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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
2nd instalment is just woww.. feel bad for her cousin krish...old memory's of their childhood is so nice..both armaan n riddhima were best fnds from their birth...ridzi named her all toys ..she so attached to everything...n armaan is as always so much caring n understanding...  cont.soon

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Hiii Shruu!!! A very looonngg overdue comment..!!! I really have no idea what to write!!! This part was so…so FAB that I honestly have no clue where to start!!!

Coming to the previous chapter..I knew Riddhima would definitely run back to Armaan..Wink..but I didn't know u meant LITERALLY run back to him!!! LOLXX!!! So while I was reading that part…and Armaan's hilarious reactions..

"Why are you huffing?"

Cracked me up…Why else would someone be huffing you complete moron??!! LOL But it was SOOO adorable..!! I ADORED THIS scene the most in the whole of AWOTB..though I think RIddhima being Romeo..and the confession..Armaan's side of the story..and the date are very close seconds and thirds...!! I nearly forgot the whole Armaan pulling Ridz behind..That was realll cute to..!! And Andrea's

"You can have him!"  cracked me up too..i wouldn't give in so easily..!! It's ARMAAN woman!!!!Shocked

 

But the airport hug conquered them all so far…!!! It was sooo adorable..and so filmy..yet I could sooo imagine it happening..!!! Her running up to him..and Armaan fisting in the air..saying

"I knew it!!"

and then their hug and Public display of affection!!! It just reminded me of those high school days when exams were not even close..and couples were around everywhere..with the head of secondary running around shouting.. "No PDA in school!! My office..NOW!"..Lolx..she was HILARIOUS!! Then obviously the whole class would grin and give the couple a thumbs up sign or a wink..in the sense.. "lagey raho..we love seeing her irritated! " coz she really was despised by most of us!!  So while I was reading that bit..i was thinking to myself..awwhh wish this happened in skul!! I'd love to see her reaction!!   

And then the..

"Hmmm..i was thinking of a hotter chic sharing my room"

And I thought..Yeah right Armaan i really believe you..even though Riddhima totally does deserved that for being such a slow coach!! But finally she saw sense and better late than never right??Clap

So That brings us to THIS update..!! I really LOVE the way you started it off..!!! It seems so casual..and they actually were behaving like they were married..poor Armaan doing the hardwork while she sat around and instructed him..I was like..Yepp..You go girl!! Lets boss the guys around!! And then I thought to myself..But it's Armaan!!!! He's AWESUMM!!!! And I completely changed sides then..!!

I LOOVVEEE your writing skills!!! Did I mention that before?? I simply ADOREEE them!!! It's sooo awesum the way you interest every reader in what they're doing..THEN describe the apartment in the most casual way ever..!!!

"I smiled looking around the small apartment"

And thats when a person would really want to know what the apartment was like and you described it so well..i actually now have a perfect picture in my head..!!!

Then there's Riddhima's ground Rules..!!! AWESOMEEE!!!!  I believe you when you say it was her innocent fun..!! It was honestly cute..and the bickering between them…And Riddhima's smart!!! Silent treatment is the only way to get guys to stop behaving like JERKS sometyms..!! Hahaha..i should know..I have done it a million tyms to my best guy friend..!!

 

And then's Armaan's set of rules..!! SHOOO SHWEETT!!! But I could see that one coming..!! Though part of me wished he had demanded more..just to get his own back at her...!! But he really is a sweetheart...if I were there he probably wouldn't even have needed that rule..!! Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

Love the way he's the first person to know about the deepest feelings inside her..and the po*no mags bit..ooopsss!! *sigh*..He's a GUY after all!!  And then going through their past was also freaking AMAZING!!! I could really put myself in Riddhima's position..(except the soft toys bit and horror movies..I was actually scared of them when I was young!!!  But now I find them so adorable except at nights..blame stupid toy horror movies for that!! Lolxx..) and SRK movie collection..ROCK ON girl!! I'm a die hard SRK fan..!!! Salman Khan..not too much..partly coz I adore SRK so much theres no space for any other actor in the Indian Cinema..!! Except Shahid Kapoor..I like him like 20% then Imran Kahn 3% and Ranbir 2%..but SRK 75%!!! Then on small screen there's 90% KSG!! Hayyeee.. I think 10% divides between Harshad Chopra (Prem in KDMHMD - I actually liked him quite a bit..!! Even in tere liye) and the new guy in Navya..I'm getting really attachted to that show!! and in Hollywood..Ian Somerhaulder  99%.. he plays Damon in TVD (DO you watch The Vampire Diaries??!! It's AMAZING!! you shouldd!! His character reminds me sooo much of Armaan!!)

But like riddhima I adore my mystery novels..and romance novels..And I couldn't help but awww when Riddhima said she plans giving her diaries to her daughter.!! Then I laughed along with Armaan as well…LOL but then it's so adorable the way she's already pictured his life with him..!!! And I love how he understands her..I can empathise with Riddhima when it comes to looking for adventure..I mean..who'd want a boring life..I personally look for adventure wherever I go too..and now I've woven all sorts of dreams for my uni life..I don't know what to expect but it's like this big new thing that I can't wait to try..!!  

Plus.. I love the way she can now tell him about the deepest secrets like the Krissh incident...!! I felt sooo awful for her..!!! And I love the way he's there for her throughout the tym she's split her heart out..!!  He's the best boyfriend a girl could get..!! Although that Andrea prank raises many questions..!! But I don't care..!! It's Armaaan!!!!

I was back to LMAO at the last line..

"And as it was, Armaan 'Peanuts' Mallik was back. We were back to square one."

