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immayurfan Goldie

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
Nice part
Continue soon

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sejal719 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
nice part plz write more soon.. and i hope everything goes well with nikki and abhi :).. thnx for the pm 

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roshni_A Goldie

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
wow..that part is awesome...u dealt with so many issues at a short part...spyche of boys and girls at diffrent stage of relationship  are beutifully wriotten by u thrugh this four character.
"Its not about the legal tags Riddhima. Its way more than that! And I assumed you would know that better than me since you were the one who refused to wear your engagement ring until you were ready. You were the one who said it changes things! If engagement changes stuff, then obviously marriages would make things entirely different!"
i like this part when Armaan strait way made her saw the things . Its not really about taunting but sometime its better to put starit that beating around the bush.
Well with every episode I think ridzy is very confused. Its not about her lovbing Armaan but taking every new stape in their life. Its quite weired that she needs extarnal help eachtime there is a big step to come.  She hav to be strong  to take matter on herself .  Its not always that external help produce positive result.  Because other peopls really don't know whats eactly going on as ech people hav diffrent prospective. She hav to understand that life will not procure everything to her in a plate already decorated. Its bound to get her in trouble. And I am already feeling the strom coming.. but pls make it go past soon...

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..Maitree.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Okay I can't find my Res So I'm writing a Whole NEW Comment For Ya ( And Oooh,had to add this, I was reading AWOTB again from the start yesterday :D That'll be my third time of reading it from the start :D)
Part 32(a) : I ADORED the Flashbacks, Really. The first one was Uber-Cute, the way he tried to melt her with his sugar-sweet voice and Dimples,LMAAAO Riddhima,You are So Honest to yourself man! So True this was!
His dimples were pathetically, annoyingly cute!
So True,Darlings! Armaan's DIMPLESS! Hayyye! Okay Okay Dun glare I'm coming back from my dreamland :P :D  What attitude she showed during the whole journey :D Awwwh He had held on her hand ever since she fell asleep? HOW ADORABLE! Awww Armaan,ILY! EEKS I LOVED Riddhima's fantasies! Effiel Tower one is So Cute! And the way Armaan told her all the ones Was So So So So ARMAAN! <3
"By the way darling, my favorite fantasy was the French Kiss on Eiffel Tower at Sunset. I love French kisses, I love sunset and the most important thing, I love you!" He said cheekily, his hand grazing my cheek. I shut my eyes tight and felt blood rush up to my cheeks. I heard him laugh at my embarrassed state and groaned. "But actually, nah, I love all of them. Its hard to choose! The dream Condo in Hollywood. Our own personal and private yacht. And oh, the 'ahem' on a beach in Miami. It really is hard to choose!" He guffawed while I cursed him with choicest of abuses under my breath. "I promise I'll make it all come true." He said softly. I looked at him and saw a soft smile playing on his lips. Knowing him, I knew he would.
Aah! This Paragraph made me Grin like Crazy! So AR! I miss My AR now! And Btw,Shru,Just Random...I LOVE your Dp on that PM account :D
"Armaan, you met me when I was barely a year old!"
Haahahahaha ROFL This made me Laugh like Crazy Because I was imagining Armaan being LESS than one year Old and An angry Choti si Riddhima :P Yeah,I know...God bless my Imagination :D
I loved how he showed her Around the Rooms,And then he made her understand he had done all of it For HER! That was One Thing,that was So Adorable <3 Aww he had saved his money for the camera? He is  Such a sweeto to spent it for Riddhima! He SO loves her! Tee-Hee the way he was like,"Will you kiss me crazy?" I was Blushing like Crazy! Seriously,Shru..You should consider opening Writing Classes for Me,You're SO DAMN GOOD!  I ADORED This Update <3
Part 32(b) : I loved how you brought out Riddhima's feelings out here! She thought WHAT? She thought he would ever Think That she was a Mistake to him? I got shocked to read that! But heehee,the part where she said He was HOT,I was Grinning,as if she'd told me that! LMAFAO ROFL Awesome Installments Shru! Awh she hasn't told him about the asking out thingy? Can't wait to know what will happen! LMAAAO Armaan's line ending made me ROFL
Honestly,you're making me Fall for AWOTB harder! I'm loving this story MORE by every passing..Er,UPDATE! God seriously did a very good job to make u Sick ROFL Okay jokes aside, Take Care! And Update Soon!

Edited by ..Maitree.. - 24 July 2011 at 1:29am

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ksg_ritika Goldie

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
awesum part ... loved it ... niki's insecurities are ri8 at her place ... bt wat riddhima said is also ri8 ..."guys dont like being accused of sumthing "...

thanx 4 d pm n continue soon ...


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Rumz_12 Senior Member

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 12:39am | IP Logged
just one word shru.amazing!!!. luvd everything. i got it now why riddhima feels not to wear the ring. amazing one. hope armaan understands her and stops taunting her. well the last part was scary. why are they so different after the trip to far away. plzzz update soon. i knw its difficult for u but plz update soon. and feel sorry for nikki. how i wish men would understand girls *sigh*

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Jenniferfan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
amazing part
loved it!!!!!!

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anshara Senior Member

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 1:48am | IP Logged
hey nice part  luv it
cont soon nd thanks 4 pm

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