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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by ARfanSanaa

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Hiii Shruu!!! A very looonngg overdue comment..!!! I really have no idea what to write!!! This part was so'so FAB that I honestly have no clue where to start!!!

Coming to the previous chapter..I knew Riddhima would definitely run back to Armaan..Wink..but I didn't know u meant LITERALLY run back to him!!! LOLXX!!! So while I was reading that part'and Armaan's hilarious reactions..

"Why are you huffing?"

Cracked me up'Why else would someone be huffing you complete moron??!! LOL But it was SOOO adorable..!! I ADORED THIS scene the most in the whole of AWOTB..though I think RIddhima being Romeo..and the confession..Armaan's side of the story..and the date are very close seconds and thirds...!! I nearly forgot the whole Armaan pulling Ridz behind..That was realll cute to..!! And Andrea's

"You can have him!"  cracked me up too..i wouldn't give in so easily..!! It's ARMAAN woman!!!!Shocked

 

But the airport hug conquered them all so far'!!! It was sooo adorable..and so filmy..yet I could sooo imagine it happening..!!! Her running up to him..and Armaan fisting in the air..saying

"I knew it!!"

and then their hug and Public display of affection!!! It just reminded me of those high school days when exams were not even close..and couples were around everywhere..with the head of secondary running around shouting.. "No PDA in school!! My office..NOW!"..Lolx..she was HILARIOUS!! Then obviously the whole class would grin and give the couple a thumbs up sign or a wink..in the sense.. "lagey raho..we love seeing her irritated! " coz she really was despised by most of us!!  So while I was reading that bit..i was thinking to myself..awwhh wish this happened in skul!! I'd love to see her reaction!!   

And then the..

"Hmmm..i was thinking of a hotter chic sharing my room"

And I thought..Yeah right Armaan i really believe you..even though Riddhima totally does deserved that for being such a slow coach!! But finally she saw sense and better late than never right??Clap

So That brings us to THIS update..!! I really LOVE the way you started it off..!!! It seems so casual..and they actually were behaving like they were married..poor Armaan doing the hardwork while she sat around and instructed him..I was like..Yepp..You go girl!! Lets boss the guys around!! And then I thought to myself..But it's Armaan!!!! He's AWESUMM!!!! And I completely changed sides then..!!

I LOOVVEEE your writing skills!!! Did I mention that before?? I simply ADOREEE them!!! It's sooo awesum the way you interest every reader in what they're doing..THEN describe the apartment in the most casual way ever..!!!

"I smiled looking around the small apartment"

And thats when a person would really want to know what the apartment was like and you described it so well..i actually now have a perfect picture in my head..!!!

Then there's Riddhima's ground Rules..!!! AWESOMEEE!!!!  I believe you when you say it was her innocent fun..!! It was honestly cute..and the bickering between them'And Riddhima's smart!!! Silent treatment is the only way to get guys to stop behaving like JERKS sometyms..!! Hahaha..i should know..I have done it a million tyms to my best guy friend..!!

 

And then's Armaan's set of rules..!! SHOOO SHWEETT!!! But I could see that one coming..!! Though part of me wished he had demanded more..just to get his own back at her...!! But he really is a sweetheart...if I were there he probably wouldn't even have needed that rule..!! Day Dreaming

Love the way he's the first person to know about the deepest feelings inside her..and the po*no mags bit..ooopsss!! *sigh*..He's a GUY after all!!  And then going through their past was also freaking AMAZING!!! I could really put myself in Riddhima's position..(except the soft toys bit and horror movies..I was actually scared of them when I was young!!!  But now I find them so adorable except at nights..blame stupid toy horror movies for that!! Lolxx..) and SRK movie collection..ROCK ON girl!! I'm a die hard SRK fan..!!! Salman Khan..not too much..partly coz I adore SRK so much theres no space for any other actor in the Indian Cinema..!! Except Shahid Kapoor..I like him like 20% then Imran Kahn 3% and Ranbir 2%..but SRK 75%!!! Then on small screen there's 90% KSG!! Hayyeee.. I think 10% divides between Harshad Chopra (Prem in KDMHMD - I actually liked him quite a bit..!! Even in tere liye) and the new guy in Navya..I'm getting really attachted to that show!! and in Hollywood..Ian Somerhaulder  99%.. he plays Damon in TVD (DO you watch The Vampire Diaries??!! It's AMAZING!! you shouldd!! His character reminds me sooo much of Armaan!!)

But like riddhima I adore my mystery novels..and romance novels..And I couldn't help but awww when Riddhima said she plans giving her diaries to her daughter.!! Then I laughed along with Armaan as well'LOL but then it's so adorable the way she's already pictured his life with him..!!! And I love how he understands her..I can empathise with Riddhima when it comes to looking for adventure..I mean..who'd want a boring life..I personally look for adventure wherever I go too..and now I've woven all sorts of dreams for my uni life..I don't know what to expect but it's like this big new thing that I can't wait to try..!!  