You ended this part perfectly..!! It had everything..Comedy, Nostalgia, Memories, (for me personally too!!) excitement, tears..and most of all..the way their relationship matured by JUST talking..!!

Now I can't WAITTT for the next update..!! SO update soon…!!! =D Varna I might resume to blackmail..u know how..

Muhuhaahahahahahaha – Barney Style..!!!

 

Oh…And I hope you understood all my blabber!!!

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WOW!!! I honestly wasn't expecting to give this big a comment..but now i have..you have to sit and read and reply!!
 
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Originally posted by ARfanSanaa

Hiii Shruu!!! A very looonngg overdue comment..!!! I really have no idea what to write!!! This part was so'so FAB that I honestly have no clue where to start!!!

Coming to the previous chapter..I knew Riddhima would definitely run back to Armaan..Wink..but I didn't know u meant LITERALLY run back to him!!! LOLXX!!! So while I was reading that part'and Armaan's hilarious reactions..

"Why are you huffing?"

Cracked me up'Why else would someone be huffing you complete moron??!! LOL But it was SOOO adorable..!! I ADORED THIS scene the most in the whole of AWOTB..though I think RIddhima being Romeo..and the confession..Armaan's side of the story..and the date are very close seconds and thirds...!! I nearly forgot the whole Armaan pulling Ridz behind..That was realll cute to..!! And Andrea's

"You can have him!"  cracked me up too..i wouldn't give in so easily..!! It's ARMAAN woman!!!!Shocked

 

But the airport hug conquered them all so far'!!! It was sooo adorable..and so filmy..yet I could sooo imagine it happening..!!! Her running up to him..and Armaan fisting in the air..saying

"I knew it!!"

and then their hug and Public display of affection!!! It just reminded me of those high school days when exams were not even close..and couples were around everywhere..with the head of secondary running around shouting.. "No PDA in school!! My office..NOW!"..Lolx..she was HILARIOUS!! Then obviously the whole class would grin and give the couple a thumbs up sign or a wink..in the sense.. "lagey raho..we love seeing her irritated! " coz she really was despised by most of us!!  So while I was reading that bit..i was thinking to myself..awwhh wish this happened in skul!! I'd love to see her reaction!!   

And then the..

"Hmmm..i was thinking of a hotter chic sharing my room"

And I thought..Yeah right Armaan i really believe you..even though Riddhima totally does deserved that for being such a slow coach!! But finally she saw sense and better late than never right??Clap

So That brings us to THIS update..!! I really LOVE the way you started it off..!!! It seems so casual..and they actually were behaving like they were married..poor Armaan doing the hardwork while she sat around and instructed him..I was like..Yepp..You go girl!! Lets boss the guys around!! And then I thought to myself..But it's Armaan!!!! He's AWESUMM!!!! And I completely changed sides then..!!

I LOOVVEEE your writing skills!!! Did I mention that before?? I simply ADOREEE them!!! It's sooo awesum the way you interest every reader in what they're doing..THEN describe the apartment in the most casual way ever..!!!

"I smiled looking around the small apartment"

And thats when a person would really want to know what the apartment was like and you described it so well..i actually now have a perfect picture in my head..!!!

Then there's Riddhima's ground Rules..!!! AWESOMEEE!!!!  I believe you when you say it was her innocent fun..!! It was honestly cute..and the bickering between them'And Riddhima's smart!!! Silent treatment is the only way to get guys to stop behaving like JERKS sometyms..!! Hahaha..i should know..I have done it a million tyms to my best guy friend..!!

 

And then's Armaan's set of rules..!! SHOOO SHWEETT!!! But I could see that one coming..!! Though part of me wished he had demanded more..just to get his own back at her...!! But he really is a sweetheart...if I were there he probably wouldn't even have needed that rule..!! Day Dreaming

Love the way he's the first person to know about the deepest feelings inside her..and the po*no mags bit..ooopsss!! *sigh*..He's a GUY after all!!  And then going through their past was also freaking AMAZING!!! I could really put myself in Riddhima's position..(except the soft toys bit and horror movies..I was actually scared of them when I was young!!!  But now I find them so adorable except at nights..blame stupid toy horror movies for that!! Lolxx..) and SRK movie collection..ROCK ON girl!! I'm a die hard SRK fan..!!! Salman Khan..not too much..partly coz I adore SRK so much theres no space for any other actor in the Indian Cinema..!! Except Shahid Kapoor..I like him like 20% then Imran Kahn 3% and Ranbir 2%..but SRK 75%!!! Then on small screen there's 90% KSG!! Hayyeee.. I think 10% divides between Harshad Chopra (Prem in KDMHMD - I actually liked him quite a bit..!! Even in tere liye) and the new guy in Navya..I'm getting really attachted to that show!! and in Hollywood..Ian Somerhaulder  99%.. he plays Damon in TVD (DO you watch The Vampire Diaries??!! It's AMAZING!! you shouldd!! His character reminds me sooo much of Armaan!!)

But like riddhima I adore my mystery novels..and romance novels..And I couldn't help but awww when Riddhima said she plans giving her diaries to her daughter.!! Then I laughed along with Armaan as well'LOL but then it's so adorable the way she's already pictured his life with him..!!! And I love how he understands her..I can empathise with Riddhima when it comes to looking for adventure..I mean..who'd want a boring life..I personally look for adventure wherever I go too..and now I've woven all sorts of dreams for my uni life..I don't know what to expect but it's like this big new thing that I can't wait to try..!!  

