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A Walk On The Beach...#4|Link to Thread#5: Page 1 (Page 19)

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
congrats for the new thread...amazing part im glad you didnt end it...i love ridhmmas rules and armaans reaction to each one of them...i was hoping he would suprise ridmma with his own set of long rules which he did... which was short and sweet...plzzz add me to you pm/buddy list when u continue next...and update soon

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
great part!

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by armaania13

I come back after a weekend trip with my friends, and see another Thread for AWOTB and an Update!!!

And what an Update!!!
Simply ADORABLE!!!
LOVED IT!!!
Shru, I dont think I have words left anymore..
This FF just keeps getting better with every update!!!

Riddhima and her numberous rules  versus Armaan and his one rule!!!
Can I have this Armaan pleashhh??????????!!! He is just tooo cute!!!

My favorite part::

Rule 4) Only Good Morning and Good Night kisses will be permitted. No making out before dinner. No exceptions." He read. He looked at me with an expression of part disbelief, part amusement, part smiling. "You're giving timings for kissing, making out?" He confirmed. I nodded.

 

"Its essential we have rules for this! And oh, there's another clause in that rule." I pointed to the end of the paper again.

 

"Nothing below neck region?" He asked in disbelief.

 

"So we don't go overboard!" I nodded and grinned.

 

"Yeah, in this case, we'll see how much you follow this rule, and oh, this clause as well!" He smirked cheekily, rolling his eyes. I had no idea what he meant.



and of course this one too big time:
There's just one rule!" He thought for a moment and said. I looked at him questioningly. "You're not allowed to leave me or stop loving me!" He encircled me by my waist, pulling me on his lap and kissed my cheek.

 

I hope you can update soon again!!!



Thank you for managing a long comment even on such a short installment! Hug

But honestly and seriously, was it that good, because I haven't given my 100% to this one! Confused

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Awesome part... Wonder how armaan would manage all the rules... Waiting to read more update soon...

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Omg, such an adorable installment!!! They moved in togetherr!! How cute! :D And goshh, Riddhima and her rules!! Lmao all of them were hilarious and cute at the same time!<3
Especially the one where Armaan can't flirt with other girls and if he does, he gets kicked out of the house!! bahaha Love it! Poor Armaan and I know he will follow all of them rules except ahem you know which one ;)
Anyway, wuvvved the update Shru! Continue sooon pwease :)

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Simmy003

Omg, such an adorable installment!!! They moved in togetherr!! How cute! :D And goshh, Riddhima and her rules!! Lmao all of them were hilarious and cute at the same time!<3
Especially the one where Armaan can't flirt with other girls and if he does, he gets kicked out of the house!! bahaha Love it! Poor Armaan and I know he will follow all of them rules except ahem you know which one ;)
Anyway, wuvvved the update Shru! Continue sooon pwease :)


Thanks! Big smile

And update na!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RIGHT NOW! Like NOW NOW! Angry I'll do morcha-bandi on your thread otherwise! Angry

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by Simmy003

Omg, such an adorable installment!!! They moved in togetherr!! How cute! :D And goshh, Riddhima and her rules!! Lmao all of them were hilarious and cute at the same time!<3
Especially the one where Armaan can't flirt with other girls and if he does, he gets kicked out of the house!! bahaha Love it! Poor Armaan and I know he will follow all of them rules except ahem you know which one ;)
Anyway, wuvvved the update Shru! Continue sooon pwease :)


Thanks! Big smile

And update na!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RIGHT NOW! Like NOW NOW! Angry I'll do morcha-bandi on your thread otherwise! Angry
Areeey, I can't update right now now, but I'll try and write sooon, patience my child patience :P

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by armaania13

I come back after a weekend trip with my friends, and see another Thread for AWOTB and an Update!!!

And what an Update!!!
Simply ADORABLE!!!
LOVED IT!!!
Shru, I dont think I have words left anymore..
This FF just keeps getting better with every update!!!

Riddhima and her numberous rules  versus Armaan and his one rule!!!
Can I have this Armaan pleashhh??????????!!! He is just tooo cute!!!

My favorite part::

Rule 4) Only Good Morning and Good Night kisses will be permitted. No making out before dinner. No exceptions." He read. He looked at me with an expression of part disbelief, part amusement, part smiling. "You're giving timings for kissing, making out?" He confirmed. I nodded.

 

"Its essential we have rules for this! And oh, there's another clause in that rule." I pointed to the end of the paper again.

 

"Nothing below neck region?" He asked in disbelief.

 

"So we don't go overboard!" I nodded and grinned.

 

"Yeah, in this case, we'll see how much you follow this rule, and oh, this clause as well!" He smirked cheekily, rolling his eyes. I had no idea what he meant.



and of course this one too big time:
There's just one rule!" He thought for a moment and said. I looked at him questioningly. "You're not allowed to leave me or stop loving me!" He encircled me by my waist, pulling me on his lap and kissed my cheek.

 

I hope you can update soon again!!!



Thank you for managing a long comment even on such a short installment! Hug

But honestly and seriously, was it that good, because I haven't given my 100% to this one! Confused


You know Shru, this is something I noticed -- everytime you say you feel that you didnt give your 100% or you feel that the update isnt good enough, I just find that I have found those updates SIMPLY FANTASTIC!
And I know that a lot of the other readers share my views on those updates!!!

I just love the way you weave these situations into the story and with so much humor and those specially adorable romantic scenes between AR!!  They just leave you with such a warm fuzzy feeling!!!



Edited by armaania13 - 19 May 2011 at 2:59pm

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