Plus.. I love the way she can now tell him about the deepest secrets like the Krissh incident...!! I felt sooo awful for her..!!! And I love the way he's there for her throughout the tym she's split her heart out..!!  He's the best boyfriend a girl could get..!! Although that Andrea prank raises many questions..!! But I don't care..!! It's Armaaan!!!!

I was back to LMAO at the last line..

"And as it was, Armaan 'Peanuts' Mallik was back. We were back to square one."

You ended this part perfectly..!! It had everything..Comedy, Nostalgia, Memories, (for me personally too!!) excitement, tears..and most of all..the way their relationship matured by JUST talking..!!

Now I can't WAITTT for the next update..!! SO update soon'!!! =D Varna I might resume to blackmail..u know how..

Muhuhaahahahahahaha ' Barney Style..!!!

 

Oh'And I hope you understood all my blabber!!!


Sanaa!! I was so WAITING for your comment! But I thought I would see it only after your exams get over! But you still managed! And such a long one too!

Okay, so read the emboldened part, in sequence, I've replied to them individually in separate paragraphs! Big smile

Lol, Andrea's 'You can have him...' cracked me up too when I was writing it! But Armaan's really tested her patience till now! LOL


And yes, that was the idea...Riddhima's going to be doing a lot of bossing around as usual! But that's a normal girl thing isn't it? Make Armaan do all the work! LOL

And okay, thank you for that! Seriously! Lately I'm having doubts, but your comment on that really did cheer me up! My writing skills are probably too pressurized because of stupid studies! But when I feel like writing I think it comes out fine! Embarrassed
So I'm going to do that now! Write when I'm in the mood and not when I have the time! It works better for me I guess! Thanks San! Hug

Oh yeah, silent treatment kills them doesn't it? I've tried it too, and it just bothered my best friend so much he was like what happened, why you ignoring me? ROFL

By those scary toy horror movies I bet you mean Child's Play Series! Chucky the doll, killing people! LOL
It used to be scary! I wasn't able to look at my dolls for days! My sister actually tied my life-sized doll with my Dad's belt once! And tossed her out into the living room! My Mum was like what the hell did you do? My sister's elder to me, but she's more of scared cat than me! LOL

I have 50% KSG now and another 50% for Nathan Fillion who plays Castle! LOL And I love Ian Harding, who plays Ezra Fitz in Pretty Little Liars! Big smile
But if you ask me overall, KSG beats all of them in my favorites list! 
No I don't watch Vampire Diaries, because I already watch a lot, and its already way distracting! I plan on starting it when my exams get over in November! I have 6 months to kill! LOL

And about how Armaan understands Riddhima, I actually expected a lot of comments on that particular extract, where he describes her! It was my personal favorite, because it tells us how Riddhima is! But not many people got to that! But anyway, yes, I myself am that kind of person! Riddhima's a carbon copy of me, so I guess you guys know me very well now as well! Embarrassed

Yes, the whole engagement prank raises a lot of questions, but at the end of the day, he had done it for Riddhima's love only! He did it so she realizes and he succeeded didn't he?

I hope their relationship matured! I tried showing that! Thanks for commenting on that! 


I <3 Barney! But he's gay in real life! Cry Sad! Confused
 
I know Shru I managed!! I'm so proud of myself..!!! i was sooo surprised ..everything was in my head that i was just waiting to spill to you!!!!  and never thought it would come out THIS Long..!!!
 
Yeah..My best friend went on a record to call me boring once when i gave him silent treatment..!!! And he made it SOO much worse ofr himself..it really did continue for like a week!!! LOL which resulted in me forgiving him after a million sorrys!!! LOL
 
Yeahh..I honestly do feel REALLY bad for Andrea..!! I'd HATE to be in her place..ie be with someone..have feelings for them..but KNOW they love someone else..!! It would kill!! Esp if the person is Armaan!! Somehow..as much as I loooveee Armaan..he really wasn't fair to her...I think you should show..even in ONE paragraph be it..what happens to Andrea and Sid coz they did play quite a major role..!! That's my way of saying..i think it'd be GREAT if they got together..!! lolxx..but it's totally up to you!!!
 
Hahahahaha..yeah i guess we know you very well.!! probably you know me too...because in the second season of LOOC every action Riddhima took was probably what I would have done..!!! That includes forgiving Armaan for God knows what all he did..!! I can't help but whenever i write I have to put part of me into the character..ESP my OS Love at first sight...that was TOTALLY me..!! lolxx..
 