Plus.. I love the way she can now tell him about the deepest secrets like the Krissh incident...!! I felt sooo awful for her..!!! And I love the way he's there for her throughout the tym she's split her heart out..!!  He's the best boyfriend a girl could get..!! Although that Andrea prank raises many questions..!! But I don't care..!! It's Armaaan!!!!

I was back to LMAO at the last line..

"And as it was, Armaan 'Peanuts' Mallik was back. We were back to square one."

You ended this part perfectly..!! It had everything..Comedy, Nostalgia, Memories, (for me personally too!!) excitement, tears..and most of all..the way their relationship matured by JUST talking..!!

Now I can't WAITTT for the next update..!! SO update soon'!!! =D Varna I might resume to blackmail..u know how..

Muhuhaahahahahahaha ' Barney Style..!!!

 

Oh'And I hope you understood all my blabber!!!


I agree to all of the above.

Secondly, OH MY GOD Sanaa that was freakishly LONGG :D

You love Barney too???? Yay <3 He's legen...wait for it...dary :D

And TVD rocks too although Season 2 hasn't yet made an appearance in India :P Do you also see 90210? Uska bhi Season 3 nahi aaya :P Do you watch Bones too? And Two and a Half men? :D Haha it sounds like I watch too much tv but the thing is that these shows are never on simultaneously [and thank God for that] so it's good :D

I will get back to my OS writing now lest Shrutika should murder me LOL

xoxo
Aanya


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Originally posted by ARfanSanaa

Hiii Shruu!!! A very looonngg overdue comment..!!! I really have no idea what to write!!! This part was so'so FAB that I honestly have no clue where to start!!!

Coming to the previous chapter..I knew Riddhima would definitely run back to Armaan..Wink..but I didn't know u meant LITERALLY run back to him!!! LOLXX!!! So while I was reading that part'and Armaan's hilarious reactions..

"Why are you huffing?"

Cracked me up'Why else would someone be huffing you complete moron??!! LOL But it was SOOO adorable..!! I ADORED THIS scene the most in the whole of AWOTB..though I think RIddhima being Romeo..and the confession..Armaan's side of the story..and the date are very close seconds and thirds...!! I nearly forgot the whole Armaan pulling Ridz behind..That was realll cute to..!! And Andrea's

"You can have him!"  cracked me up too..i wouldn't give in so easily..!! It's ARMAAN woman!!!!Shocked

 

But the airport hug conquered them all so far'!!! It was sooo adorable..and so filmy..yet I could sooo imagine it happening..!!! Her running up to him..and Armaan fisting in the air..saying

"I knew it!!"

and then their hug and Public display of affection!!! It just reminded me of those high school days when exams were not even close..and couples were around everywhere..with the head of secondary running around shouting.. "No PDA in school!! My office..NOW!"..Lolx..she was HILARIOUS!! Then obviously the whole class would grin and give the couple a thumbs up sign or a wink..in the sense.. "lagey raho..we love seeing her irritated! " coz she really was despised by most of us!!  So while I was reading that bit..i was thinking to myself..awwhh wish this happened in skul!! I'd love to see her reaction!!   

And then the..

"Hmmm..i was thinking of a hotter chic sharing my room"

And I thought..Yeah right Armaan i really believe you..even though Riddhima totally does deserved that for being such a slow coach!! But finally she saw sense and better late than never right??Clap

So That brings us to THIS update..!! I really LOVE the way you started it off..!!! It seems so casual..and they actually were behaving like they were married..poor Armaan doing the hardwork while she sat around and instructed him..I was like..Yepp..You go girl!! Lets boss the guys around!! And then I thought to myself..But it's Armaan!!!! He's AWESUMM!!!! And I completely changed sides then..!!

I LOOVVEEE your writing skills!!! Did I mention that before?? I simply ADOREEE them!!! It's sooo awesum the way you interest every reader in what they're doing..THEN describe the apartment in the most casual way ever..!!!

"I smiled looking around the small apartment"

And thats when a person would really want to know what the apartment was like and you described it so well..i actually now have a perfect picture in my head..!!!

Then there's Riddhima's ground Rules..!!! AWESOMEEE!!!!  I believe you when you say it was her innocent fun..!! It was honestly cute..and the bickering between them'And Riddhima's smart!!! Silent treatment is the only way to get guys to stop behaving like JERKS sometyms..!! Hahaha..i should know..I have done it a million tyms to my best guy friend..!!

 

And then's Armaan's set of rules..!! SHOOO SHWEETT!!! But I could see that one coming..!! Though part of me wished he had demanded more..just to get his own back at her...!! But he really is a sweetheart...if I were there he probably wouldn't even have needed that rule..!! Day Dreaming

Love the way he's the first person to know about the deepest feelings inside her..and the po*no mags bit..ooopsss!! *sigh*..He's a GUY after all!!  And then going through their past was also freaking AMAZING!!! I could really put myself in Riddhima's position..(except the soft toys bit and horror movies..I was actually scared of them when I was young!!!  But now I find them so adorable except at nights..blame stupid toy horror movies for that!! Lolxx..) and SRK movie collection..ROCK ON girl!! I'm a die hard SRK fan..!!! Salman Khan..not too much..partly coz I adore SRK so much theres no space for any other actor in the Indian Cinema..!! Except Shahid Kapoor..I like him like 20% then Imran Kahn 3% and Ranbir 2%..but SRK 75%!!! Then on small screen there's 90% KSG!! Hayyeee.. I think 10% divides between Harshad Chopra (Prem in KDMHMD - I actually liked him quite a bit..!! Even in tere liye) and the new guy in Navya..I'm getting really attachted to that show!! and in Hollywood..Ian Somerhaulder  99%.. he plays Damon in TVD (DO you watch The Vampire Diaries??!! It's AMAZING!! you shouldd!! His character reminds me sooo much of Armaan!!)

