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Monstuholic4evr IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Hey Shrutika!!!!
How r u?
I read the part as soon as you uPdated but couldn't post a comment...sorry!!! *I hold my ears*
The part was awesome Smile
The interviewer was a very jolly person i must say...

Continue soon
Take care

Edited by nandinii_goyal - 01 June 2011 at 5:43am

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belle_moi Senior Member

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged

Hey now, that was an awesome installment, I love the way you write, but I am a little critical. I think you should work more on the story, just dont drag it, not that i dont love it, but the story isnt moving forward. Everything apart, its truly nice reading your ff:)

*Edited again*
AWWW!!! Sorry! That was a fantabulous installment.

Edited by belle_moi - 31 May 2011 at 2:07am

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Munchkin. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Everyone's reserved posts! Shocked

Watch what happens when you don't edit them! ROFL

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MrsSobtiGrover Senior Member

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
1) Nice banner!
2) Coming back to the update:
The title sort of scared me! I thought AR we're gonna break up or have an huge arguement or something =| but then came or update and i sort of cooled down but then the will guy entered and it scared me even more =| Loool anyways the update was really cute, but i felt like i was gonna kill Riddhima for calling Will HOT ! Haha! But yeah Brilliant Update as usual <3

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imshveta Senior Member

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
I am really proud od Ridhima. She did right by turning the maybe-maybenot-boss down. It shows the commitment she has for this relationship.
Just read your note.
I think the pace can be increased just a notch. Even if you don't it's fine by me.
As far as the intimate scenes go, don't worry. If you are not comfortable we are okay to have a few words without details. That too when you think it's the right time.
But yes, they definitely need to move forward frOm this point in their relationship.


Edited by imshveta - 01 June 2011 at 5:49am

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Simmy003 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged

EDITING RIGHT NOW: Cause you scare me Ouch Omgoshaj;sdfsdmjnl; Howww ADORABLE was the first half???? They sounded like hubby and wifey!!! AWHHH! Blushing
Armaan the sweeet heart <3 made breakfast for his girlfriend...omgCUTIE! BUT,,,,W*F? How dare that Will guy flirt with Armaan's baby??? I swear to god, I'll knock him out!!!!!! Angry And then omgoshh, he asked her out for coffee?! Shocked Oh hell no WILLIS! You ain't got nothing on Armaan buddy! Tryna flirt with Riddhima, huh! She better not get that job, but i think she will cause you knowww WILL! But she knows better, Will is nothing in front of my man Armaan! He waited for her the whole omgoshh I would jusst want to kiss him all the time!!!! Besttt boyfffrann everr! I want him ! <33 hehe Shru get me a boyfriend like him pweaseee! And finish this part sooon! 

P.s. I just read my comment and cracked up!!! ROFL Bahaha i sound so dumb! Oh well <3333

Edited by Simmy003 - 30 May 2011 at 4:16pm

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alaipayuthey IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
comment edited on pg 47...

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geetm23 Newbie

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
This part was so fantastic!! Update soon!!!!

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