I'm not sure which toy movie it was..but it definitley was about Toys coming alive at night..plus i have a very superstitious Gandmother who scared us into not sleeping with soft toys..LOL..(don't get me wrong..She's AMAZINGGG!!! just veryyy superstitious..lolxx) I remember watching 'the exorcist' when i was much younger..I could honestly not sleep at all in my own bed!!! Have you watched it..!! ooohhh..The one with the girl being possessed?? Not pleasant!!
 
that's enough of my rambling about scary movies..!! And yeahh..Barney's gay..!! but do you watch 90210..I really really really really like Liam in that!!! And Naveed..!!! Naveed is such a sweetheart!!


I <3 90210!

Liam is my Armaan of Hollywood man! He's ADORABLE! You saw the Mexico episode right? I would love a boyfriend like him!

But I have a feeling that he isn't going to be there in Season 4! Cry

I like Navid, but I don't like Silver...Silver's dated literally every guy in the gang except Liam! Dixon, Teddy, Navid! She's one...I don't know!

I hated what they did to Adrianna's character though! Angry
 
Yeahh!! Liam is just sooo adorable isn't he??!!! Esp after the mexico episode!!! Btw i think Naomi and Maz are cutee..though my other friends don't..=(!!!!
 
I actually like Silver..!!! Navid deserves better than Adrianna..who ditched him for Teddy..who just wanted a fling..who then thought Navid would accept her back..basically since then i never really liked her..!!! And the whole stealing music thing was not cool man..!!!
 
Hahaha..my Armaan of Hollywood is Damon in The Vampire Diaries!! I simple ADOREEE that character..!!!
 
Do you watch Navya..?? On star plus..??!! I''ve watched a couple of episodes here and there..and I think that couple is just sooo adorable!!!! Though obviously they can't take AR's place..!!!

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Okay I'm going to quit quoting because its getting too confusing! 

And I adore Liam!

And Silver, should really grow her hair back! I hate her short hair! But Adrianna just pissed me off this season! Seriously!

And I love Naomi-Max! I hope Max is there in the next season! I think they've kicked Liam and Max out! They did that with Ethan, although I never really liked Ethan anyway! 

And no, I barely watch TV! I just watch Friends on TV and the other shows on my laptop! I just missed Perfect Couple! Thanks to my stupid sister! I'll have to watch the repeat now! 

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged
YEAH!! i never really liked Ethan either..!! even when he was with Annie!!! noo i really hope they don't kick them out..!! it would suck without them.!! I liked Silver's Hair in season 2 ...But is Season 3 it's now just way tooo short..!!!
 
BTW..what do you think of Ryan and Annie's Mum?? I find it realllyyy WIERD!!!!! I can't watch perfect couple coz i don't get channel V..!! ARGHHH!!! But then..youtube zinda baad!!!! I'm waiting for someone to post it up there...lolxx..
 
Ohh..do try and watch a couple of episodes of Navya if you can..!! the actors are new but they have great chemistry..!!

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ARfanSanaa

YEAH!! i never really liked Ethan either..!! even when he was with Annie!!! noo i really hope they don't kick them out..!! it would suck without them.!! I liked Silver's Hair in season 2 ...But is Season 3 it's now just way tooo short..!!!
 
BTW..what do you think of Ryan and Annie's Mum?? I find it realllyyy WIERD!!!!! I can't watch perfect couple coz i don't get channel V..!! ARGHHH!!! But then..youtube zinda baad!!!! I'm waiting for someone to post it up there...lolxx..
 
Ohh..do try and watch a couple of episodes of Navya if you can..!! the actors are new but they have great chemistry..!!

Ryan and Annie's Mum is weird man! No kidding! I preferred Ryan and Jen, although Jen is damn bitchy! But Jen is too cool yah! She's just...inexplicably blonde! And I love it! Haha! I used to love Ryan-Jen! 

I'll try! I'm so busy studying! I'm waiting for July if nothing else! At least I'll be a bit more chilled out!

I'm off now! x

Tata! Have to go back to studying! x

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nice one

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What's with such SLOW comments? Ermm
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hmmm

nice installment

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
hey hi!!!!!!! new thread congratulations!!!!!
i know i'm a bit late with already one part posted which is wonderful by the way, but it's awesome already thread 4!!!!!!!!!!
ok now about the update, it has been amazing!!! love it, with AR love, teasing...n Riddhimas' rules!!!lol but love when Armaan said ""There's just one rule!" He thought for a moment and said. I looked at him questioningly. "You're not allowed to leave me or stop loving me!"
wonderful...n the Krish part was so sad n painful...again perfect...evryword that Armaan said to her n their relationship is superb!!!!

cont soon...
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