But like riddhima I adore my mystery novels..and romance novels..And I couldn't help but awww when Riddhima said she plans giving her diaries to her daughter.!! Then I laughed along with Armaan as well'LOL but then it's so adorable the way she's already pictured his life with him..!!! And I love how he understands her..I can empathise with Riddhima when it comes to looking for adventure..I mean..who'd want a boring life..I personally look for adventure wherever I go too..and now I've woven all sorts of dreams for my uni life..I don't know what to expect but it's like this big new thing that I can't wait to try..!!  

Plus.. I love the way she can now tell him about the deepest secrets like the Krissh incident...!! I felt sooo awful for her..!!! And I love the way he's there for her throughout the tym she's split her heart out..!!  He's the best boyfriend a girl could get..!! Although that Andrea prank raises many questions..!! But I don't care..!! It's Armaaan!!!!

I was back to LMAO at the last line..

"And as it was, Armaan 'Peanuts' Mallik was back. We were back to square one."

You ended this part perfectly..!! It had everything..Comedy, Nostalgia, Memories, (for me personally too!!) excitement, tears..and most of all..the way their relationship matured by JUST talking..!!

Now I can't WAITTT for the next update..!! SO update soon'!!! =D Varna I might resume to blackmail..u know how..

Muhuhaahahahahahaha ' Barney Style..!!!

 

Oh'And I hope you understood all my blabber!!!


Sanaa!! I was so WAITING for your comment! But I thought I would see it only after your exams get over! But you still managed! And such a long one too!

Okay, so read the emboldened part, in sequence, I've replied to them individually in separate paragraphs! Big smile

Lol, Andrea's 'You can have him...' cracked me up too when I was writing it! But Armaan's really tested her patience till now! LOL


And yes, that was the idea...Riddhima's going to be doing a lot of bossing around as usual! But that's a normal girl thing isn't it? Make Armaan do all the work! LOL

And okay, thank you for that! Seriously! Lately I'm having doubts, but your comment on that really did cheer me up! My writing skills are probably too pressurized because of stupid studies! But when I feel like writing I think it comes out fine! Embarrassed
So I'm going to do that now! Write when I'm in the mood and not when I have the time! It works better for me I guess! Thanks San! Hug

Oh yeah, silent treatment kills them doesn't it? I've tried it too, and it just bothered my best friend so much he was like what happened, why you ignoring me? ROFL

By those scary toy horror movies I bet you mean Child's Play Series! Chucky the doll, killing people! LOL
It used to be scary! I wasn't able to look at my dolls for days! My sister actually tied my life-sized doll with my Dad's belt once! And tossed her out into the living room! My Mum was like what the hell did you do? My sister's elder to me, but she's more of scared cat than me! LOL

I have 50% KSG now and another 50% for Nathan Fillion who plays Castle! LOL And I love Ian Harding, who plays Ezra Fitz in Pretty Little Liars! Big smile
But if you ask me overall, KSG beats all of them in my favorites list! 
No I don't watch Vampire Diaries, because I already watch a lot, and its already way distracting! I plan on starting it when my exams get over in November! I have 6 months to kill! LOL

And about how Armaan understands Riddhima, I actually expected a lot of comments on that particular extract, where he describes her! It was my personal favorite, because it tells us how Riddhima is! But not many people got to that! But anyway, yes, I myself am that kind of person! Riddhima's a carbon copy of me, so I guess you guys know me very well now as well! Embarrassed

Yes, the whole engagement prank raises a lot of questions, but at the end of the day, he had done it for Riddhima's love only! He did it so she realizes and he succeeded didn't he?

I hope their relationship matured! I tried showing that! Thanks for commenting on that! 


I <3 Barney! But he's gay in real life! Cry Sad! Confused

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Originally posted by Aanya_taanu4evr

Originally posted by ARfanSanaa

Hiii Shruu!!! A very looonngg overdue comment..!!! I really have no idea what to write!!! This part was so'so FAB that I honestly have no clue where to start!!!

Coming to the previous chapter..I knew Riddhima would definitely run back to Armaan..Wink..but I didn't know u meant LITERALLY run back to him!!! LOLXX!!! So while I was reading that part'and Armaan's hilarious reactions..

"Why are you huffing?"

Cracked me up'Why else would someone be huffing you complete moron??!! LOL But it was SOOO adorable..!! I ADORED THIS scene the most in the whole of AWOTB..though I think RIddhima being Romeo..and the confession..Armaan's side of the story..and the date are very close seconds and thirds...!! I nearly forgot the whole Armaan pulling Ridz behind..That was realll cute to..!! And Andrea's

"You can have him!"  cracked me up too..i wouldn't give in so easily..!! It's ARMAAN woman!!!!Shocked

 

But the airport hug conquered them all so far'!!! It was sooo adorable..and so filmy..yet I could sooo imagine it happening..!!! Her running up to him..and Armaan fisting in the air..saying

"I knew it!!"

and then their hug and Public display of affection!!! It just reminded me of those high school days when exams were not even close..and couples were around everywhere..with the head of secondary running around shouting.. "No PDA in school!! My office..NOW!"..Lolx..she was HILARIOUS!! Then obviously the whole class would grin and give the couple a thumbs up sign or a wink..in the sense.. "lagey raho..we love seeing her irritated! " coz she really was despised by most of us!!  So while I was reading that bit..i was thinking to myself..awwhh wish this happened in skul!! I'd love to see her reaction!!   

