett - 31 May 2011 at 8:23am

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
the part is fabulous!!!!!!!Clap
seriously luved it...cute nice update..luved it to the core...Embarrassed
don't know why but i'm havin this feeling that this mr.fernAngry will turnout to b a BIG problem in their chweet luv story...luking forward to the complete update...just hope i'm wrong about this...Big smile
update soon...
bye,take care
Smile

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