And then the..

"Hmmm..i was thinking of a hotter chic sharing my room"

And I thought..Yeah right Armaan i really believe you..even though Riddhima totally does deserved that for being such a slow coach!! But finally she saw sense and better late than never right??Clap

So That brings us to THIS update..!! I really LOVE the way you started it off..!!! It seems so casual..and they actually were behaving like they were married..poor Armaan doing the hardwork while she sat around and instructed him..I was like..Yepp..You go girl!! Lets boss the guys around!! And then I thought to myself..But it's Armaan!!!! He's AWESUMM!!!! And I completely changed sides then..!!

I LOOVVEEE your writing skills!!! Did I mention that before?? I simply ADOREEE them!!! It's sooo awesum the way you interest every reader in what they're doing..THEN describe the apartment in the most casual way ever..!!!

"I smiled looking around the small apartment"

And thats when a person would really want to know what the apartment was like and you described it so well..i actually now have a perfect picture in my head..!!!

Then there's Riddhima's ground Rules..!!! AWESOMEEE!!!!  I believe you when you say it was her innocent fun..!! It was honestly cute..and the bickering between them'And Riddhima's smart!!! Silent treatment is the only way to get guys to stop behaving like JERKS sometyms..!! Hahaha..i should know..I have done it a million tyms to my best guy friend..!!

 

And then's Armaan's set of rules..!! SHOOO SHWEETT!!! But I could see that one coming..!! Though part of me wished he had demanded more..just to get his own back at her...!! But he really is a sweetheart...if I were there he probably wouldn't even have needed that rule..!! Day Dreaming

Love the way he's the first person to know about the deepest feelings inside her..and the po*no mags bit..ooopsss!! *sigh*..He's a GUY after all!!  And then going through their past was also freaking AMAZING!!! I could really put myself in Riddhima's position..(except the soft toys bit and horror movies..I was actually scared of them when I was young!!!  But now I find them so adorable except at nights..blame stupid toy horror movies for that!! Lolxx..) and SRK movie collection..ROCK ON girl!! I'm a die hard SRK fan..!!! Salman Khan..not too much..partly coz I adore SRK so much theres no space for any other actor in the Indian Cinema..!! Except Shahid Kapoor..I like him like 20% then Imran Kahn 3% and Ranbir 2%..but SRK 75%!!! Then on small screen there's 90% KSG!! Hayyeee.. I think 10% divides between Harshad Chopra (Prem in KDMHMD - I actually liked him quite a bit..!! Even in tere liye) and the new guy in Navya..I'm getting really attachted to that show!! and in Hollywood..Ian Somerhaulder  99%.. he plays Damon in TVD (DO you watch The Vampire Diaries??!! It's AMAZING!! you shouldd!! His character reminds me sooo much of Armaan!!)

But like riddhima I adore my mystery novels..and romance novels..And I couldn't help but awww when Riddhima said she plans giving her diaries to her daughter.!! Then I laughed along with Armaan as well'LOL but then it's so adorable the way she's already pictured his life with him..!!! And I love how he understands her..I can empathise with Riddhima when it comes to looking for adventure..I mean..who'd want a boring life..I personally look for adventure wherever I go too..and now I've woven all sorts of dreams for my uni life..I don't know what to expect but it's like this big new thing that I can't wait to try..!!  

Plus.. I love the way she can now tell him about the deepest secrets like the Krissh incident...!! I felt sooo awful for her..!!! And I love the way he's there for her throughout the tym she's split her heart out..!!  He's the best boyfriend a girl could get..!! Although that Andrea prank raises many questions..!! But I don't care..!! It's Armaaan!!!!

I was back to LMAO at the last line..

"And as it was, Armaan 'Peanuts' Mallik was back. We were back to square one."

You ended this part perfectly..!! It had everything..Comedy, Nostalgia, Memories, (for me personally too!!) excitement, tears..and most of all..the way their relationship matured by JUST talking..!!

Now I can't WAITTT for the next update..!! SO update soon'!!! =D Varna I might resume to blackmail..u know how..

Muhuhaahahahahahaha ' Barney Style..!!!

 

Oh'And I hope you understood all my blabber!!!


I agree to all of the above.

Secondly, OH MY GOD Sanaa that was freakishly LONGG :D

You love Barney too???? Yay <3 He's legen...wait for it...dary :D

And TVD rocks too although Season 2 hasn't yet made an appearance in India :P Do you also see 90210? Uska bhi Season 3 nahi aaya :P Do you watch Bones too? And Two and a Half men? :D Haha it sounds like I watch too much tv but the thing is that these shows are never on simultaneously [and thank God for that] so it's good :D

I will get back to my OS writing now lest Shrutika should murder me LOL

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I knoww..!! I never knew i could type so much!!! especially when i was soo short of tym!!!  Yeahhh.. i loveee Barney..but sadly like Shru said..He's gay in reall ife..!! Really broke my heart it did..!! =(...however...doesn't stop me loving his character..!! hahaha..NAILED IT!!!
 
I watch TVD and 90210 online..!!! And now s3 of 90210 finished too..!!! PLEASSSEEE tell me when you catch up with TVD!!! It is AMAZING!!! ARe you stelena or Delena?? In season 1 i was Stelena..and i strongly believe in first love..but season 2 i just couldn't help but fallin love with Damon!! So you HAVEEE to watch season 2!!! Quick..!!!
 
NO i don't watch Bones of Two and  Half men..though i've heard of them..probably will start once my exams are over..!! ahhh can't WAIT for that blissful time where no one can bother me..and i can watch whatever i want to in peace..!!  *sigh*
 
Jaldi get back to ur OS writing..!! I'm waiting..!!! Big smileLOL

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
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Shrutikaaa :D The update was frikkin' fabulous!!!! Why do you do this to me??? Now I have to give a long comment on every installment!!! Meanie :P

Aww the whole thing like all your updates was uber-cute <3 I fell in love with Munchkin and Peanuts all over again! :)

I love the beginning when there's the news about the interview! Armaan is so supportive and all! :D
Oh and the BOX :) It has so much about their past! I loved reading about it! Btw all those movies and books mentioned in there are your choices? Coz I love them all too :) Especially Sidney Sheldon and stuff <3 

Haha she's telling him names of her soft toys? Pssht. She's so cute! Just out of curiosity, do you name your toys too? :O  LMAO Po*n magazines under bed linen?? Ahahahaha I could TOTALLY imagine Armaan making all those cute faces <3 Haayeee I LOVE him <3 <3 <3

And the personal diaries!!! That whole thing she said about Armaan being the one she wants to grow old with was totally Munchkin at her romantic best <3 :) I loved this whole bit to bits ;) -

"Armaan you're the only one who knows this. Because its with you that I want to spend my life with, grow old with, have babies with. And I'm not going to tell anyone else about this either! Its stupid, I know, not to mention incredibly far-fetched. But if there's anything I've dreamed about, its this!" I said earnestly and saw his smile falter. "I know you seem to think that I'm not sure of our relationship and that's why I'm still not referring to us as 'engaged', and I can't do anything about it. But, I do have dreams which I've woven since I was a child. Only difference, now I know who I want to be with to make all those come true." I gave him a small smile before turning back to the box and pulling out some other things.

 

I felt his hand on mine and turned to him, avoiding his eyes. He pulled me closer to him, soon pulling me on his lap and cupped my face, making me look at him.

 

"I won't lie to you Riddhima, but that was exactly what I thought. That you refused to wear the ring because you didn't trust our relationship." He said seriously. I sighed. "But now I can see what you meant. You're not unsure of our relationship. I can see that surety in your eyes. You're just that kind of a person aren't you?!" He was speaking more to himself than me. I knew that. But his gaze was still stuck on mine. "You always look for an adventure in everything. Something new to experience in everything that happens?" He was stating it but I nodded in affirmation to tell him he was right. "When I saw you for the first time after 9 years, at the beach, I thought I saw my 9-year-old best friend in your eyes!" He said softly, his breath kissing my face. I smiled at him as he said that. "And then, I found out it was you after all!" He smiled, his dimples showing. "Riddhima, that time, those first few initial days, I saw something in your eyes'." I looked at him questioningly. "Like you were looking for something. Like you were looking for a part of yourself, like you were looking for an adventure'I could understand your anxiety and excitement, but I couldn't understand why you were so hell bent on finding yourself a fairy-tale. But then, I realized that you indeed were still that 9-year-old girl who used to run behind me when I ran away with her book of fairy-tales. You're still that person! One curious little soul aren't you?" He grinned. I laughed with him. "I have to ask two things'" He continued. I looked at him expectantly. "Is that why you want to go slow in this relationship? Are you looking for some stupid, incredibly romantic fairy-tale in this as well?" He asked inquisitively.

 

I nodded and smiled. "Yes, I am! Because our love-story's been nothing short of a fairy-tale has it?" I asked winking at him. He shook his head, seconding my thoughts. "Next question?" I asked expectantly. He took a deep breath before continuing.

 

"Did you find what you were looking for?" He asked. I frowned, confused. "When you came to Cali. Did you find what you were looking for? Did you find your adventure? That part of you that you were looking for? Did you find your dream?" He asked me, his eyes boring into mine. I smiled looking at how desperate he was for the answers.

 

"Yeah..I did'I found my adventure. And as for my dream and that part of me I was looking for, well I'm looking at it right now!" I put my hands around his neck, snuggling closer to him, but not breaking our eye contact. I saw his dimples deepen.

 

He leaned in and captured my lips. His arms tightened their grip around me, pulling me closer to him, if that was possible. I ruffled his hair, suddenly overwhelmed at the passion bursting in my heart. Need of breath finally pulled us apart.

 

"Any more questions?" I asked, grinning at him. He shook his head, his dimples deepening.

 

"I feel like I know you a 100 times better than I did 10 minutes ago!" He laughed pulling me into a warm embrace. Sighing peacefully, I rested my head on his shoulder, hiding my head in his neck.

 

"Armaan?" I whispered.

 

"Hmm?" He replied.

 

"I love you!" I whispered, rubbing my nose along the side of his neck.

 

"I love you too Munchkin!" I could hear the smile in his voice. I felt him place a kiss on the top of my head. I looked back up at him, and blushed at how much I had revealed, or rather, how much he had revealed about myself in the last few minutes. Disentangling myself from him, I plopped back onto the floor, too embarrassed to say anything.


Ahahaha the baby pictures??? Awww <3 Someone please show me baby pictures of KSG! I bet he was super cute back then too! :D 


Aww so that was the mystery about Aakash? :( I feel bad for Riddhima...it's sad that she lost him so early! But I love how Armaan handled her :) Like I said, PERFECT boyfriend! And even though you JUST told us about Krish, I already liked him too! I wish we'd got some more of him in this FF :) 


All in all, I ADORED the update! :) It had EVERYTHING! Hehe I'm sure Armaan will make Riddhima break that kissing rule LOL


Continue super soon <3


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You have to give long comments on everything! LOL


All those book choices - all me! Big fan! Especially Sheldon and Jeffrey Archer! And I adore Harry Potter! I've read the entire series 8 times! Can't wait till July 15 for the final installment of the 7th movie! Eeps! 

Uh yes, embarrassing fact, but yes I do name my soft toys! In fact Baby Ele, Mr. Cuddly Heart, Bunny and Hugsie are my actual soft toys! The description is of my soft toys, I actually own them! LOL

And the personal diaries is my funda too! I actually plan on doing that! 

I told you, Riddhima's my carbon copy! She's like my clone! So everything she does in this story, I do in real life! A lot more will be revealed ahead, so be on the look out! You'll get to know ME better! Big smile


The emboldened parts in what you quoted from my chapter are all my favorites! From the entire chapter! But sadly no one's commented on that till now! Confused

And about Krish, I'll try putting in a few flashbacks! But I doubt it'll happen!

I'm done embarrassing myself with all my secret-revealing! I'm off now! LOL

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Hiii Shruu!!! A very looonngg overdue comment..!!! I really have no idea what to write!!! This part was so'so FAB that I honestly have no clue where to start!!!

Coming to the previous chapter..I knew Riddhima would definitely run back to Armaan..Wink..but I didn't know u meant LITERALLY run back to him!!! LOLXX!!! So while I was reading that part'and Armaan's hilarious reactions..

"Why are you huffing?"

Cracked me up'Why else would someone be huffing you complete moron??!! LOL But it was SOOO adorable..!! I ADORED THIS scene the most in the whole of AWOTB..though I think RIddhima being Romeo..and the confession..Armaan's side of the story..and the date are very close seconds and thirds...!! I nearly forgot the whole Armaan pulling Ridz behind..That was realll cute to..!! And Andrea's

"You can have him!"  cracked me up too..i wouldn't give in so easily..!! It's ARMAAN woman!!!!Shocked

 

But the airport hug conquered them all so far'!!! It was sooo adorable..and so filmy..yet I could sooo imagine it happening..!!! Her running up to him..and Armaan fisting in the air..saying

"I knew it!!"

and then their hug and Public display of affection!!! It just reminded me of those high school days when exams were not even close..and couples were around everywhere..with the head of secondary running around shouting.. "No PDA in school!! My office..NOW!"..Lolx..she was HILARIOUS!! Then obviously the whole class would grin and give the couple a thumbs up sign or a wink..in the sense.. "lagey raho..we love seeing her irritated! " coz she really was despised by most of us!!  So while I was reading that bit..i was thinking to myself..awwhh wish this happened in skul!! I'd love to see her reaction!!   

And then the..

"Hmmm..i was thinking of a hotter chic sharing my room"

And I thought..Yeah right Armaan i really believe you..even though Riddhima totally does deserved that for being such a slow coach!! But finally she saw sense and better late than never right??Clap

So That brings us to THIS update..!! I really LOVE the way you started it off..!!! It seems so casual..and they actually were behaving like they were married..poor Armaan doing the hardwork while she sat around and instructed him..I was like..Yepp..You go girl!! Lets boss the guys around!! And then I thought to myself..But it's Armaan!!!! He's AWESUMM!!!! And I completely changed sides then..!!

I LOOVVEEE your writing skills!!! Did I mention that before?? I simply ADOREEE them!!! It's sooo awesum the way you interest every reader in what they're doing..THEN describe the apartment in the most casual way ever..!!!

"I smiled looking around the small apartment"

And thats when a person would really want to know what the apartment was like and you described it so well..i actually now have a perfect picture in my head..!!!

Then there's Riddhima's ground Rules..!!! AWESOMEEE!!!!  I believe you when you say it was her innocent fun..!! It was honestly cute..and the bickering between them'And Riddhima's smart!!! Silent treatment is the only way to get guys to stop behaving like JERKS sometyms..!! Hahaha..i should know..I have done it a million tyms to my best guy friend..!!

 

And then's Armaan's set of rules..!! SHOOO SHWEETT!!! But I could see that one coming..!! Though part of me wished he had demanded more..just to get his own back at her...!! But he really is a sweetheart...if I were there he probably wouldn't even have needed that rule..!! Day Dreaming

Love the way he's the first person to know about the deepest feelings inside her..and the po*no mags bit..ooopsss!! *sigh*..He's a GUY after all!!  And then going through their past was also freaking AMAZING!!! I could really put myself in Riddhima's position..(except the soft toys bit and horror movies..I was actually scared of them when I was young!!!  But now I find them so adorable except at nights..blame stupid toy horror movies for that!! Lolxx..) and SRK movie collection..ROCK ON girl!! I'm a die hard SRK fan..!!! Salman Khan..not too much..partly coz I adore SRK so much theres no space for any other actor in the Indian Cinema..!! Except Shahid Kapoor..I like him like 20% then Imran Kahn 3% and Ranbir 2%..but SRK 75%!!! Then on small screen there's 90% KSG!! Hayyeee.. I think 10% divides between Harshad Chopra (Prem in KDMHMD - I actually liked him quite a bit..!! Even in tere liye) and the new guy in Navya..I'm getting really attachted to that show!! and in Hollywood..Ian Somerhaulder  99%.. he plays Damon in TVD (DO you watch The Vampire Diaries??!! It's AMAZING!! you shouldd!! His character reminds me sooo much of Armaan!!)

But like riddhima I adore my mystery novels..and romance novels..And I couldn't help but awww when Riddhima said she plans giving her diaries to her daughter.!! Then I laughed along with Armaan as well'LOL but then it's so adorable the way she's already pictured his life with him..!!! And I love how he understands her..I can empathise with Riddhima when it comes to looking for adventure..I mean..who'd want a boring life..I personally look for adventure wherever I go too..and now I've woven all sorts of dreams for my uni life..I don't know what to expect but it's like this big new thing that I can't wait to try..!!  

Plus.. I love the way she can now tell him about the deepest secrets like the Krissh incident...!! I felt sooo awful for her..!!! And I love the way he's there for her throughout the tym she's split her heart out..!!  He's the best boyfriend a girl could get..!! Although that Andrea prank raises many questions..!! But I don't care..!! It's Armaaan!!!!

I was back to LMAO at the last line..

"And as it was, Armaan 'Peanuts' Mallik was back. We were back to square one."

You ended this part perfectly..!! It had everything..Comedy, Nostalgia, Memories, (for me personally too!!) excitement, tears..and most of all..the way their relationship matured by JUST talking..!!

Now I can't WAITTT for the next update..!! SO update soon'!!! =D Varna I might resume to blackmail..u know how..

Muhuhaahahahahahaha ' Barney Style..!!!

 

Oh'And I hope you understood all my blabber!!!


Sanaa!! I was so WAITING for your comment! But I thought I would see it only after your exams get over! But you still managed! And such a long one too!

Okay, so read the emboldened part, in sequence, I've replied to them individually in separate paragraphs! Big smile

Lol, Andrea's 'You can have him...' cracked me up too when I was writing it! But Armaan's really tested her patience till now! LOL


And yes, that was the idea...Riddhima's going to be doing a lot of bossing around as usual! But that's a normal girl thing isn't it? Make Armaan do all the work! LOL

And okay, thank you for that! Seriously! Lately I'm having doubts, but your comment on that really did cheer me up! My writing skills are probably too pressurized because of stupid studies! But when I feel like writing I think it comes out fine! Embarrassed
So I'm going to do that now! Write when I'm in the mood and not when I have the time! It works better for me I guess! Thanks San! Hug

Oh yeah, silent treatment kills them doesn't it? I've tried it too, and it just bothered my best friend so much he was like what happened, why you ignoring me? ROFL

By those scary toy horror movies I bet you mean Child's Play Series! Chucky the doll, killing people! LOL
It used to be scary! I wasn't able to look at my dolls for days! My sister actually tied my life-sized doll with my Dad's belt once! And tossed her out into the living room! My Mum was like what the hell did you do? My sister's elder to me, but she's more of scared cat than me! LOL

I have 50% KSG now and another 50% for Nathan Fillion who plays Castle! LOL And I love Ian Harding, who plays Ezra Fitz in Pretty Little Liars! Big smile
But if you ask me overall, KSG beats all of them in my favorites list! 
No I don't watch Vampire Diaries, because I already watch a lot, and its already way distracting! I plan on starting it when my exams get over in November! I have 6 months to kill! LOL

And about how Armaan understands Riddhima, I actually expected a lot of comments on that particular extract, where he describes her! It was my personal favorite, because it tells us how Riddhima is! But not many people got to that! But anyway, yes, I myself am that kind of person! Riddhima's a carbon copy of me, so I guess you guys know me very well now as well! Embarrassed

Yes, the whole engagement prank raises a lot of questions, but at the end of the day, he had done it for Riddhima's love only! He did it so she realizes and he succeeded didn't he?

I hope their relationship matured! I tried showing that! Thanks for commenting on that! 


I <3 Barney! But he's gay in real life! Cry Sad! Confused
 
I know Shru I managed!! I'm so proud of myself..!!! i was sooo surprised ..everything was in my head that i was just waiting to spill to you!!!!  and never thought it would come out THIS Long..!!!
 
Yeah..My best friend went on a record to call me boring once when i gave him silent treatment..!!! And he made it SOO much worse ofr himself..it really did continue for like a week!!! LOL which resulted in me forgiving him after a million sorrys!!! LOL
 
Yeahh..I honestly do feel REALLY bad for Andrea..!! I'd HATE to be in her place..ie be with someone..have feelings for them..but KNOW they love someone else..!! It would kill!! Esp if the person is Armaan!! Somehow..as much as I loooveee Armaan..he really wasn't fair to her...I think you should show..even in ONE paragraph be it..what happens to Andrea and Sid coz they did play quite a major role..!! That's my way of saying..i think it'd be GREAT if they got together..!! lolxx..but it's totally up to you!!!
 
Hahahahaha..yeah i guess we know you very well.!! probably you know me too...because in the second season of LOOC every action Riddhima took was probably what I would have done..!!! That includes forgiving Armaan for God knows what all he did..!! I can't help but whenever i write I have to put part of me into the character..ESP my OS Love at first sight...that was TOTALLY me..!! lolxx..
 
I'm not sure which toy movie it was..but it definitley was about Toys coming alive at night..plus i have a very superstitious Gandmother who scared us into not sleeping with soft toys..LOL..(don't get me wrong..She's AMAZINGGG!!! just veryyy superstitious..lolxx) I remember watching 'the exorcist' when i was much younger..I could honestly not sleep at all in my own bed!!! Have you watched it..!! ooohhh..The one with the girl being possessed?? Not pleasant!!
 
that's enough of my rambling about scary movies..!! And yeahh..Barney's gay..!! but do you watch 90210..I really really really really like Liam in that!!! And Naveed..!!! Naveed is such a sweetheart!!

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